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Posted: 11 years ago
What an update!! ☺️❤️
I want more although it was longer than you've ever written! 😭
This update reminds me of Through the Monsoon a little but is even better because of the setting. 😆
I'm dying for the next update!! Please update soon.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Loved it, cannot get enough of reading thiss ff. pls update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
Caught up late :(

Its awesme😃

Zoya is hillarious😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wow...this update is really cute!
Zoya's lame reasons🤣
Asad's bitter black coffee😆
Zoya kissed him and he caught her😉
update soon...😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: -Mrinalini-

Zoya is hilarious! 🤣

Brilliant Update! 👏 Zoya kissed Asad! 😳

Waiting to see how Asad reacts and the meeting with Mr. Bhatava- whatever! 😆

Continue soon!

Love,

Mrina



Oops haha wasn't exactly planning on continuing the meeting with DB, but chalo theek hai, one more scene wouldn't hurt :p Glad you liked it!! (:
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: asyafreva

aawwnnn... super cutee update...!! nd yea good advice u've given at d end...! 👍🏼

bt overall d update was aawweessooommee 🥳... d convo between zoya nd dolly where zoya tries to reason her stance 😆... then dolly as to y she doesnt want to w8 outside 🤪... nd asad's expressions wen dolly asks zoya that she told Mr. Bhata.. well watever his name is dat she had sm female problems 🤣... asad all red... ☺️ haha... 🤣 i mean how embarrasing 🤪... in a female washroom nd on top of dat girly talks... poor asad..!! 🤣 🤣
nd d kisss aaawwwnnn..!!!!!!!! 😳 i dont noe y bt m getting a feeling dat asad is surely gonna tease zoya on dat kiss..!!! 😳

bt d most romantic scene was: ❤️

"Haan, toh maine yeh kaha tha, ke aap yahan teen hafte se kaam kar rahi ho..." Asad began to explain, leaning his head into Zoya's. He tucked an errant strand of hair behind her ear, and then let his fingers linger there. He moved his head even closer, letting his lips brush her ear as he whispered into it. Zoya turned all shades of red, as she tried to concentrate on his words and not his actions."

so basically i luved d entire update to d coreee...!!! 🤗


aashka



Hahaha glad you liked my advice Aashka :p And glad you liked the update as well (:
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: anushreemishra

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Yay yay yay my green is back with an update🥳Oh man as i said you make my day brighter nd my smile wider and although it was quite aneventful day for me today you did manage to make it better😳😳😳
What a lovely update green😳😳So funny and sweet...you are truly the queen of "romcom"😃😃and it was truly a very very long update by your standard and that was icing on this yummy funny cake😆😆
Awww asad holding zoya's waist,zoya resting against his chest,asad's fingers on her lips and them standing so close in a small sa bathroon😳😳😳can things get any hotter☺️☺️
"Haan! Woh mein andar jhoot bola tha. Kyun ki... telling someone that you've got diarrhoea is so embarrassing! I mean, what would the person think... or imagine for that matter! Isliye I lied and said female problems,
🤣🤣🤣Oh man zoya nd her excuses...they are epic...bechari Dolly must be thinking ki kaisi ladki se pala pada hai😆😆😆asad miyan khoob enjoy kar rahe hain ye sab😆😆"Telling a stranger you've got diarrhoea is more embarrassing than telling him you've got female problems...?"
Good question dolly ji😆😆😆Lol who cares about logic in QH land...did u try to bring that here too?😆😆
I loved zoya's rant about Asad...bechara kitni taarif sunni padi usko😆😆
Dolly's confession was so sweet,innocent and funny...bechari😆😆😆
Wow ye zoya bahut smart hai asking dolly to open the water tap so that she won't feel embarrssed brilliant👏👏
So Mr.asad miyan could have just shown zoya the phone but he decided to tell her the other way😳😳😳I am glad he did😳😳
Awww he tuck a hair of strand behind her ear?😳😳😳oh tell me honestly kya ye last episode dekhne ke baad add kiya?😳😳
Mr.khan kafi naughty ho gaye hain...brushing his lips near her ears☺️☺️zoya returns teh favour😳😳😳but oh wait zoya to Mr.khan se ek step aage nikli😳😳
did she just kiss Mr.khan?😲😲😲woa woa i wan't expecting that at all but what an unexpected plesant surprise😳😳😳
Asad miyan the pink makes me blush red😳😳😳
Aap nahi jaanti ki iss unexpected kiss ne hume kitna khush kar diya...waise was this always the plan or did you just want to surprise the readers since no one actually expected a kiss 😆😆😆
Love ya loads meri green❤️❤️



Haha Zoya's logic has always been strange from the beginning, so that's what I brought forth here too :p Haha and yes! Last episode mein kitne sweet tareeke se Asad ne Zoya ka baal theek kiya tha, I had to add it in here (: I wasn't planning on putting in the kiss yet actually, but then I thought, I teased you guys mercilessly in TTM, didn;t wanna be so cruel again :p Glad you liked it!! (:
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: QueenOfMyCastle

what an amazing update green -

You snuck in a kiss😲
And Asad😲 what a tease!!!

it was beautiful. I almost expected Asad to see that dolly was able to see their legs or whatever in the stall through the mirror, but he saw the lipstick.

Thank God the kiss did not take forever this time.



I sure did (: Yeah, pichli baar bohut tadpaya tha haha, so I decided not to be so mean this time :p Glad you liked it!! (:
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Zanutix

Your FF is amazing!

I love the way you lace it with humor!

Its all sunshine and butterflies.. and I love it!

Thank you for keeping this time frame - the April-May months. At least the Asad that I imagine has short hair, there's no Tanveer and especially no Najma-Imraan-Nikhat angle!

You conveniently leave out the SM folks! Smart you are! 😆

Oh that little kiss that Zoya gave! I was grinning so madly while reading it!

Haha! Asad! You know what's right! Couldn't let the awesome chance pass, could you?!
Ah! Asad and Zoya pressed up against each other, whispering!

And sharing embarrassing moments too!

Waiting for the next update!
Come on Mr. Bhadavdekar! Spice things up old man! 😉



Haha I'm kind of like that anyway, always looking for and sticking to things that make me happy, which is why my stories are also all sunshine and butterflies like you said :p The SM people have been pissing me off from the beginning of the show haha so I have no inspiration to write about them and so I keep them out of my stories on purpose ;p Glad you liked it!! (:
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Rarepearl

Hey this was such a cute part. just loved it. never thought that AsYa would land up in such a situation & then when Asad will have a way out other than talking to Zoe, he'll prefer to stay in close proximity of her.

aww, Zoe is so sweet. she kissed him lightly & the Lion AK is all too glad.
Zoe's convo with Dolly had me rolling. really this girl has brains.
Love.



Yeah, I wanted to do something totally unexpected and strange haha that's why I took bathroom romance to another level :p Glad you liked it!! (:

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