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Posted: 11 years ago
#71

Originally posted by: -HoneyBunch-

Oh Sadie!! 🤗
This has to be the most adorable OS I have ever read!! Enjoyed reading this to the core 😊 awww ayra sacchi? thank you

Loved Asad Zoya passionate moments😳 and her Besharam Ahmed Khan line😉😆 haha wanted to bring out the naughty side of Akdu 😆
Loved how Asad huffed the Grumpy cat when it disturbed their romance!😆
"Grumpy, khud toh khush nahi rehta dusro ko bhi khush nahi rehne deta."

Loved Naira and Zaid's cute fight! and also loved Daddy Ahmed Khan!!😃 Ishh thanks! i instantly fell in love with naira
Ayaan and his hideous worn-out orange pants also made into your OS🤣 honestly SOhu n i keep discussing when will he stop wearing those pants so tada 😆
And Jammy-James-Jamie part cracked me up really bad 🤣🤣 haha i had that in mind since a very long time 😆

And the bachcha party was so so adorable Naira, Zaid, Amrin, Ali and Ayra!! 😊 *My name - happy dance!* Yep i kept that name while thinking about you 🤗

Zoya and her best dialogue of this OS was 🤣🤣...
Zoya -Zaid don't eat the cat food.
Zaid - "But why can't I have the cat food?"
Zoya - "Because I didn't give birth to a cat."
Billi ki to poori tarah se lag gayi idhar! hahahhahaha i know i hate that CAT 😆

Sunday brunches at Khan Villa are super entertaining now😃
Ayaan's line was really funny!
"Ok mera ek bhai, bohot sari beheno, ek begum, ek bhabhi, badi ammi, aur..."
"Ayaan please come to the point." Asad said while pinching the bridge of his nose.

Thank you for writing this...Dil khush kar ditta 🤗
This OS was just P.E.R.F.E.C.T

thank you thank you thank you! 😃

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Posted: 11 years ago
#72

Such an amazing OS! It makes me wonder that was drunk that I did not comment before?? Or maybe that's known as the study exile that's been happening to me ever since my laptop broke down!

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Posted: 11 years ago
#73
I had THE hugest smile on my face all the while I was reading this 😃 Awesome Job Sadie! 👍🏼

Write more family based like this one 😉 I love reading them!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#74
LOOL
that was suchhh a cuteee OS
LOVED IT
omdays so shweet
happy family
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Posted: 11 years ago
#75

Originally posted by: SmileyStar

I had THE hugest smile on my face all the while I was reading this 😃 Awesome Job Sadie! 👍🏼

Write more family based like this one 😉 I love reading them!


i love reading them too fari but it's kinda difficult for me to write these stuff! i can write angst and smut faster than fluff and this! 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
#76

Originally posted by: mochhug

Res!

On my phone!
But i have to say: "Haw, Besharam Ahmed Khan"

🤣

So this is looong overdue. But seriously, when do I do things fast? 🤣 so that we are even, i replied to this comment late 😆


On to the OS

This was ridiculously sweet! I love the concept of brunch, so I was really happy that you made it he main theme of the OS. Family brunches was something I missed out on as a kid, because my parents lived in South America, and my whole extended family, in India.Aww pst pst ive never had brunch before 🤣

Asad and Zoya waking up was so cute. And seriously! "BESHARAM AHMED KHAN!" had me ROFL! Too good! haha that was just a spur of the moment! well most of the OS was 😆

And OMG GRUMPY!!! 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 That is all. I have no more words for that cat. I just love grumpy!

But I did love Asad's line about it not getting it on with anyone and therefore depriving his own sex drive! 🤣 🤣 🤣

The kids are ADORABLE!!!! I love them!!!! Exactly how I picture our beloved Asya's children to be Hayeee. Zaid's retort! 😆 Totally Zoya's kid 😆 And awww Naira is so adorable I want to eat her up! So cute!!!! NAiraaa i love her! and zaid for eating cat food! 🤣

And LMFAO Ayaan and his orange pants. Sigh. Somethings never change. I like that they are living together. I really want this to happen in the show. Them getting along. And I really liked that you DIDN'T get Dilshad back with Rashid. She deserves better than a spineless cheater like him. Oh no no i would never want that wimpid to get back with my dilu momma 😆

Najma visiting with Nikhat and Farhan and Imraan was a nice addition too. Although I hate Imraan right now, and Farhan is getting on my nerves with his suspicious behaviour, I like that you added them as the whole family of the siblings. All spineless men were shown the door in my OS 🤣

D'AWWW the baby is sooo cute! And Naira wanting to hold her reminded me of myself with my baby cousin when he was just 3 months old. God that was scary. That's when could kind of hold his head up, but still had that soft spot on the top of this head? So I was fascinated by it but had to keep reminding myself not to push it cause it was a person not a doll! 🤣 hahahha monika you are hilarious! actually ive got cousins of all ages so all my chote chote bacche keep fighting to hold an infant

AND! Naira's comment about "No I was born big!" Gosh! Your story is bringing back SOOO many memories! So I didn't know about how babies happened until I was 11. And until then, I would think the stork brought me to my parents. (I know, right? 😳) In the 6th grade, all my friends are laughing, going, you know your parents had you by having sex right? I WAS MORTIFIED!! 🤣b Oh My God i would be scandalized too 😆😆

AND 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 JAMMY!!! I loved how Zoya got so IRRITATED by that nickname!!! 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 Anyone would! 🤔 i mean the name is just so GAYYY 😆

It was a beautiful OS. So nice and light and the history was so well done. I really wish Shireen would die for real. I love that Ayaan and Humeira moved out of the SM, but that the families still get along and Ghazia is out of the picture Thank u thank u thank u 🤗

Loved it hun!!!

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Posted: 11 years ago
#77

Originally posted by: McdreamyKSG

Thanks for the PM!😊

Awww This was such a lovely story!👏
Why???? Why can this not happen in the show?😭
Loved every bit of the update...all the dialogues were so nice! I must say that you have a great sense of humor! 😃
Loved Ayan-Humeira in this a lot too❤️...and Asya were PERFECT!
Reading this story made me feel so good..😳..It has a beautiful feel to it!

Very well written.👍🏼...LOVED it!❤️


this caanot be in the show cuz such a scene will mark the end of such a beautiful show and i dont want it to end EVER! 😆

thanks for the comment! glad u liked it! 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
#78
I loved that :)
It was perfect and the picture in my head was really picture perfect
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Posted: 11 years ago
#79
This was picture perfect
Do you have a index
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Posted: 11 years ago
#80
awwiieee... chooo cuteee...❤️

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