AsYa FF Breaking The Waves - Thread One - Chapter One to Seven

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Posted: 11 years ago

#381

Originally posted by: A.Hajnal

Anytime...🤗

That's good...nahi toh I have cried for your Italy wala Asad, now I would have cried for this Asad too...😆 Not as much as I did for Umer and still do for him...But I would have cried for this Asad...

I still can't forget it words, the last chapter and the last moment that I have read of Umer...The way he took his last his last breath, remembering Alizay and it was her vioce calling his name that he heard and died...God, The MAN that Umer Jahangir was... 😭

Yess I wish that useless fiance of Alizey would have done something but even he was too late to discuss with Umer 😡

Seriously I hate that guy, totally Chumpooo and idiot

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Posted: 11 years ago

#382

Originally posted by: vinita459

Okay my heart in sinking already...I hope this is not a very sad story 😭

Please don't kill my Asad 😭

haha yesss it is a very sad story 😭

I will try not to kill him 😆

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vinita459

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Posted: 11 years ago

#383

Looks like I will need a box of tissue while reading your updates. 😭

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: vinita459
Looks like I will need a box of tissue while reading your updates. 😭

Yesss buy some boxes for me tooo 😛

I am also very sensitive 😭

Even you won't believe me but in AsYa in Italy I cried at many scenes I wrote like the one in which he met his family after years, when he told Zoya that he is a victim, when Sameerah was abusing him after years and Dilshad believed her more then her own son, when he sat at the lake side and was waiting for Zoya 😭

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LyssaPie

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Posted: 11 years ago

#385

I love this story and you've only written 3 chapters, u rock!

Can't wait to read more

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A.Hajnal

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Posted: 11 years ago

#386

Originally posted by: Bubble007

Ughhh what have you done ?? I feel like killing you right now 😡
Why did you remind me everything 😭 I feel like crying now
Now whole story is going on in my mind, yesss he really loved her that bad.
How can he do that ??? Sometimes I wish it was better he was living in London 😕
or it was better he would have gone to london for his MBA at the end

Haha, Sorry...But you started...I have started to thinking about him again when you started This fic, nahi toh I thought I have moved on...😭

No idea...Same people just have the ability to love this selflessy...Ahh, yaa...me too...but then when I think about that, I know he would have preferred this way...making sure his Alizey was safe and sound and HAPPY, have moved on...God, My heart stops when I think how much pain he was in....Remember His phone to his friend at Alizey's engagement night, what he said to her...I have CREID really, really cried when I was reading that part...Oh, Umer...😭 God...heart aches every time I think about him...

God, sorry, I must have made you close to cry again, because I am...😭

I think its better if this time you will not make me, us cry bying giving us a sad ending...And yes, I am not palying fair, but anything for Umer and Asad...😳 LOL

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snehasya

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Posted: 11 years ago

#387

devdaas and since you have started a new ff and ts too I am recovering from my devdaas mode Italy was paaro but this ff and ts seem to be chandramukhi 😆😆😆😆

hey thanks once again for pms and update soon cant wait to read the updates

Originally posted by: Bubble007

Hehe no I understand its all because you have lived a life of bewda devdas last week 😆 But you need to comeback to reality now and enjoy this story tooo 😉

Thank God you did that, I was thinking to do something to know what is wrong with pms 😛

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vinita459

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Posted: 11 years ago

#388

Originally posted by: Bubble007

Yesss buy some boxes for me tooo😛
I am also very sensitive😭
Even you won't believe me but in AsYa in Italy I cried at many scenes I wrote like the one in which he met his family after years, when he told Zoya that he is a victim, when Sameerah was abusing him after years and Dilshad believed her more then her own son, when he sat at the lake side and was waiting for Zoya😭

Even I cried in those scenes. They were written brilliantly. Plus, I looovvve Asad tooo much, so I just can't see him in pain. But I understand you need to do this for your story.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#389

Originally posted by: LyssaPie
I love this story and you've only written 3 chapters, u rock!

Can't wait to read more

Thank You 😳

Will be updating sooon 😉

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: snehalparab

devdaas and since you have started a new ff and ts too I am recovering from my devdaas mode Italy was paaro but this ff and ts seem to be chandramukhi 😆

hey thanks once again for pms and update soon cant wait to read the updates

hehe thank God you are recovering and don't call my FF Chandermukhi 😆

I hate her 😛