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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: mysticlover

I loved it...
Zoya learning everything she could... n I love her spirit!!
Asad is right... she'll make history! That's for sure!!
Zoe is still the same girl... Royal grandeur didn't get to her head...
But I wonder when will the problems arise because I know they will... something or someone will have to come in between!!
Will this ball prove eventful?? I don't have very good thoughts about it...



You can read between lines as always and you are right

Something will happen and that willbe around the ball

And yup the royalty didn't get to Zoya

Posted: 11 years ago
Finally unresed on page 70! 😳 And it's looong, I'm warning you! 😆
-Fari 😳 ❤️
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: -LiveLoveLaugh-

OMG, saying that this update is awe-fab-fan-some-ulous-tastic would be an understatement! 😆 IT WAS FLIPPIN' MAGICAL! 🤪 Best chapter yet, honest! 😉

Fave parts! 😉 (the parts where I was swooning at my computer screen and smiling like an idiot. 😆)
Asad holds Zoya from behind and starts pulling the reins of 'Black Beauty' to make her move.

Asad "You can stroke her mane. She won't mind you."

Zoya (Wow! Asad knew that I wanted to do this.)

Zoya "Why did she bow to me when she only bows to you?"

Asad "She bows to me and I bow down before you so you can figure the rest out I am sure."

Zoya (Asad at times says such beautiful things and that too without any attempts.)

Asad makes 'Black Beauty' take a huge leap but carefully making sure that Zoya doesn't slip.

Zoya "This is so amazing."

Asad "You'll soon be able to ride her on your own."

Zoya "She is amazing. I wonder why people think she is terrifying."

Asad "She has faced many hardships in the past. She grew without parents and for years her foot was damaged but she is a strong girl."

Zoya (OMG! Asad really has a pure heart. No wonder I got pulled towards him.)


BROWNIE THE HORSE! 😲 I LOVE IT! 😳 BROWNIE IS SUCH A CUTE NAME! AND THEN NUTTY! ❤️ OMG! AND ASYA WERE RIDING HORSES TOGETHER! OMG!
Asad "It's time for your lesson. And I won't be lenient."

Zoya "I don't mind as I am in love with my teacher."

Asad "Fortunately for you, your teacher loves his student back."

Asad "Now, let's begin."

Zoya (I am really nervous.)

Asad "Just be relaxed. I am there for you."

Zoya "I haven't done anything like this before. Not even shot a gun in a fair."

Asad "Have you played darts ever?"

Zoya "No! Not at all."

Asad "Have you ever focused at something continuously?"

Zoya "Obviously! Your eyes!"

Zoya (Asad is blushing. And he looks so cute.)

AAAH! SO CUTEEE!
Zoya holds up the arrow in the shooting position. Asad warps his arms on Zoya's arms and positions her hands correctly.

Zoya (Asad's proximity always gives me goosebumbs.)
Majorly romantic! 😉 😳
Zoya "I can't do it without you."

Asad "All you need is to just think about the target."

Zoya "But all I can think about is you."

Asad "Zoya!"

Zoya (Asad looks cuter when he fakes being angry.)

Zoya tries hitting the targets with little help and manages to usually strike between the middle and edge.

Asad "That's it for today. You were fabulous."

Zoya "And my treat?"

Asad looks here and there and after noticing that nobody is around, he kisses Zoya on her lips.

Zoya (Asad sure knows how to make my heart skip a beat.)

Haye, so sweet! ❤️
Zoya just hugged Dave in response only to pull away after Asad coughed.

Dave "I see green!"

Asad wrapped his hands around Zoya's waist to show his possessiveness.

Asad "I admit I am jealous."

Dave "Zoya is only yours and for me she is just a best friend... like a sister."

Zoya "Come on Dave! I'll show you the palace garden. It is beautiful."

Dave, Zoya and Asad walked in the gardens with Dave continuo sly teasing Zoya and Asad.
AWWW! 😃
Asad "I have always been proud of you. You released everyone but one."

Zoya (Who?)

Zoya "I don't see any bird here."

Asad "I was talking about me. You have captured me with your love. And I don't even want to be set free."

Zoya (I can't let you go even as a part of me would then be away from me.)

