Asya OS - Setting things right!!! - Page 3

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Posted: 12 years ago
#21
Please, apne dimag main se thoda sa nikal ke gul ko dedo plzzz
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Posted: 12 years ago
#22
amazing it is ...just wish it happened in d show ...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#23
res!
unres

amazing 👏 loved it from the core❤️
i hope this same happened in the show too
nikhat too used her brain 😃 and bhaiseena bi like always greedy😡
i hate shireen why she always curse asad...😡
and ayaan he again brought tht sautela and sagah.😡..he is such a mad and confused man😕
but overall finally asya did'nt separated😛
i hope matters solt out soon in the show too and we will get our happy mitwa moments😳
Edited by asyaarshilover - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#24
So many logical things happened in you OS. It's too much 😃
This is amazing, beautifully written and it sends a positive message. This Asad I wanted to see since long, the one that puts two and two together and doesn't forget the influence he has on Haseena, and also knows when to put a stop to Ayaan.
You are an amazing writer! Hats off to you 👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
#25
Awesome dear.
I wish gul cud use hr brain lyk dis
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: maankigeet4ever

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<font color="#9900ff">Okay..that was so so so so worth the wait😃and before anything else...can i just say how much i love this Asad Ahmed Khan ? 😃You kept true to his character..but more on that later😉</font>

<font color="#9900ff">The start that was the like the scene...damn..the way you described the pain, their inner thoughts...it was perfect..made the scene your own in that way👏And the bit with Asad fighting to stay strong in his decision while he took Zoya to the SM...utter perfection i tell you. I felt for Zoya and Asad😭</font>

<font color="#9900ff">So getting to the SM...coming back to asad staying true to his character...a man of principles and values...he did the right thing. He took Zoya to the SM not to hand her over foolishly but to sort the misunderstanding out like sensible people should</font>

<font color="#9900ff">Partiuclarly liked how you brought in the reglion aspect..the CVs kept this nikah going in the name of religion and pressures of society trying to fool viewers who don't have the knowledge...but you solved the problem from a religious perspective...so well done on that part👏</font>

<font color="#9900ff">And Asad Ahmed Khan in full on anger mode</font><font color="#9900ff">*dreamy* so glad he realized that Zoya is not a possession you can hand over to his brother for loan like the CVs showed😡..but rather a person who yes, has made a mistake but shehas feelings and opinions and the right to choose. And the way he gave it to Shireen, Ayaan and even Haseena Bi...damn...i could imagine the whole scene playing out...really really loved it</font><font color="#9900ff">😃</font>
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<font color="#9900ff">And they finally got married *cries tries of joy*😭You couldn't have ended it in a better way..but liked how he said that she isn't fully off the hook😆</font>

<font color="#9900ff">I loved loved loved loved loved loved it..u rocked it babe🤗</font>

<font color="#9900ff">Lubbbsss you</font>
<font color="#9900ff">Reya <3</font>

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Posted: 12 years ago
#27
I am gonna cry! 😭 That was awesome and beautiful. Oh, how I wish something like this had happened on the show.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#28
Brilliant. Superb. Simply awesome. 👏
Can I just say that you have done a splendid job? Great, great story. Totally believable. You stood so true to the characters and how they should have responded to the situation. This is how Asad would have reacted if the writers hadn't butchered his character.

Your entire story was so well organised. The emotions, the pain, the anger, the angst! Uff! I am blown away.
I really hope that when and if the mess in the show is cleared, Asad takes a while to make peace with Ayaan.

Its stories like these that make me wonder how come the writers of the show can so easily not see all the loopholes and weak plots they keep on building. A lady is not a pawn. Its really pathetic that in one episode they are highlighting how women should and should not be treated (Rajveer track) and in the next moment the female lead of the show is being handled like a commodity.

Once again, great words!

-Simi!




Edited by saida.m - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#29
Story isse kahte Gul mata!! 👍🏼

I so wish Asad someday ll Roar at all of them like this 😎


👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
#30
wowww!!!!👏
i truly wish from the bottom of my heart that this had happened in the show!
wonderfully written...loved it!

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