AsYa FF Breaking The Waves - Thread One - Chapter One to Seven

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priyanka

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Posted: 11 years ago

#821

wow amazing part
loved it but kitna small that
continue soon ...,...

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rajnid68

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Posted: 11 years ago

#822

So asad dud try to harm himself..and dilshad stopped him..

Earlier tried too..how can rashid be so unhuman...

Hope asad and dishad are strong enough to withstand his onslaught. ?

Zoya sleep walks...poor thing is mentally stressed..

Asad worried...zoya worried..about each other. ?

Too uptight and gripping an update..awesome. .

Thanks for the pm

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Gulaabo

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Posted: 11 years ago

#823

poor asad...feeling bad for him...
zoya cares for him...loves him!!!
continue soon

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Linsie

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Posted: 11 years ago

#824

Chapter 6...

Zoya already facing her depression , which asad dont no
about... but still did not say much... he can understand coz he is going
through similar problem...

Zoya dont want dilshad to know... coz she dont want to meet the doctor
again for her misery ... 😭

But she cant hide fo long... now other side weakness .. asad
witness .. Dilsahd reveal what happen... and its being
going on for 2 years... her insecure feelings are disappointment
about life.. 😲

Now asad understand... what zoya going through ... coz 😲
their in the same boat.. very interesting when dilshad compare her kids
with zoya...their should move...
'I never comlained to you and abu like she is not complaining anyone but it does hurt ami !' Asad said to her while looking into her eyes. 👏 👏

Hate rashid... 😡 😡

Dilshad save the situation 👏
Zoya still cant come to terms with what happen... 😲😭
still not leaving asad... 😭
all asad wants now... to be alone... 😲 his inner most vulnerable moment
came out in front of everyone... 😡🤢

How Asya going to find each other.. 😭

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nilusoni

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Posted: 11 years ago

#825

wow gr8 part

thanx for pm

do pm me for next part

continue soon

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Prazeena Bhattarai

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Posted: 11 years ago

#826

Picture perfect!!!
Must say!
Loved it sooo much!
Asad-zoya...poor kids!

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amruta04

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Posted: 11 years ago

#827

awesome update
loved it...do continue soon
thanks for the pm...

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-Prinky-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#828

Such a emotional & dramatic update...

Asad & Zoya both r going through the same hurt...depression...their state is so visible in ur writing...

Zoya was having a problem of sleepwalk...she feel so alone...mostly after speaking with her parents...her feelings of insecurities...so painful & lonely she feel...

what kind of father Rashid is...his son is going to kill himself & he is watching all that with no effects...so stone hearted person he is...i just hate him😡😡

Asad was also go through so much depression...& now he don't want this life...

Parents devorce affected so badly both their lifes...both needs someone who understand this hurt...

some assurance...care & love...

u portrayed this hurt...this depression so perfectly...

as always waiting for the next update...

Thankew so much for pm 😊