Asad "You are going to make history for sure. People will remember you for your bravery, kindheartedness and love."

Zoya (It feels great hearing this from Asad. It makes me feel that I can handle all of this.)
Zoya is so amazing and kind. ❤️ Like her, I believe that birds should be free and not caged. I'm SO happy that she let them go! 😳 That part was truly beautiful. 👏 👏 👏
Well, my point is that I really, really loved this update! 😆 This one and the last one are my two faves. 😉 Keep up the great work, Mahi! 👍🏼 And I'm sorry if this comment is ridiculously long. 😆
LOTS OF LOVE! 🤗 🤗
-Fari 😳 ❤️


wow.. this is a really long comment

I so love it but not more than you

The comment is not at all ridikulus

I am so glad you loved these scenes

❤️

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Posted: 11 years ago
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This update had loads of romance!!😳😳😳 Totally loved it!!

Aah!! Zoya's morning starts with seeing Asad!!😳😳

Loved Brownie and the story behind its name!! Loved Nutty too!!😃

When Henry said Asad should saddle his own horse!!😲 I first thought why such poor treatment to our Asad😲 but then when you revealed Asad rides the 'Black Beauty' which cannot be controlled by anyone else..I felt proud of our man Asad!!😉😃
Loved Zoya and Asad's ride on the 'Black Beauty'😳😳
Zoya "Why did she bow to me when she only bows to you?"
Asad "She bows to me and I bow down before you so you can figure the rest out I am sure."

And our very own Archery Classes!!😉😉😉
Liked how Asad knew when he asked about Ayaan and Zoya lied!!😆
Loved the student-teacher romance!😳😳
Asad "It's time for your lesson. And I won't be lenient."
Zoya "I don't mind as I am in love with my teacher."
Asad "Fortunately for you, your teacher loves his student back."

Asad "Have you ever focused at something continuously?"
Zoya "Obviously! Your eyes!"
Zoya (Asad is blushing. And he looks so cute.)
Asad "Zoya, it's no time for romance. I don't want that you excel in everything else and fail at mine."

Now this is what I thought would happen in Archery/Gun shoot classes!!😆
Zoya holds up the arrow in the shooting position. Asad warps his arms on Zoya's arms and positions her hands correctly.
Zoya (Asad's proximity always gives me goosebumbs.)

Aww!! I am loving their love here!!😳😳
Asad "That's it for today. You were fabulous."
Zoya "And my treat?
Asad looks here and there and after noticing that nobody is around, he kisses Zoya on her lips.
Zoya (Asad sure knows how to make my heart skip a beat.)

Nice to know Nuzhat and Dave visited Zoya..Loved Asad in here!!😳😉
Zoya just hugged Dave in response only to pull away after Asad coughed.
Dave "I see green!"
Asad wrapped his hands around Zoya's waist to show his possessiveness.
Asad "I admit I am jealous."

Aww!! Such a nice princess...She freed all the exotic birds!! 😊😊Loved Asad's lines in here!!😳
Asad "I have always been proud of you. You released everyone but one."
Zoya (Who?)
Zoya "I don't see any bird here."
Asad "I was talking about me. You have captured me with your love. And I don't even want to be set free."

Wow!! A Ball ahead??? I am excited already!!

Edited by -HoneyBunch- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: --Mahima--



Not too sure

But I guess Cupid Strikes as that is due

Both updates will have a gap of 2 days
(one on thursday and one on saturday)


Aaa..okayy !

today is wednesday 😃 😃

so that meand tomorrow...we will get an update..
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Posted: 11 years ago
sorry for the late comment
nice updt love d it
cont soon thnx fr pm
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: -HoneyBunch-

Res - Chap7

Unres

This update had loads of romance!!😳😳😳 Totally loved it!!

Aah!! Zoya's morning starts with seeing Asad!!😳😳

Loved Brownie and the story behind its name!! Loved Nutty too!!😃

When Henry said Asad should saddle his own horse!!😲 I first thought why such poor treatment to our Asad😲 but then when you revealed Asad rides the 'Black Beauty' which cannot be controlled by anyone else..I felt proud of our man Asad!!😉😃
Loved Zoya and Asad's ride on the 'Black Beauty'😳😳
Zoya "Why did she bow to me when she only bows to you?"
Asad "She bows to me and I bow down before you so you can figure the rest out I am sure."

