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Posted: 12 years ago

she jumped on Asad, taking him by surprise, her sudden pounce making him lose his balance and dropping on the floor, Mango on top of him, barking at him licking him like a maniac.

The whole crew including Ayaan were shocked, they thought that Asad was being attacked and jumped into help, but his laughter stopped them in their tracks.

Asad was laughing, he was laughing with childlike abaondon,he didn't care that he was rolling in the mud, he didn't care that there was slobber all over him, he was just laughing. After about a minute he finally decided to stand up, lifting Mango in his hands, kissing her and enjoying being licked... jus loved readind these lyns...

AWESOME... CUTE UPDATE... 😊

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Posted: 12 years ago
hey tis is totally amazing...
fabulous...
aww mango is so cute...
totally luv it...
ayaan is trying to get the truth out...
tis is getting very interesting...
luv the way hw zoya is trying to get back at asad...
totally addicted to tis ff...
eagerly waiting for the next part...
thx fr the pm n do continue soon n do pm me...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Every one of your updates is filled with cuteness! I'm serious! Mango sensing Asad and running up to him and Asad laughing as he gets attacked by his sweetheart. I can imagine it, including the whole scene with Zoya confessing she missed Asad.
So Ayaan's starting to put two and two together and is nagging Dilshad to tell him what happened between the two? Hmm, let's see how far he gets.
The last part with Zoya's cover up was just amazing, how Asad glared at her to make her watch her tongue, total Asad mode!
Please continue soon and thank you so much for the PM!
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Posted: 12 years ago
totally loved this part

Mango was the best part of this

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Posted: 12 years ago
Totally loving this story. Can't wait for the next chapter. You are an amazing writer.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Bahut bahut dhanyawaad aap sabhi ka...for leaving ur amazing...makes me feel good comments...sahi mein..kya din jaata hai wen I wake up..n quickly chk my post..n c all ur comments...Haaiii❤️..bas din awesome ho jaata hai...so now..have started to write the next ch..n hopefully (since it wasnt a good evening and night for me yesterday) I will be done writing it by tonight..to post...fingerscrossed.. please understand if by chance I cant😊.n I guess the next post mite be a good one😉..Chalo keep the comments coming..n will cya all on the other side of the next post...🥳
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: rajnid68

Absolutely outstanding update...

Asad immune to zoyas tricks..
Sha blushed at his kiss..
Mango..back in action...
Appi is indeed great..trying in to bridge the gap..
Ayaan doubt fast receding. ..abt zoya and asad...
So now mango too in the groove..to get the two together...
Looking forward to read more. ..
Thanks for the pm

😃 thank u so very much for commenting..n yes the more the merrier..n sab help karenge..yo bring the 2 togeteher..😉
stay tuned..😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
Loved it super excited for the next chapter thanx for the PM and pleaseee update soon pretty pleaseee( Puppy dog face) 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hi Dear,
Sorry for being unable to comment on the parts 11 & 12, actually I'm out of town & couldn't connect to net on my laptop. I did reserve a post for chap 11 but I'm so sorry I can't find it now in so many pages, so I'll just make another post now.
Chap 11 A:
Ayaan's character is really fun loving & still responsible & mature enough to handle situations properly. I know he cares deeply for Asad & hence wants to know the mystery connection between Asad & Zoe seeing their interactions & the rapid changes in Asad's moods on the sets. So Ayaan & Humi all set to tie the knot once their parents give the consent, i'm really happy for the two.
I am worried about the slip of paper dat dropped from the file which Ayaan was about to see but couldn't due to Asad's return, like what is in it that would stop Asad's past wounds from healing? hope of getting an answer soon for it.
Dilshaad: like last time I said that I do understand her plight when she asked Zoe for Asad, it was due to her husband's falling health & her love for him. but after reading this part, I really felt angry at her for using the words that she used with Zoe & the way she demanded her to leave Asad & let him return to his mother.
the situations do make you react illogically but seriously like this? she had been with Zoe for sometime, seen that she was her son's life & yet took it away in just a blink.
I am really sorry for Zoe. she has suffered a lot ever since her childhood & had to give away her love for his own good.
Najma kept in touch with Zeenat to be updated about Zoya, but Dilshad should have made efforts earlier to bring them together.
11 B:
Okay this part was really hilarious. I mean I felt bad for Zoe too but couldn't help enjoy her jealousy with Asad. Aww poor thing was so consumed with hatred towards Tanveer that she couldn't put the dots together to see the picture clearly. I swear I couldn't stop laughing at this line:

Ayaan- You are too funny Zoya, bhaijaan and engaged and that to with Tanveer, Allah you are a genius, kya joke maara hai'

Asad knows her too well. I don't agree with his way of finding whether she still has those deep feelings for him but I know he really needs an assurance to fight & snatch back what life had taken from him 4 years back and am glad that he got the answer in positive. Uff Asad's "meri jaan" takes me away to a dream land.
I was so excited about the surprise. I thought it would be something to do with Dilshaad. 😕 Am I not following the story properly?
Okay soo next chap review in next post.
Love.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome updates
Loved it to bits

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