New OS: Life Unexpected - Page 5

Originally posted by: mochhug

This was heart wrenching. I teared up. I hate you for making me cry. BUt I love your writing too much to be mad at you. 🤗 sorry ke rulaya!

You portrayed her pain, her nostalgia, her sadness so perfectly. The way she walked around the house, replaying all the happy memories in the house, was hauntingly beautiful. thanks! Surbhi is just so awesome, she makes you feel Zoya's pain

Asad being sick was so realistic. He loves her so much, he feels so guilty, that his body and heart can't hold it in, or take it. I felt so sad for him, especially when he didn't find her at the door after feeling her presence. yeah even I feel bad for him

Just beautiful.

You say I'm the Queen of Expressions? No my dear, I relinquish my crown to you. 🤗

Thank you so much Monica! really means a lot! OMG!!!! 😳 😳 But I def can't be as good as you! 🤗

Originally posted by: mariam1368

U really made me cry yaar
Awesome OS
Thnx for the pm

Originally posted by: AnushriyaBora

Nice. It made me cry.

Originally posted by: lover1998

Great job loved the story

Originally posted by: Ramlath

Awesome OS.. 👏

Interesting...u made me cry...😭😭
Thanks for the PM dear...