And our very own Archery Classes!!😉😉😉
Liked how Asad knew when he asked about Ayaan and Zoya lied!!😆
Loved the student-teacher romance!😳😳
Asad "It's time for your lesson. And I won't be lenient."
Zoya "I don't mind as I am in love with my teacher."
Asad "Fortunately for you, your teacher loves his student back."

Asad "Have you ever focused at something continuously?"
Zoya "Obviously! Your eyes!"
Zoya (Asad is blushing. And he looks so cute.)
Asad "Zoya, it's no time for romance. I don't want that you excel in everything else and fail at mine."

Now this is what I thought would happen in Archery/Gun shoot classes!!😆
Zoya holds up the arrow in the shooting position. Asad warps his arms on Zoya's arms and positions her hands correctly.
Zoya (Asad's proximity always gives me goosebumbs.)

Aww!! I am loving their love here!!😳😳
Asad "That's it for today. You were fabulous."
Zoya "And my treat?
Asad looks here and there and after noticing that nobody is around, he kisses Zoya on her lips.
Zoya (Asad sure knows how to make my heart skip a beat.)

Nice to know Nuzhat and Dave visited Zoya..Loved Asad in here!!😳😉
Zoya just hugged Dave in response only to pull away after Asad coughed.
Dave "I see green!"
Asad wrapped his hands around Zoya's waist to show his possessiveness.
Asad "I admit I am jealous."

Aww!! Such a nice princess...She freed all the exotic birds!! 😊😊Loved Asad's lines in here!!😳
Asad "I have always been proud of you. You released everyone but one."
Zoya (Who?)
Zoya "I don't see any bird here."
Asad "I was talking about me. You have captured me with your love. And I don't even want to be set free."

Wow!! A Ball ahead??? I am excited already!!


Ball will be very exciting so I am sure you'll love it

I love your comments here

Black Beauty bowing scene was my fav... glad you liked it

I LOVE YOU AYRA

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Aneezarp27


Aaa..okayy !

today is wednesday 😃 😃

so that meand tomorrow...we will get an update..


yes tomorrow Cupid Strikes 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: KReyAS

sorry for the late comment

nice updt love d it
cont soon thnx fr pm


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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: -HoneyBunch-

Res-Chap6

Will read this soon!!
Read CS..Comment for it will come soon!!

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Wow!! Zoya's training as a princess is in full swing!!😃
Lupin??? He made it into WAML!!😆

Oh gosh!! Zoya misses Asad so much!!
Asad "Princess, are you ok?"
Zoya (I have never been better in the past one week.)

Loved how Asad took care of Zoya and her sprained ankle!!😳
Wow!! Zoya wants to learn self defense!! I like this!!😊

How did the princess manage to sneak out of her room at night??😲
The bridge-fountaing sequence was cute...Loved how Asad said she cannot escape his eyes and later taught her the dance!😳😳
Zoya was getting so effected with Asad's proximity!! But Asad did not let her have her way!!😳😳😳

Zoya (I can't look into his eyes now, so I think I should look down.)
Asad "And most importantly look into your partner's face..."

Dance under the moonlight was so so romantic!!😳😳

I like how each of Zoya's security had a task at hand to teach her being self-protected!! Asad's archery and gun shooting is the best!! They will be under super close proximity!!😳
Poor Asad!! It bothers to him that he is ordinary and only a bodyguard to Zoya!! But loved Zoya's reply

Zoya "I want you to look out for me and protect me but not as a bodyguard. I want you to do it for our love."

Aww!! Asad comes in through the window!!😲😳😳
I liked Zoya's pep talk to herself to go ahead and kiss Asad!! 😳😳And later when she did not let him go and wanted him to herself😲😳.. poor girl..she was so insecure😕 and Asad knew what was bothering her!! 😳Wah!! Kya pyaar hai...😳😳

Loved the fairy-tale romance at the end😳😳





Harry Potter always finds a way into my works and so did Lupin

I am so glad you remembered to comment on it

You are a very treasured reader and encouraging too

I SO LOVE YOU❤️

Edited by --Mahima-- - 11 years ago

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