ASYA SS : THE MASKS PEOPLE WEAR THREAD 2 (CH8/PG1)

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pinkflamingo

@pinkflamingo

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Posted: 11 years ago

#71

Originally posted by: Applef
hey!! congrats on ur new thread..

it was awesome..

owh, asad...😳

really loved the innocence of zoya..

again a cliff??

update very soon..

Thanks a lot 😃

Glad you liked it 😃

Will update soon 😃

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Ayra Nuzhat

@-LazyLamhe-

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#72

Originally posted by: pinkflamingo

I like to have that effect on people 😆 Both in real and fictional life 😉 😆
Ahaan! real life too?? Nice!! I like it!!

THANK YOU SO SO SO MUCH 🤗

I love it when you guys like my work so much and leave such motivating and wonderful comments 😃
And I love that you come up with fab updates every time🤗

I'm sure you didn't sleep well that night 😆 So did AAK make it to your dreams too? 😳
Oh ya! He sure did!! 😳😳😆

Man! I was dying laughing reading about the twilight stuff and the necrophilia stuff people were coming up with 😆 I wanted to say - People, I'm not Gul 😆 And i'm not mad 😆
I died laughing too!!😆😆

I love GREY'S ANATOMY and drowning on dry land and Some kind of miracle were 2 of my fav episodes 😉
I found 'Some kind of miracle' a lil comical in the show somehow! (Denny and the bomb guy part) 😕😆 ..Your version was infinity times intense!!👏

Aaah... I love Donatella 😆 I'm sure zolla and she can be good friends 😆 Is she creepy too? 😆
Oh yes! She is creepy too!! You know why I named her Donatella?? Because I saw her at a boutique!! 🤣🤣
Love you too babes ❤️

🤗
Love you too 🤗
Okay about time you tell me your name 😡 😆 Otherwise, I'll just start calling you Honey! 😆
I'm Ayra and yes that's my real name😆

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NAVI55

@NAVI55

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#73

Congrats on the new thread🥳 Very well deserved...

Wow...This chapter was awesome👏 Well to be quiet honest each chapter was well written and beautiful on their own. I loved each one❤️

But this was out of the world extraordinay👏 When you had written that asad had been shot 3 times and that he had died with his family i was like OMG - Nooo ( My inner drama queen😆)

and then you went on to describe his out of body experience...That was simply a masterpiece of the written word...You are seriously super talented and i bow down to your superior imagination👏

By the way the 18+ part was too hot😳

Can't wait for the next update All that hidden sexual tension between zoya and asad and maybe some more twist

At this precise moment, this is way better than the serial👍🏼

I just adored the last part - THE KISS, that for me was so poetic, i found myself tearing at it's beauty...

And your ps, simply inspirational👍🏼

I could go on but i think i should leave some room for the other's to comment😆

A big 🤗 for you for writing this amazing story

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pinkflamingo

@pinkflamingo

Voyager

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Posted: 11 years ago

#74

I like to have that effect on people 😆 Both in real and fictional life 😉 😆

Ahaan! real life too?? Nice!! I like it!!

😉 😆

THANK YOU SO SO SO MUCH 🤗

I love it when you guys like my work so much and leave such motivating and wonderful comments 😃

And I love that you come up with fab updates every time🤗

🤗 I try my best

I'm sure you didn't sleep well that night 😆 So did AAK make it to your dreams too? 😳

Oh ya! He sure did!! 😳😳😆

Yayy 😆 Did he have a stubble? 😳 😆

Man! I was dying laughing reading about the twilight stuff and the necrophilia stuff people were coming up with 😆 I wanted to say - People, I'm not Gul 😆 And i'm not mad 😆

I died laughing too!!😆😆

I love GREY'S ANATOMY and drowning on dry land and Some kind of miracle were 2 of my fav episodes 😉

I found 'Some kind of miracle' a lil comical in the show somehow! (Denny and the bomb guy part) 😕😆 ..Your version was infinity times intense!!👏

It was comical but then Mer is a lil twisted so suited her character 😆 I can't believe she was happy to see the dog in her afterlife 😆 If i die and get stuck in a afterlife, the first thing I'll say is - Hola, is anybody home? 😆

Aaah... I love Donatella 😆 I'm sure zolla and she can be good friends 😆 Is she creepy too? 😆

Oh yes! She is creepy too!! You know why I named her Donatella?? Because I saw her at a boutique!! 🤣🤣

🤣 🤣 TOO GOOD 👏😆

Love you too babes ❤️

🤗

Love you too 🤗

Okay about time you tell me your name 😡 😆 Otherwise, I'll just start calling you Honey! 😆

I'm Ayra and yes that's my real name😆

🤣 HAHAHA 😆 this is epic 😆 Well, hello AYRA. It's a pleasure to meet you 😃

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Nim

@Rarepearl

Inactive

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Posted: 11 years ago

#75

Hey dear,

Okay I'm back. you know I was so high after reading this part that by the end of it I couldn't make out whether to be happy or sad for Asad & Zoe. that's why I took a break to bring myself down, n guess what I did for this, guess, guess? I watched QH, I came back to earth just at the first scene.

first tell me what were you planning to do writing this part, kill us? I mean you kept us hanging till the end to know the exact situation. gosh, I knew Asad was alive but then the mention of wolves, I was like, I never saw this coming. I thought he was an Alpha or something but m glad he isn't.

