I betrayed you.......: An OS - Page 2

Originally posted by: -Aswini-

Well written Soup👏

I expected a happy ending😭😆 Can yo pls continue it and let us know how they reunite😳 I love yur writing😳

Originally posted by: s120

Res

I love you Soup 🤗

Unres

This is absolutely brilliant 👏 Loved it! Can you continue and give a happy ending pls?

It made me cry And you think the bitch will be able to do this? I hate her 😡 But she better not try her luck with Asad now 😡 😆

Originally posted by: shonajain

two pure souls broken badly n completely 😭
very nicely written dear 👏

Originally posted by: notagain

And then you write this. They both are idiots in love. Soup, it's lovely. Betrayal is a strong word. When one is most beloved, betrayal is most cruel.

Originally posted by: sona_naksh

well written ...its way too sad n emotional ...i dont want zoya to think of it anyday ...
but no doubt u r a very gud writer sumi ...
n yes i agree a low lyf lyk tanveer is capable of dis ..

Originally posted by: shreya11mehra

Hy soupy its emotional one..

WEll written..as far as gul concern..till now she gvs hr best track to gv hr pov towrds situation n position of women in society. N hw women cn cope up..

Exmple..wen dat 16 december rape case hped hre in delhi...gul gvs da track of akram..n witness ws its dialogue. .wen asad said..ye nikaah k koi vajood nh hai..kyunki nikaah jo hota hai vo ek mard aur aurat mai hota hai...aur yh koi mard nh hai..kyunki mard aurat ki izzat krta hai..uski hifazat krta hai...zabardasti nh...

Recently aftr mumbai rape case..she gvs da plot of vampi singh..he thnks independent gals r flirty...thn zoya slp his thinking...

This thngs r so relevent to dis ongoing track..bcz gul alwys admit in hr intervw dat gal r foced to gt married on da name of religion or society...thng z hw gal go thru..n fight back...

Originally posted by: MisHumptyDumpty

actually. Twist of tale is that Asad thought he was not worthy of Zoya, now comes Zoya's feeling of the same - And Asad to assure her no sweetiee you only deserve me and no one else.