AsYa FF Breaking The Waves - Thread One - Chapter One to Seven - Page 38

Originally posted by: aish-au

pillow fight waz awesome 👏

update soon

Originally posted by: aish-au

congo for being a goldie 🥳

Originally posted by: princess101

Congrats on becoming a goldie That was a amazing update thanx for the PM and update soon😃

Originally posted by: A.Hajnal

Congratulations for becoming a Goldie...!!! 🥳

Awesome up-date...I love how can find Umer Jahangir in his actions but still feel its Asad...!!! 😳 And I love how he started to make her feel that he is there, but not to take away the only people who she think as her family...and I hate how their father are so careless...Gaffu CAN'T, never can be a good father, in any fic...😆 I HATE how he told her that he forgot about her because he was busy with his other children...WOw, what a father he is...🤢

Love how she can understand that something is wrong the moment she really looks at him...I have always loved that fact about them...!!! 😳

The good thing about your fic is that you have given Asad at least his mother and his sisther other then Zoya...I mean, Umer Jahangir had no one other then his grand mother and Alizay... God, I have started to think about him again and feel sad again...!!! 😭

Originally posted by: Bubble007

Yesss you should read it 😉

haha I can imagine your condition 😛 even I cried for a week until I started a new story 😆

Yesss I will change the ending, not sure about happy ending 😆

Have you read the three chapters ?? and please make a new post on this thread its getting tooo long 😆

Originally posted by: Bubble007

Thank You 😳

Yesss I want him to have his family too because I don't want to make this story tooo sad that everyone start throwing jootasss on me 😆

Think about me, I am the one writing and its really sad for me every moment I realize that Umer dies at the end 😭

Originally posted by: A.Hajnal

I will, I will...😊

Haha, lucky you, even now, after 2 year, if I think about him, really think about him, I feel like crying because he really loved her, selflessy...he became evil and bad in her eyes, so much that she starting to doubt on the fact that he even cares about her...and he tolerated all that, and loved her so much that he sacrificed his and her love, his and her happiness, beause he knew that what she needs is a family that he can't give her...the freedom that he can't give her...he knew that even if married her, she will loss her self because he can't give her what she wants...

NAHIII...Nahiii...No, no and NO...you can't do that...I want a happy ending, at least for Asad, for Asya...plzzz think about it...

Haha, have alreay Done that...😆

Originally posted by: A.Hajnal

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2">Anytime...🤗</font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2">That's good...nahi toh I have cried for your Italy wala Asad, now I would have cried for this Asad too...😆Not as much as I did for Umer and still do for him...But I would have cried for this Asad...</font>

<font size="2"><font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">I still can't forget it words, the last chapter and the last moment that I have read of Umer...The way he took his lasthis last breath, remembering</font><font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">Alizay and it was her vioce calling his name that he heard and died...God, The MAN that</font></font>Umer Jahangir was...😭