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@saida.m

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Posted: 11 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: McdreamyKSG
This was really AMAZING...really really great in fact!👏

You are a very talented writer..👍🏼...love your stories!❤️

Keep writing! This was lovely!😃

N'aww! Thank you!

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@saida.m

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Posted: 11 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: chibi_deea
Very beautiful! I liked the fact that even though Zoya knows how much Asad hates Gaffur and fears that he might not be ok with Siddiqui being her father, Asad is the first person she thinks about when she is hurt and the only one who can make things ok.
I loved it and thanks a lot for the pm 😊

Thank you!!😊

Ofcourse, I think that if you truly love someone, you can never think of not sharing your happiness or pain with them. All your fears can only add distance if they are not shared.

Sadly Indian shows try to do the opposite - keep the secrets burried... tsk tsk!👎🏼

I am very curious to see how Asad will actually react to the information

-Simi

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@saida.m

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Posted: 11 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: sarbrathan
That was really good. I like how you didn't paint him out to be a saint... most fanfics with the Abbu discovery put the blame solely on Razia. I hate Gaffur, Razia, Rashid and Shiren. Shiren because she's stupid and selfish. Rashid because he's a spineless cheat. And the other two are murderers. Ayaan embodies both his parents bad qualities accompanied with a hop-temper and a sense of entitlement, which makes me hate him the most. Something that I want to happen, which won't is Humira moves out of SM and joins Zoya in either NY or KV. But alas, when they find they are sisters and love each other (2-3 years from now), they will forgive Gaffur and have a happily ever after.
PS in your story, I don't get why Zoya didn't leave with Asad right there. Like in a house of murderers and Razia planning on killing Zoya, why would Asad leave her there? Personally, I don't think Nikhat's life matters.

A big 🤗for you for such a lovely comment!

Although the blood is on Razia's hands, Ghaffor is NOT a good person, and that has been established. I will be very dissappointed if they paint him to be regretful and Zoya forgives him.

He may have truly cared for his daughter, but he failed as a husband/lover (whatever he was to Zoya's mom) and definitely failed as a father, both to Zoya and Humaira!

As for my story - I felt that as much as Asad would not have her leave the house before Nikhat's wedding, I also believe that it goes against Zoya's helpful nature to go back on her word and dessert someone in need. She wouldn't have left either! Well, I think so!😊