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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: skavya

Amazing update !!!!!! & hot one...

like najma & zoya's bonding...

zoya's sweet revenge...

waiting for the next

continue soon...



THANK U SO VERY MUCH😃...m glad that u liked it...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Missvishtoofani

wow its suprb cute update



THANK U...😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey Aashna,
okay what do I say of the part, it was ☺️, you know the word, don't you? excellent mix of Mango with Tango.
I love Mango, she really served the purpose with which she was sent to India. Asad's really smart to know Mango's intentions or did he teach her this?
So Zoe-Tamatar meet at last. it was a surprise meeting but I as so proud of Zoya's reaction & words she spoke to Tamatar. no one other than my Zoe can be so forgiving, selfless & loving. so Najma knew about Mango too. Miss. Mango manages to become the star too just like her owners. Happy birthday Mango sweet heart. you know I don't really love dogs except a few but you've made me fall for you.
Okay to the best part of this update. waisey I was drooling over Asad just imagining him in dose vest & pants, how could Zoe control herself when he was in front of her to cherish & i'm glad she did use the opportunity. u can throw your rational side to the gutter for a few moments, got to listen to the poor organ pumping life in you. 😉
the description did leave me hot. Zoe really did take revenge by not letting him touch her but it's only fair, he already had invaded her personal space & poor thing couldn't concentrate on anything other than him. I went all fida over Asad's response. waiting eagerly to see how the evening goes out, I hope no more problems come their way, not so soon at least.
well yar yeh chap bohat chota tha as cpmpared to others, does this have a part B too?
Lots of love & you've got to read my comment on chap 12 too.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Rarepearl

Hi again,

Chap 12 A:
I really feel short at words to acknowledge & appreciate Zeenat's efforts to bring back a genuine smile on Zoya's face, to return her happiness & to guide her back to her love & life, Asad. I don't know if you'll think I was being a cry baby reading Zeenat's letter but I really did. it held so much of love, support & guidance. the pictures really did their job, they made her forget her surroundings & remember the good old days.
Chap 12 B:
I understand Ayaan's curiosity & like the way he didn't think bad of Asad on hearing about him kissing Zoe. I know it's hard to digest about Asad showing affection publically but love does weird things.
Both Dilshaad & Ayaan are right in their places regarding Asad. Ayaan has got the right to know about his bro's life. Dilshaad isright that it's Asad's wish to share his past with anyone he wants. she herself knows that once the pain of his wounded heart subsides, Asad will discuss his past with his bro but for now his wish of not interfering in his locked past should be respected.
Zoe really is a baby. she thought she'll get her aim of irritating & troubling Asad by repeating the same act over again. he's a bit too smart for her & knows her real well. I really want to read about their past moments where they were happy together.
Okay now this was a real surprise for me, don't know about Zoe. non the less I loved it. I mean I am in love with Mango & this part, seriously. I had a grin over my face reading how she jumped over Zoe & licked her. aww, Mango was Asad's gift to Zoe & I wanted to ask dat is Zoe's birthday coming up or am I wrong?
The AsYa banter made my day, no actually night. I really can't get enough of them. I loved Mango's actions of siding with Asad. poor Zoe. it's really a wonderful part.
So the picture is getting clear little by little now for Ayaan. I hope he really doesn't interfere in their space just like Humi has told him & wait for the right moment to come.
okay dearest, this is it for now. I'm telling you beforehand that I read da updates asap but get late in commentin at times but that doesn't mean I won't. I will whenever I can. just like how i'm eating ur head with 2 posts.
update sooon.
Love once again...



Thanks once again for taking the time out to write in reply to my update..I am rally very happy and touched that you are so involved in this story.I felt Zeenat's letter was the best part for sure and she is truly a guiding force in their journey. Ayaan has still to see a side of Asad he didnt know exist, and since hehas been seeing Asad being affectionate..he is feelin a lil left out..but woh bhi with time clear ho jaayega...infact he will make things right along with Dilshaad...As for Zoya she only thinks wen she is alone, in the presence of Asad she lets herself go it seems😆 JK...n Ya Mango was always put in this story to be a link between the 2..n she is doin so already..n the two..just seem to be enjoyin their banter..just makes them get closer..😃..so m once again very happy u liked the updates so far..n took the time off at night to write down ur comments...I hope to keep it up..so stay tuned..😃

