OS: Ready, Set, Don't go - Page 2

An absolute beauty. it was so good to see this side of Asad, it always is a treat to see him protecting his baby sister from the world. I love Zoe for being the home-maker, she is just so soft, responsible, charming & everything good at the same time. if it wasn't for her Asad wouldn't have agreed. this scene that unfolds when all the truth had been revealed is played really well. just hope to see something like that in the show too but I guess i'm asking for too much.

Thanx for writing this, we really need good things to look forward to.

Love.

Originally posted by: -HoneyBunch-

This was really sweet...Asad as a very caring and protective brother 😊

and then him teasing his baby elephant 😆

I would also like to see something like this in the show. Najma far far away from that creep!

Originally posted by: Rarepearl

An absolute beauty. it was so good to see this side of Asad, it always is a treat to see him protecting his baby sister from the world. I love Zoe for being the home-maker, she is just so soft, responsible, charming & everything good at the same time. if it wasn't for her Asad wouldn't have agreed. this scene that unfolds when all the truth had been revealed is played really well. just hope to see something like that in the show too but I guess i'm asking for too much.

Thanx for writing this, we really need good things to look forward to.

Love.

Originally posted by: sarbrathan

I seriously wish all of this happens on the show, in fact I imagine this TO BE the SHOW.

Awesome👏! Post an index up for your other work or pm me the titles so I can google it and read it please

Originally posted by: AAK0007

Very nice concept and nice story. Love it. Hope this is also happend in qubool hai. But we know this is never going to happen. Love your writing. Write more