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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: -Mrinalini-

I have to go to temple today! Update is ready! Will post once I'm back!👍🏼



Perfect

⭐️
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Posted: 11 years ago

🤗


Originally posted by: nisha150



come soon and updateee...😳


Yes i will! 😳
Edited by -Mrinalini- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago


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Posted: 11 years ago
I need 2 reserves but guess this will do

😃

This was the last and best part

One of my fav songs... Jaage jaage armaan

Wow

⭐️

It was so perfect and flawless

Oh all your updates are

It had an enchanting magical effect to it for sure

Asad: "Do you mind if I ask the beautiful lady for a dance?

Hayye... Mar jawan

Both are lost in the moment.

The song sequence was perfect

Asad: "Kya tum serial killer ho?"
Zoya: "WHAT?"
Asad: "Mujhe maarne ka iraada hai kya????"
Zoya: "Nahi to..."
Asad: "To phir itni beautiful or s... (about to say sexy) stunning lagne ka reason?"


Oh my god! Wow!

Zoya keeps the food on the table and looks around for him and suddenly she felt hot breathe on her ear.
Asad (whispers): "Mujhe dhoond rahi thi na?"
Zoya blushes on hearing Asad and turns. Asad and Zoya are very close with only a few inches between their lips...


This was so cute... And so romantic

Door Bell rings and Zoya walked to the door in her Pajamas with sleepy eyes and opened the door.
Zoya: "Bhaiya... Aaj doodh nahi chahiye!"
Asad: "Main tumhe doodh wala bhaiya lagta hoon kya?"


This was hilarious

I was laughing all the time

Asad: "I wish aisi coffee mujhe roz miley!"
Zoya lets out a laugh.
Zoya: "You can come in anytime! I would love making coffee for you!"


I love AsYa coffee scenes

They are so perfect

Asad (whispers): "I love you!"
She turned and found Asad standing really close with his chest touching her back and his gaze steady on her.
Zoya: "Asad?"
Asad: "Zoya.. I really love you.. Par agar tum..."
Zoya keeps her hand on his mouth.
Zoya: "Tum kabhi chup nahi reh sakte kya?"
Asad: "Par main.."
Zoya gives him a quick peck on his lips...


It is usually Asad who is the quiet one bit this was perfect... A sweet heart touching confession

Asad: "Agar tum aise hi chup karati rahi to main zindagi bhar bolta rahunga..."
Zoya blushes and hugs him which soon turns into a passionate one. After a few minutes they break apart.


Wow... This was intense

Zoya sat in the cabin sketching some designs for the theme decided for their new project. She was drowned in her work when she felt a soft kiss on her hair.
Zoya: "Asad!"


Office romance bhi de diya... Yay

She gently opened her eyes and saw Asad down on his knees looking up at her with a velvet box in hand.
She looked stunned, happy, surprised..
Asad: "Zoya! Will you marry me and be mine forever and ever?"


I was shouting say yes... Say yes

Asad: "From the day I laid my eyes on you, I knew It has to be You, whom I would fall head over heels in love with.
Zoya: "I did not know till a month back when Mahima had come home and given me her second set of lectures."
Asad: "Second?"
Zoya: "Yup! The first was at Chung wah.. over the phone, our first lunch together!"
Asad: "Really?"
Zoya: "Yup! But when last month she provoked me, I knew It has to be You!"


I love me...

Btw on a side track... Title well justified

Being deeply loved by someone gives you strength, while loving someone deeply gives you courage. Sometimes the heart sees what is invisible to the eye and that's when it's called, Love at First Sight!

I know you wrote this... Well justified

I love you big sista

Listening to "Jaage jaage armaan now"
Edited by MjhtFan_Mahima - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Wowowww...amazinggg😃😃

i wuld say it was perfect...👍🏼

the dance was beautifull and d song was perfect 👏👏👏

and asya wet in rain..wowww i love rainss😃

the whole prt was best , but some lines which were d bestest

1

Asad: "Kya tum serial killer ho?"

Zoya: "WHAT?"

Asad: "Mujhe maarne ka iraada hai kya????"

Zoya: "Nahi to..."

Asad: "To phir itni beautiful or s... (about to say sexy) stunning lagne ka reason?"

Zoya blushes.

2

Asad (whispers): "Mujhe dhoond rahi thi na?"

Zoya blushes on hearing Asad and turns. Asad and Zoya are very close with only a few inches between their lips...

Zoya: "Khana!"

Asad: "Khilana chahti ho?"

Zoya: "Kya?"

Asad: "Matlab! Ummm.. Let's eat!"

3

Door Bell rings and Zoya walked to the door in her Pajamas with sleepy eyes and opened the door.

Zoya: "Bhaiya... Aaj doodh nahi chahiye!"

Asad: "Main tumhe doodh wala bhaiya lagta hoon kya?"(😆😆..i laughed so hard at this)

Zoya's eyes opened up in surprise.

Zoya: "Asad! Tum!"

Asad wearing grey tracks pant and a black vest.

Asad: "Haan! Kyun?"

Zoya: "Uhh.. No! Nothing!"

Asad: "Main jogging ke liye gaya tha, so I thought I could drop by at your place and we could have a cup of coffee together! What say?"

Zoya: "Sure! Why not! Come in!"

Asad enters and plops on the couch. Zoya walks into the kitchen and makes two cups of coffee and walks out. She hands over a mug to him and sits on the sofa.

Asad takes a sip.

Asad: "Yummy coffee!"

Zoya: "Thank you."

Asad: "I wish aisi coffee mujhe roz miley!" (super wali line😛)

Zoya lets out a laugh.

