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Amna

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Posted: 11 years ago

#251

a really interesting start to a wonderful story 👏 PM me upddates plzzz

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Tanya

@OceanicHeart.

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#252

Awesome update !

I have just now started reading and im loving the story

Do pm me further updates

And continue soon :D

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ChocoBerry

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Posted: 11 years ago

#253

Hey Nice update. Please pm me for the next part.

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Simi

@saida.m

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#254

Great update!Oh my poor Zoya! And Asad!

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-StarsLinedUp-

@-StarsLinedUp-

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#255

Loving the story..cant wait for the story to unfold..good going so far..n keep writing...will wait 4 the nxt update..

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Mahima

@Mahima_13

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#256

Originally posted by: McdreamyKSG

Thanks for appreciating my work!😊 Glad you liked Farida bi.😳..

Thanksss❤️

You welcome! 🤗

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Mrinalini

@minakrish

Viewbie

+ 45

Posted: 11 years ago

#257

Originally posted by: McdreamyKSG

Hey Mrinalini Di thanks for such a lovely comment!😊

Really happy that you like the story...it means a lot!😳

Will continue soon!😃

Anytime Shubz! ❤️

Love you! ❤️

Going to read Chapter 4! 😳

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Mahima

@Mahima_13

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#258

It was beautiful and flawless

It is the first time that I have seen a groubie write so well

Amazing work

kuddos to you

loved the way Zoya was strong in front of her appi

and they way Zoya talked to Asad... wow

the garden and swing scene was enchanting

She looked him in the eye with anger clearly reflecting in her form and said, " You don't want to eat...then don't...But keep your voice down when you are talking to your wife!" And saying that, she stormed off to her room, leaving a very furious Asad behind.

She went on to sit on the porch-swing and let the cool breeze of the night soothe her senses. Something told her that this place is going to be her favourite in the house. Like a routine her life after marriage played in front of her eyes like it did yesterday and she couldn't stop herself from crying.

No, she doesn't affect me.

He turned the other way with an annoying urge to turn back. He forcibly closed his eyes and waited for sleep to come.

Little did he know that sleep was far from him. Very very far.

it was my fav chapter so far

luv

Mahi

Edited by --Mahima-- - 11 years ago

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Mrinalini

@minakrish

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Posted: 11 years ago

#259

This chapter was sheer brilliance! 👏 I really loved the way you have portrayed Zoya's character, being a strong girl! 😃

Now Zoya is gonna be alone in the country! 🤔 I'm sure she will handle herself and Asad too! 😊 She brought him food.. 😳 But he shrugged her off! 😡

Asad standing at his mother's grave!

He stood there for god knows how long, crying at his ill fate and a future that seemed darker than ever. There can never be light in his life. Or can there be?

Awww.. Zoya feeling bad for shouting at Asad! It was obvious! 😊I truly love Zoya here! ❤️

The CLIMAX was the BEST Scene EVER! ❤️

Asad knew that she couldn't see him through the window but he could. He noticed how her tears glistened under the moonlight and the childlike innocence of her face. This was probably the first time he saw her, in the true sense of the word. However much he tried but his head kept turning back to her face and her tears, which kept falling. For an unknown reason they disturbed him. It might be because he was the only reason behind her condition.

No, she doesn't affect me.

He turned the other way with an annoying urge to turn back. He forcibly closed his eyes and waited for sleep to come.

Little did he know that sleep was far from him. Very very far.

I'm waiting to see what happens next! This was WOW! 👏

Continue soon!

Love and hugs, 🤗

Mrina di

Edited by -Mrinalini- - 11 years ago

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manognasai

@manognasai

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#260

Unresd on pg.34😊
Sorry tuk lot of time to unres
Actually I was left wid the last 2paras and I closed it and forgot to read and unres😳
Nice update btw!