You make me, me- An AsYa OS - Page 8

Originally posted by: aashiqua

its jst awesome..and written beautifully and poetic...

Ohmy. Poetic! That's just woah. Woah WOAHHH! Not much of a poet, but I'd take poetic anytime. ANYTIME! Thank you so much, I'm so touched. I mean written beautifully AND poetic? Mwah mwah!

Originally posted by: QueenOfMyCastle

Zoyaan nokah ke dard ki yaad dila di.

Awesome os farz.[/DIV]

Thanks! I posted it during the dark times. Haha. Going through such a dard-e-dil dard-e-disco time. Though it wasn't so bad compared to when Dilshad left.

Thank you Rivs (that is what you go by around here, right?hehe) for reading. And commenting. And so good to know that it came across! The dard!

wow!! really a lovely, superb post...

Oh my!

This is overwhelming.

Tell me honestly, how many updates did Sis Saima promised for you all to read and comment on my work? I wouldn't put it pass her! She has a challenge to win!

Thank you all so much! So much encouragement I'm getting. Sis darling you are something else.

But I still don't know if there would be a next part.

Hee.

Much love,
FaRz

wow...this touched my heart...lovely...👏👏👏

Originally posted by: ashrina

wow!! really a lovely, superb post...

U just expressed asya's feeling in the most perfect way, in a sculpting way..

Sooo i am in love with this os.

"But why, WHY, when I need you the most you're not here for me, you're not here withme."...beautiful.

Do I not matter? Do I not mean much? If I do, if I really do, then why would my pillar of strength, my love, crush me down, destroying every fibre of my being? Why.

...painful yet lovely...

It is because there is you, there is me....lovely

When you're with me, every single word you say belongs to me. I like us. How could I have lived every second, every moment of my life then, when every second, every moment I kept telling myself that I've forgotten you, the thought of you make me cry. But this was then. Now, there's no way I'm ever, ever keeping you out of my mind, my heart, my life.

I feel so empty. I feel so lonely. Coming over was just a cover. What I really needed was familiarity, comfort, YOU. But how could I possibly tell anyone these? So I succumbed. I accepted being called a loser, a weak fighter. But it was worth every name called, seeing as how I feel content, whole, right at that moment, that precious moment, when your eyes met mine. I know I have to prove something, but what exactly, I am not sure.

I'm sorry I couldn't be there for you when you needed me the most.

I'm sorry I didn't stand up for you when I could.
I know you're trying to be strong for me.

I know you love me....

...beautiful lines i can never forget...

I will always remember it in my heart...really superb...u have very good talent...this post just shook my heart...loves to u friend

Originally posted by: angel2930

wow...this touched my heart...lovely...👏👏👏

Credit is given where it is due and deserved. See what you wrote had been liked by so many...u have a way with words and a talent that is not to be brushed aside.

Farz u had better start writing 😊

Originally posted by: Saima-Syed

Credit is given where it is due and deserved. See what you wrote had been liked by so many...u have a way with words and a talent that is not to be brushed aside.

Farz u had better start writing 😊

Originally posted by: farz_parachute

I am so awed by the attention I'm getting. And I only have you to thank!

I'm not much of a writer, I doodle. And sometimes it comes out having a meaning that I didn't quite intend it to be. But it does anyway. If -and this is a BIG if- I see myself doodling and and and words start flowing, and if it means anything, I'll share them. However silly they may sound.

And here I thought you're sound asleep!

start doodling lol

you are getting attention because you struck a chord with everyone who read you priceof writing. I am just eencouraging u to write more...okay okay pestering the he'll out of u

but I mean well 😊