Zoya: "You can come in anytime! I would love making coffee for you!"(indirect confession haan😉)

Asad looked up at her shocked at her statement. She slightly bit her tongue and rolled her eyes.

Zoya: "Uh.. I mean..."

She shrugged off nervously while Asad understood the situation and thought of finally confessing his feelings for her.

4

Asad (whispers): "I love you!"(hayeee...finalllyy he di it)

She turned and found Asad standing really close with his chest touching her back and his gaze steady on her.

Zoya: "Asad?"

Asad: "Zoya.. I really love you.. Par agar tum..."

Zoya keeps her hand on his mouth.

Zoya: "Tum kabhi chup nahi reh sakte kya?"

Asad: "Par main.."

Zoya gives him a quick peck on his lips...

Zoya: "Mujhe chup karana aata hai.."

Asad: "Agar tum aise hi chup karati rahi to main zindagi bhar bolta rahunga..."

Zoya blushes and hugs him which soon turns into a passionate one. After a few minutes they break apart.

5

Asad: "Waise aaj mujhe Audi ke showroom bhi jaana hai!"

Zoya: "Kyun?"

Asad: "Arey... Naye car ka order diya tha. Delivery lene jaana hai."

Zoya: "Really? New Car! Wo bhi Audi!"

Asad: "Tumhari favourite car hai na?" (meri bhi favourite hai audi car)

Zoya: "Haan par..."

Asad: "Ab to aapki pasand ki cheezein hi aayengi mere ghar mein..."

6

Asad: "Kya ladki ho.. Aaj maine tumhe propose kiya hai aur tum.. kaam lekar baitthi ho! You should be spending someth=ime with your boyfriend you know!" (asad miya getting angry ki unki zoya unhe attention nahi de rahi 😆)

Zoya smiled.

Asad: "Ab aise smile kya kar rahi ho?"

Zoya: "Tumne mujhe sirf I love you bola! Propose kahan kiya?"(very good question😉)

Asad: "I love you bolne ka matlab propose karna hota hai!"

Zoya: "Non sense! Proposal tab hota hai when the guy asks the girl - Will you marry me?'"

Asad: "Tum chal rahi ho ya tumhe utthakar leke jaau?" (loved this line ❤️)

Zoya giggled and got off her chair. she packed her papers and put them in her bag and shut her laptop and picked it up.

Zoya: "Chalo!"

7

Asad: "Zoya! Close your eyes!"

Zoya: "Kyun?"

Asad: "Just close them!"

Zoya: "Fine!"

Zoya closed her eyes. After a minute she heard Asad's voice.

Asad: "Open!"

She gently opened her eyes and saw Asad down on his knees looking up at her with a velvet box in hand.

She looked stunned, happy, surprised..

Asad: "Zoya! Will you marry me and be mine forever and ever?"(hayeee...loved it❤️)

Zoya smiled, then blushed and nodded in a 'yes'.

Asad smiles and opens the velvet box. He picks out the ring and gently holds her left hand in his and slides the beautiful diamond studded platinum ring on Zoya's finger.

He gets up and gently hugs Zoya. She completes the hug and holds onto him securely.

Zoya: "Shaadi kab kar rahe ho?"

Asad: "Abhi kar lete hain! It's not difficult you see!" (kar lena tha na 😆😆)

Zoya: "Okay!"

Asad looks up at her in shock as she laughs.

Asad: "From the day I laid my eyes on you, I knew It has to be You, whom I would fall head over heels in love with.

Zoya: "I did not know till a month back when Mahima had come home and given me her second set of lectures."

Asad: "Second?"

Zoya: "Yup! The first was at Chung wah.. over the phone, our first lunch together!"

Asad: "Really?"

Zoya: "Yup! But when last month she provoked me, I knew It has to be You!"

Asad smiled and gently cupped her face. His eyes gazing at her soft petal like lips. She smiled gently. He moved in closer. Her lips quivered in anticipation. He gently brushed his lips against her and gently sucked her lower lip. She responded by sucking his upper lip. Zoya's fingers fisted with his shirt and her eyes remained closed. Soon they broke apart. Zoya's eyes remained shut and a blushed rose on her cheeks.

Asad: "I love you so much Zoya!"

Her heart skipped a beat at the confession yet again. She braised herself.

Zoya: "I love you too Asad!".

She gently opened her eyes and looked at his smiling face. She quickly hid herself in his broad chest living the moment again. He wrapped his arms around her with a feeling of satisfaction.

Being deeply loved by someone gives you strength, while loving someone deeply gives you courage. Sometimes the heart sees what is invisible to the eye and that's when it's called, Love at First Sight! (very true fact dear❤️)

I guess i hav posted all most all d lines😆😆

i have written my reviews in blue😊

bt i love all d lines... loved the TS love u mina dii🤗

i have no more adjectives to express it...!!

Edited by nisha150 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Beautiful ending! I really loved how Asad confessed and proposed to Zoya, sooo romantic! And that dance...
I loved this three shot to bits!!! Sweet, cute, romantic... and totally awesome!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
Beautiful



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Posted: 11 years ago
Comments updated above

Commented from phone

❤️
Edited by MjhtFan_Mahima - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome yaar.😃
Loved his proposal to Zoya!
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wow awesome update n fab ending
Loved how they both hit it off straight away
N their flirty natures combining
The way they liked same foods was really nice touch ...
Loved his proposal n how he was always floored every time she changeds her clothes
The way he told her he knew she was the one from start gave me goosebumps ...true romance novel stuff
N finally her confession n kiss was the perfect ending
Thanks for pm really enjoyed

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