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Posted: 11 years ago
we'll res again for the update now
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: --Mahima--

we'll res again for the update now


LOL 😆

Yes! 😉
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Posted: 11 years ago

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Posted: 11 years ago
awww this was absoluetly lovely!!!! <3 <3 update soon!😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
Congrats on the new thread
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Posted: 11 years ago


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Posted: 11 years ago
The end is here...

I won't be upset cause it ended..

But be happy cause it happened...


Zoya stood in the kitchen in the evening preparing a cup of hot chocolate for herself as she felt a pair of arms around her waist. By the touch she knew her husband was back from work. She titled her head to let him nuzzle in her neck.

So romantic this part was... written so beautifully ❤️

Zoya smiled to herself seeing his retreating figure and thought, "That's not difficult at all Jahanpanah!", she giggled and turned back to her work.

of course it is not difficult.. after all Zoya Asad Ahmed Khan kucch bhi kar sakti hai 😉

"So Jahanpanah is having a shower is it!", she thought to herself with a wicked grin. She placed her hot chocolate and a cup of hot black and bitter coffee on the side table and smirked evilly.

Evil Zoya is something that I always love... after all she does everything in Zoya style 😈

"I'm..", she trailed off nervously.

Asad rolled his eyes and asked, "You are?"

"I'm pregnant!", she whispered.


This scene was so picture perfect ⭐️


"I love you baby.. Daddy is waiting for you!", he whispered.

Zoya giggled and caressed his hair. He looked up at her with moist eyes. She smiled as he lay beside her pulling her into him and drifted off into a peaceful slumber.

Brilliant end to such an awesome story 👏




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Edited by --Mahima-- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Time to relive the journey that you had taken me on by posting 1 scene from each part...

Prologue-

"Kaash Ammi aapke Jeeju ko nahi jaanti hoti, aur aap humare saath nahi reh rahi hoti! Khuda jaane woh din kab aayega jab aap meri zindagi se ruksat hongi!", he concluded.
Flashback ends
"What the hell were you thinking Asad? How could you say such a thing?", he questioned himself.
A drop of tear fell off his eyes onto his palms.

Chapter 1-

"I mis judged her, shouted at her, accused her for being ill-mannered, yet she surprises me by being the most forgiving person! Ammi sahi kehti hai.. She has a heart of gold!", he thought to himself

Chapter 2-

"Ye mera ghar nahi hai Mr. Khan.. Aap hi to bolte the.. Agar mera bass chale to main iss ghar ke baahar apna name plate lagwa dungi!", she said with a giggle.

Chapter 3-

"Waise Zoe.. You would have missed me sooo much na?", asked
"Yeah.. On Weekends, when I get up late in the mornings..", she replied with a giggle.
Asad looked at Zoya confused. Zoya smiled and said, "Mr. Khan! Karan used to wake me up on every weekend. Meri neend hi nahi khulti thi!"
Asad faked a smile and continued to drive. His imaginations went out of control and he started imagining Karan waking Zoya up in the morning.
"What the hell am I thinking? Asad.. Don't think wrong! Zoya bohot achhi ladki hai!", he thought to himself trying to convince himself.


Chapter 4-

"Oh shit.. I'm so sorry Mr. Khan! I didn't mean to hurt your feelings. Mere liye shayad ye normal nahi hai but aapke liye to normal hai.. I shouldn't have said that! But agar aap uss leechad ke saath khush hain, then I'm happy for you too!", she completed.

Chapter 5-

"Isi baat pe ek sher arz hai..", she squealed.
Asad rolled his eyes as he smiled and she narrated.
"Butter ke saath Jam hota hai.. Jam ke saath hota hai Toast!
Butter ke saath Jam hota hai.. Jam ke saath hota hai Toast!
Ab to Miss Farooqui chhodiye.. Zoya bulaiye mere dost!"
"Shukriya Shukriya!", she squealed feeling proud of herself.

Chapter 6-

Seriously can't choose... It will be the whole chapter for this

Chapter 7-

Well I don't have many words to describe it

Chapter 8-

Zoya smiled and said, "Lijiye! Aapki black aur bitter coffee!"
"Aapne banayi hai to ab tak meethi ho gayi hogi!", replied Asad to which Zoya giggled.
"Aapne itne cheesy lines kahan se seekhe?", she asked furrowing her eyebrows.
"Wo kya hai na.. Jabse aap meri zindagi mein aayi hain.. Meri zindagi to gulzar ban gayi hai!", replied Asad.
"Mr. Khan! Stop it!", she said with a slight laugh.
"Aap has kyun rahi hain? Yehi dialogue agar aapka wo TV hero bole to achha hai.. Main bolun to aap has rahi hain?", sulked Asad.
"Aap to mere real life hero hai na!", she replied with a wide smile and a wink.

Chapter 9-

"Asad! Thank you for coming into my life and completing me!", she confessed.

Asad smiled and kissed her forehead, then her eyes, nose, cheeks and a soft peck on her lips.

"You made my life colourful with your presence and I know that this rainbow would last forever!", he whispered huskily.

"Asad? This doesn't seem like you! Kiski line churayi?", she asked with a giggle.

"Ummm.. My colleague Mrinalini was typing a story and I heard her say this line out loud!", he replied.

Chapter 10-

"Aren't you feeling cold in this?", he asked.

"Not when you are there to hug me!", she replied genuinely and buried herself into his broad chest. He hugged her possessively. He then scooped her up in his arms and took her to the bed. He gently lay her down and closed the balcony doors to keep it warm.


Chapter 11-

can't quote the best parts

this chapter was nostalgic


Chapter 12-

"Zoya, aapko mujhse poochhne ki koi zaroorat nahi hai jaan! You need to just tell me what you want. I would give you all the happiness in the world meri jaan.", he replied with a gentle smile.

"Nahi.. Sleep with me! I wanna hug you! It's cold!", she complained.


Chapter 13-

"Ummm.. Agar main uss din marr jaati to?", she asked in a mere whisper.



Edited by --Mahima-- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
haan its end😲😲

its not possible😭😭

ohh dii make some more part na plz...😭😭


its and awesome update dii👏👏

loved it very much...


and i m in first page 😃😃

thanks for lovely update😊
Edited by 11sinal - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesum update...thnk u so much 4 sharing d ff..thnks..will miss it

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