vaada tod ke aaya hoon......

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Posted: 11 years ago
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ok basically i was disappointed with asad as he let zoya stay at that madhouse...
but still like always i wrote some lines but today from ASAD pov...
hope you like if...i wrote it in jiffy so please bear it with me😆




fir tujhse kiya apna vaada tod ke aaya hoon
fir gairo ke jaha me tujhe tanha chhod ke aaya hoon

fir vaqt ne diya hai dhokha mujhe har baar ki tarah
manjil ki dehleej se kadam fir vaapis mod ke aaya hoon

yakin kar utna hi majboor hoon main jitni ki tu bebas
bas itna farak hai ki main hausle ka naqab ood ke aaya hoon

jaanta hoon ye faasle maut se bhi badke hai tere mere liye
shayad isliye hi khud ko tere aagosh me chhod ke aaya hoon



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Posted: 11 years ago
#2

Originally posted by: sujataraje



ok basically i was disappointed with asad as he let zoya stay at that madhouse...
but still like always i wrote some lines from ASAD pov...
hope you like if...i wrote it in jiffy so please bear it with me😆




<font size="4">fir tujhse kiya apna vaada tod ke aaya hoon</font>
<font size="4">fir gairo ke jaha me tujhe tanha chhod ke aaya hoon</font>

<font size="4">fir vaqt ne diya hai dhokha mujhe har baar ki tarah</font>
<font size="4">manjil ki dehleej se kadam fir vaapis mod ke aaya hoon</font>

<font size="4">yakin kar utna hi majboor hoon main jitni ki tu bebas</font>
<font size="4">bas itna farak hai ki main hausle ka naqab ood ke aaya hoon</font>

<font size="4">jaanta hoon ye faasle maut se bhi badke hai tere mere liye</font>
<font size="4">shayad isliye hi khud ko tere aagosh me chhod ke aaya hoon</font>



awesome di, loved it.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Ek taraf Shit hai, hai aur ek taraf aap🤗..beautiful. .
Did u resume watching Suja?
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Posted: 11 years ago
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You write beautifully. 👏
Thanks to this track as we are able to get beautiful verses bcz of it.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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And congrats on becoming Sizzler.👏
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Originally posted by: starsinmyeyes

Ek taraf Shit hai, hai aur ek taraf aap🤗..beautiful. .

Did u resume watching Suja?

shru my darling sistah 🤗
how are you????😳thnks...
and teri judai me pagal huyi hoon par itni bhi nahi ki QH dekhna shuru kar doon😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
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You are amazing di👏
I was disappointed too
these lines were just beautiful😳
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Awesome n superb di :))
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: abhi.sweet

awesome di, loved it.

thnks abhi😳

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