A Note from Zoya to Asad with a short reply from Asad :( - Page 10

Originally posted by: Meaningful

This is too good though very painful

Originally posted by: KulfiBai

So Today I refuse to let you be my priority , for you made me just an option.

^That line, right there, is very, very good.

Great piece of writing! 😊

Originally posted by: rivya

Amber...meri jaan🤗

This is such a fantastic piece.I am in love with it.This is honestly what I expected to happen in the given scenario. This is keeping in mind Zoya's feelings about marriage and her getting upset about how she was treated.

The line about priorities and options is fantastic.

However, in real life, how many women have to go through this priorities and option situation. Not what Asad did...but u know the day to day life. Work or family. Overtime or outings. Etc.

Rivs

Originally posted by: ...Binish...

You have written it beautifully.👏

If this was the actual response from Zoya then Asad wouldn't have guts to talk or face Zoya ever again out of his guilt.😒

Originally posted by: sona_naksh

my god ..dat was just sooo painful...:'(:-( ...
but u ve written it to excellance

Originally posted by: rajnid68

you added asad pov..touchy..

he will now feel all is lost..with the return of the ring. .

was holding onto his semblance. .little hope..

wanted the lipstick to be smudged..but the mascara got undone!!

Originally posted by: sumaiya14

this was amazing. .so painful

Originally posted by: starsinmyeyes

Forever isn't long enough👏

Originally posted by: Ani-asya

Awesome post amber👏
I loved it a lot..
Its so emotional & very touching...😭
Short asad pov but cute..
Well written👏

Originally posted by: Yellowdiamond

Omg! That was amazing!