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Natasha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#191

Brilliant piece of work! superb! 👏 👏

I seroiusly dont hav any words to say...the chapter was so good actually it was perfect...im dazed ⭐️

the conflict the turmoil of zoya was so well written. ..I could feel it 😭

and poor asad...hopefully dilshad tells him d truth soon 😭

next part will be fun wid jealous zoyaaa 😃

update soon! ⭐️

You are a phenomenal writer! 👏

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Natasha

@--Natasha--

Voyager

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Posted: 11 years ago

#192

Originally posted by: starslinedup

😳Gushing after reading ur comments...u dont even know..the boost it gives me..wen I read comments like urs...it makes me wanna write more..n m glad..something I wrote..stayed with u...Thanks once again🤗

😳 😳
and d kind of updates tat u give just leave me speechless!
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aish-au

@aish-au

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Posted: 11 years ago

#193

awesome update as always. jealous zoya, now should be exciting can't wait .

luv it hw u update soon. 👏

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Nim

@Rarepearl

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Posted: 11 years ago

#194

uff this was awesome. I seriously am so happy that Asad went after Zoe to check on her & I know he knew it that she would be embarrassed on ending up in such a compromising situation with him in public. what I found the best part was his consoling & then accepting of his folly including his intentions. I was in awe when he called her "meri jaan", it sounds so so endearing from him.

his inner turmoil on being left stranded & without knowing the cause of it, his pleading to speak the truth, broke my heart. it really is upsetting & heart wrenching to see Asad break always even if he is at fault, my weakness.

I appreciate Zoe's attempt at hiding the truth & yet letting it out in calculative words, just to ease him but still preventing him from breaking more on knowing the truth of his ammi. I really love you for this Zoe, v caring & understanding of you.

Asad's response was natural, she knows v well that she meant more than his own life to him. his accusations are justified, what are you to think when you're left all of a sudden?

Hmm so nice to see the final barriers between two soul mates dissolving. Asad should have cleared her misunderstanding. pagal is enjoying her being jealous. it's really going to be fun seeing them interact now.

Thanks for the lovely update.

Well may I know your name, if there's no problem.

till then lots of love,

Nim.