AsYa OS: Lean on me

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Andreea

@chibi_deea

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#11

Very beautiful! I liked the fact that even though Zoya knows how much Asad hates Gaffur and fears that he might not be ok with Siddiqui being her father, Asad is the first person she thinks about when she is hurt and the only one who can make things ok.

I loved it and thanks a lot for the pm 😊

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Waqt Zaya

@WaqtZaya

Elite

+ 7

Posted: 11 years ago

#12

this one was very very very adorable! ❤️ and very supportive too. Zoya needs someone like your Asad in her life. And am Sure Asad will do the same too. :)

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sarbrathan

@sarbrathan

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#13

That was really good. I like how you didn't paint him out to be a saint... most fanfics with the Abbu discovery put the blame solely on Razia. I hate Gaffur, Razia, Rashid and Shiren. Shiren because she's stupid and selfish. Rashid because he's a spineless cheat. And the other two are murderers. Ayaan embodies both his parents bad qualities accompanied with a hop-temper and a sense of entitlement, which makes me hate him the most. Something that I want to happen, which won't is Humira moves out of SM and joins Zoya in either NY or KV. But alas, when they find they are sisters and love each other (2-3 years from now), they will forgive Gaffur and have a happily ever after.

PS in your story, I don't get why Zoya didn't leave with Asad right there. Like in a house of murderers and Razia planning on killing Zoya, why would Asad leave her there? Personally, I don't think Nikhat's life matters.

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Mehvish Fatima

@MissSparkling

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#14

wow ua writing always amezed me yar lov it 👏

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Lakshmi

@Chipmunks.

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#15

I wish the show would have been less complicated.
Written beautifully

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A.Hajnal

@A.Hajnal

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#16

That was beautifulll...so so so so so Beautifulll... 😭

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sona_naksh

@sona_naksh

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#17

awesum it is ...n just soo emotional ..

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Simi

@saida.m

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: KulfiBai
Wow. You got me all nostalgic 'cause I used to sing this song in choir in primary school :')

Great OS! Loved the way you showed the bond between AsYa, Asad's reassurance, Zoya's strength and determination. You're a great writer!

It IS a great song! You have no idea how happy it makes me to know that I can trigger emotional responses in readers! I am all giddy inside!😆

Thank you!

-Simi

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Simi

@saida.m

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: rajnid68
first of all ..ghee sakkar for your thoughts...
she called up asad ..and he was there..
he loves her and together they will find the truth.
khas...Gul bhi unhay phone karnay ki anumathi daythi..
tho kafti problems sort ho jathay..
outstanding and fabulous. ...
thanks for the pm.

I know right! How hard is it make a phone call? *shakes head*

Glad you like the story!😊

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Simi

@saida.m

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: NAVI55
This was awesome👍🏼

I loved asya's understanding of each others emotions and feelings.

Brilliantly written👏

The song brought so much beautiful memories of my school days and friends...The first song i ever learned in music class😃

TFS...Thanks for the pm

I have always thought it is funny when any show shows great love and connection between two people but fail to show them having understanding and good conversations.

I try to incorporate that factor in my stories, always.

Lean on me has many memories attached for me too!😊

-Simi