New OS: Life Unexpected

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anushreemishra

@anushreemishra

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#11

Wow this was so beautiful and heart touching 😃
I loved how you showed zoya reminiscing her memories associated with asad and his family members and various places in his house...I loved zoya remembering all those beautiful memories reminded me of good old times...
One question-you wrote Mrs.siddique...did zoya get married to someone else...

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GoodGoneWrong

@GoodGoneWrong

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 11 years ago

#12

wow...just one word...wow...

The pain, the sorrow...everything purrrfect...

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Andreea

@chibi_deea

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#13

It's beautiful 👏 Very emotional.

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jazsidhu

@jazsidhu

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#14

hey tis is really superb...

luv it...

it is so heart touching...

thx fr the pm...

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madhvi4gurti

@madhvi4gurti

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#15

Heart wrenching OS!!!

very well written!👍🏼

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MissReadingFaye

@MissReadingFaye

Navigator

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#16

Thank your for the PM. 😊

Absolutely perfect, love the attention to detail, the way you depicted her emotions as she walked around the Khan villa, and how he sensed her presence at the end.

Very emotional but brilliantly penned.

👏

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chichi220

@chichi220

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#17

Heart wrenching touches the soul

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rads73937

@rads73937

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#18

BEAUTIFUL.

LOVED IT.

THANX FOR THE PM. TAKE CARE

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Revelio

@Revelio

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#19

My stomach was in knots when I was reading this. U did a beautiful job, I loved how u depicted Zoya's pain in such a heart wrenching way. This os was the first os of urs that I read and u can count me in as a fan.

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Monica

@mochhug

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#20

This was heart wrenching. I teared up. I hate you for making me cry. BUt I love your writing too much to be mad at you.

You portrayed her pain, her nostalgia, her sadness so perfectly. The way she walked around the house, replaying all the happy memories in the house, was hauntingly beautiful.

Asad being sick was so realistic. He loves her so much, he feels so guilty, that his body and heart can't hold it in, or take it. I felt so sad for him, especially when he didn't find her at the door after feeling her presence.

Just beautiful.

You say I'm the Queen of Expressions? No my dear, I relinquish my crown to you. 🤗

Edited by mochhug - 11 years ago