Cheers!!!👏
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Rarepearl

Hey Aashna,

okay what do I say of the part, it was ☺️, you know the word, don't you? excellent mix of Mango with Tango.
I love Mango, she really served the purpose with which she was sent to India. Asad's really smart to know Mango's intentions or did he teach her this?
So Zoe-Tamatar meet at last. it was a surprise meeting but I as so proud of Zoya's reaction & words she spoke to Tamatar. no one other than my Zoe can be so forgiving, selfless & loving. so Najma knew about Mango too. Miss. Mango manages to become the star too just like her owners. Happy birthday Mango sweet heart. you know I don't really love dogs except a few but you've made me fall for you.
Okay to the best part of this update. waisey I was drooling over Asad just imagining him in dose vest & pants, how could Zoe control herself when he was in front of her to cherish & i'm glad she did use the opportunity. u can throw your rational side to the gutter for a few moments, got to listen to the poor organ pumping life in you. 😉
the description did leave me hot. Zoe really did take revenge by not letting him touch her but it's only fair, he already had invaded her personal space & poor thing couldn't concentrate on anything other than him. I went all fida over Asad's response. waiting eagerly to see how the evening goes out, I hope no more problems come their way, not so soon at least.
well yar yeh chap bohat chota tha as cpmpared to others, does this have a part B too?
Lots of love & you've got to read my comment on chap 12 too.




Awww once again..ur comments just leave me speechless..it just makes me happy so very happy to be able to write somehtin that makes sense..and stirs some emotions in the reader..😳..I am really glad that u were able to get so involved in this chapter..it was a lil..HOT..l😉 lol...n thankfully and hopefullt not so tacky..well its hard for Zoya to hate..n wen she knew the situation it got even harder..so y rite?? n she is happy now so it doesnt matter...Asad had nothing to do with Mango..its just like a kid who feels at peace with both its parents around...same goes for Mango..infact my dog almost does the same..he needs to touch u somehow wen he sleeps..infact..he sleeps on the bed..his head on my hubby's feet..(they look so adorable though...😳)..n m glad my desription is kinda making u like dogs..lol..Now bout the Oooh part...😆 well Zoya's revenge served 2 purposes..she had to satisfy her urge to exlope..to be close to Asad once again..😉 and also get him bothered..n that was her revenge..so m glad I could put that forward...As for a B part no this is it..but initially I was thinkin of just having CH 14..but since a lot of u want this to go on for a lil bit more..I'll spilt that ch in 2..n then CH14b will end with the dhamaka I was talking about..so keep reading..Once again thanks for takin the time out to write ur amazing comments..n m sorry for not responding to CH12a/b comment..I jsut kinda squeezed it all in the 11th ch Re comment..so ya have replied to it also..so ya..

Enjoy ur Sunday n Cheers!!!!😃
Edited by starslinedup - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
update was really temp raising
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: starslinedup

🥳 YIEEE...N 3 CHEERS...for all of u..readers n commenters. ..thank u for leaving ur comment..and ur likes...thank u thank u very very much...next update..well do u want all the fluff or do u want me to introduce the dhamaka?? lemme knw..i can try n pull in some fluffy content for another chapter n thn for the 15th ch the dhamaka will happen..so comment n lemme knw..n accordingly I will start penning it down...😃



Fluff ... maybe later dhamaka..😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
i read all the parts at once. this is amazing story. i am totally in love with this story. this update was so hot😳.loved every part of this story.you are a superb writer.pm me if possible😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Linsie

Happy Birthday Mango!!!

Ayaan is disappointed.. but find time with humaira he
need to focus on something else..

Najma arrival turn of event... small confession and apologies
Zoya .. let it go.. and sound normal as possible
after what happen.. she forgive everyone...

What a dance...definitely very
high temperature... off romance ... hmmm

so there is a date coming... interesting






THANK U THANK U THANK U...N YA it will be their first date again...LOL...n m glad this update was worth the read...thank u for commenting..😃
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Applef

love the little mango..😉


how cute..

she is trying to keep them together..

the rest was hot..☺️

owh zoya..😳

update soon..



THANK U SO VERY MUCH FOR COMMENTING AND LIKING THE STORY..😃

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