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I am so quizzed with the way CVs are running this Zoyaan track, we understand that it is fictional story but fiction evolves from reality, you can't show unrealistic things that defy logic, common sense and physics. ...how can these guys make a ROMCOM in to a supernatural thriller (such as chaddar rescuing Zoya from falling off the cliff) or even worse a horror show ( badi bi's torture by Razia for example)
Let me call out some of the ridiculous loop holes (or may be we can say safe spots for CVs to use them down the line if track is not accepted) in this particular Zoyaan track ...I am not going beyond Zoyaan track as I hate this track in general so want to focus on it and also if I try to draft all QH loopholes that would take years to complete this post and may even give tough competition to Mahabharata in volume.
Zoyaan track loopholes:
1. First and foremost, whatz wrong with this Maulvi team? I remember one maulvi saying its Ayaan please call Sidhiqui Saab to inform ...and what happened there? Did they try to contact Siddiqui? Is it Siddiqui's plan all along? Or maulvi team is super enthusiastic to get the Nikah done and then leisurely go to SM? Both the scenarios are distasteful and unrealistic.
2. If Zoya want to stop Najma's wedding, why didn't she tell what happened to asad on phone...don't she have time sense instead of waiting to tell this after reaching home via Auto?
3. What kind of help Ayaan want by coming out of the hiding place, he had cell phone and he could have called police from the room he is hiding ...what was necessary to come out and sit in bride groom's place ...forget about asking Maulvi for help from Goons.
4. Why did not Zoya and Ayaan clarify things with maulvi ...for god sake people are taking pics and congratulating them...how much ever confused you are ...don't you have common sense to clear that out...okay Zoya has to rush back for her Nikah ...what urgent work Ayaan had that he couldn't take time to clarify things with Maulvi team?
5. Why didn't Asad took time to ask and understand what exactly happened so that he can come up with sensible plan to handle maulvi team and Haseena instead of buying in to Ayaan's great plan. Ayaan want Zoya to act as his wife until Nikath Nikah ..wow what happens if Haseena realizes that Ayaan divorced Zoya and Asad is marrying his divorced ex bhabi and she says I dont want any relationship with this family I want my both sons divorce their wives as they belong to this disgusting family ...then what will the lead trio do ? Zoya and Ayaan re marry to pacify Haseena ...such a bullshit.
You can show twists but have some logic and have some respect for viewers intelligence. If QH team is doing this for TRPs then they should be aware that such nonsense will drive away viewers and even worse a show may go off air ...god save QH that I once loved and died to watch.
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