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Bee Kay

@beekay1

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#11

Lovely... nice... would love to see this scene in the episode... Zoya giving a surprise...

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Rajeshwari

@-Raj-

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#12

heavenly os just like the title!! what beautiful writing!!

and this is your first attempt!! wonderful girl!!

it had all the elements one could ask for!!

great writing!!

hope to read more of your works:)

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akaswan

@akaswan

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#13

Awesome first OS 😊 ... hope that you will continue to write i will loved to read more 😊

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Aashka

@Chillichick

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#14

OMG...!!!!!!! LUVED IT..!LUVED IT..!LUVED IT..!LUVED IT..!LUVED IT..!LUVED IT..!LUVED IT..!LUVED IT..!LUVED IT..!LUVED IT..!LUVED IT..!LUVED IT..!LUVED IT..!LUVED IT..!LUVED IT..!LUVED IT..!LUVED IT..!LUVED IT..!LUVED IT..!LUVED IT..!LUVED IT..!LUVED IT..!LUVED IT..!LUVED IT..!LUVED IT..!LUVED IT..!LUVED IT..!LUVED IT..!LUVED IT..!LUVED IT..!LUVED IT..!LUVED IT..!LUVED IT..!LUVED IT..!LUVED IT..!LUVED IT..!LUVED IT..!LUVED IT..!LUVED IT..!LUVED IT..!LUVED IT..! ITS SOOO PUURRFECT...!!!!!!!!

luv u fr writin dis...!! desperately needed this wid d stupid ongoing track...!!!!!!! loads nd loads nd loads of luv nd hugs...!!! u r juz too good fr me too praise...!!!!!

aashka

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Mahima

@Mahima_13

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#15

Oh My God!

this was superb

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Maheerah

@maheerah_khan

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#16

Awww

That was something more than awesome...

☺️The last part made me blush really hard...☺️

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RAJ

@RAJLUVRIYA

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#17

It is awesome. No no no more than awesome. Its amazing. Love it. Asya anniversary hi. I miss my happywala asya.

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Ankita

@Violet_orchid

Navigator

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: --starstruck--
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unres

Meri anks ka first first OS?

Anks meri jaan! tumne itna time lagaya ke hum toh jaag ke aa rahe hai meri jaan 😆

kameeni apni nani ko joote padwayegi?? waise koi nai no one will throw jootas for this OS they will throw flowers toh mujhe flowers qubool hai qubool hai qubool hai 😃

Tune yeh mujhe dedicate kiya? *wipes khushi ke aasun* (waise surprise wali baat nahi thi 😆) but I'm touched!

dedication ke liye -

Zoya and shopping!!!! even i want to shop 😭 😆😆

And trust zoya to crack shayaris at such a time also 😆

yaar yeh asad miyan toh joru ke gulam banke hi rahenge! hahaha

aur yeh kya? Mantaals are incomplete without mangu kya? 😆

And asad's concern for zoya!!! uske toh kya kehne

Asad knew daaal main something is black black! and was he jealous?

Aur sohu ka ajmer wala dialogue!!
sohuuu aaj khush toh bohot hongi tum hai? 😆

SAadieee...itna bada comment!!! 😭 khushi k aansu!!

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Sadie

@--starstruck--

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: ankita26

SAadieee...itna bada comment!!! 😭 khushi k aansu!!

aur itne bade comment ka itna chotu sa reply? 😆😆

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Ankita

@Violet_orchid

Navigator

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: --starstruck--
chalo yeh bhi le leti hun! dnt want anyone to have the pleasure of being on the top 3

unres

aur tune mujhe iske liye itna wait karwaya ke main pagal ho gayi

Write more OS tumhe -

ek shayari meri taraf se

aur is ke baad jo aata hai use pata nai kya kehte hai!

waah waah bol waah waah 🤣

naaniji...ab six packs ki kasam de hi tune to likhna to padega hai!!😆

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