The intimate moments between Asad & Zoe were hot as hell. Asad has really fallen for this stubborn, trouble magnet. I was all aww seeing how innocent Asad was in all this love making thing. he really has stayed away from all this all his life, glad Zoe made an appearance to teach Mr. Perfectionist of the things he didn't know existed. I knew Asad loved Zoe but this much, I really didn't. he is so affected by her.

Poor Zoe passed out hearing the last lines, they were a shocker. I couldn't help but weep seeing her broken state, denying to the complete truth. the lines which touched my heart were:

Zoya : " It's beating", she said with an innocence of a five year old.

He smiled but there was a hidden sadness in his smile. He brought her hand to his lips and kissed the back of her hand.

Prof Khan : " It's beating, isn't it? So if I tell you the rest of the story while you place your hand on my heart, will you listen?", he asked softly as if talking to a five year old himself.

these lines took my heart away. the pain, the longing, the love was all so clear in them.

Asad's past really broke me. the poor guy has really suffered a lot just for bringing justice to this nation & country.

You've described Asad's emotions at the time of the incident so so well, I am short of words to describe it. just a standing ovation from me to tell you how much I appreciate & love it. 👏

I had thought that Asad was in coma, the way he was telling about his trip back to the spot, but I was getting confused when Rashid had called him & he hugged them, I thought he was with them. but thank goodness they asked him to go back & fight for them, himself & their little Afreen.

Okay the rescuing of Asad was quite fast & commendable. I appreciate the efforts the docs made to save their officer. the second opt gave me creeps, I couldn't understand whether Asad was going to make through it or not but am glad he did.

by the end of the third time he woke up at the spot my tears were flowing as if I could see it happening in front of me.

Zoe's reaction was so obvious. she had to be broken & lost. her state crumbled my heart into pieces, my heart went out to the poor Angel who has suffered since childhood. & this time too destiny has planned to take away the only one she loves more than anything in the world. There's no end to Zoe's miseries, she's been suffering practically all her life & now once again is standing for the toughest exam of her life, a lifetime without her love. Asad could see the dilemma she was in & his kiss reassured her of his presence, his company & all his love. his confession was just cherry on the top, I never thought he would voice out his love so soon, but I guess her deplorable condition & the fear of losing her soon forced him to.

What you've told of the upcoming parts is really intriguing because now that both of them know of their love, it'll be difficult to stay apart. but I understand Zoe's plight, she's scared to lose him, she thinks that if she stays away from him, maybe she'll be able to come over the worst. but of course they can't because they are meant to be.

You are an awesome & talented writer dear, you just describe everything too well, leaving no details not even the minutest ones. just love your way of narration. a tight hug to show how much I love you🤗.

Lots of love,

Nim.

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Ayra Nuzhat

@-LazyLamhe-

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#76

I like to have that effect on people 😆 Both in real and fictional life 😉 😆

Ahaan! real life too?? Nice!! I like it!!

😉 😆

THANK YOU SO SO SO MUCH 🤗

I love it when you guys like my work so much and leave such motivating and wonderful comments 😃

And I love that you come up with fab updates every time🤗

🤗 I try my best

I'm sure you didn't sleep well that night 😆 So did AAK make it to your dreams too? 😳

Oh ya! He sure did!! 😳😳😆

Yayy 😆 Did he have a stubble? 😳 😆

Oh yes! A light one😳 😳😆

Man! I was dying laughing reading about the twilight stuff and the necrophilia stuff people were coming up with 😆 I wanted to say - People, I'm not Gul 😆 And i'm not mad 😆

I died laughing too!!😆😆

I love GREY'S ANATOMY and drowning on dry land and Some kind of miracle were 2 of my fav episodes 😉

I found 'Some kind of miracle' a lil comical in the show somehow! (Denny and the bomb guy part) 😕😆 ..Your version was infinity times intense!!👏

Aaah... I love Donatella 😆 I'm sure zolla and she can be good friends 😆 Is she creepy too? 😆

Oh yes! She is creepy too!! You know why I named her Donatella?? Because I saw her at a boutique!! 🤣🤣

🤣 🤣 TOO GOOD 👏😆

HAHAH...Come on...She had a fashion sense after all😆😆

Love you too babes ❤️

🤗

Love you too 🤗

Okay about time you tell me your name 😡 😆 Otherwise, I'll just start calling you Honey! 😆

I'm Ayra and yes that's my real name😆