THE UNKNOWN FACT(AsYa &AyRa FF)

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assalamuwalekum QHians..well am renu..i am newbie in the forum,i usually write ff's so thought of writing one on qh too.. hope u people like my concept and its no where related to the show...here is the prologue..pls ignore typos...

PROLOGUE:

He was searching for her since last half an hour but it was of no use as he still couldn't find her he was dam worried about her .he had combed every inch of the house but still he couldn't find her .he left all the hope he was about to call the police ,but just then he heard some sounds from the basement of the house.he went in the direct the sounds came now the sound were clearly heard."HAPPY B'DAY TO YOU .. HAPPY B'DAY TO YOU ..MAY GOD BLESS YOU MAY GOD BLESS U DEAR DIDU HAPPI B'DAY TO YOU " "MANY MORE HAPPI RETURNS OF THE DAY DIDU ."it was all that he could hear.he got it she was in the basement watching her sister's b'day's video as she does every year she does ,he opened the door and yes he was right she was sitting on the sofa in the basement watching her sister's b'day video which was her last b'day .

seeing the video she was crying .her nose had already turned in to red becoz of crying he slowly went near her and kept his hand on her shoulder.and call her"Humeira".she slowly looked up to him"ayaan why does good thing doesn't last longer? merey sat hi esa kyu hothahey?jesko bhi me pyaar karthihu wo muje si dur bohat dur chalajathahey bachpan me ammi aur abbu ..thin sal phele didu .kyu meri sat hi isa kyu hotha hey"now she strtd sobbing .

According to the world AsYa are dead but they are still alive it was the plan of the bad people who are using AsYa's knowledge for there own benefits and profits by hiding them in an special island with lots of security and protection so that they couldn't escape AsYa doesn't have any other optn expect doing what they are asked too...

Far away from this two in island in a electro guarded room there was another gal who was thinking about this gal..she was holding a photo was four people (ie.Ayaan , Humeira ,asad & zoya)she was crying too."zo tu tek ho na "ask asad to zoya"ah Mr.khan ..me tek hu bas chotu ki yad ayethi ."said zoya weeping her tears.and then she continued "apako yaad hey Mr.khan jab hum sab sat me they tho meri b'day per useney muje kithana bada suprize party diya tha?."asked zoya looking at him."ah zo yad hey kesi bulunga usey din ko terey sisy ne tho meri wat lag diyatha us surprise party key arrangement karathey wakthi ..jiju ye karo wo jiju wo karo .jiju lights check..jiju video check ..order pe order diyahi jarahithi .. ."he said laughing remembering about that day.."ah wo hey hi esi har chiz ko perfect chathihey"said zoya give asad a small smile.

so here i go with of prologue of my stry ...pls gve ur feedback plz do like and comment, it only takes a few seconds to like and a couple of minutes to comment...and criticism and suggestn are always welcome..and please do tell me that i should continue it or not

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Posted: 11 years ago
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res for index...

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Interesting ...plsss continue 😃
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Originally posted by: love.asad.zoya

Interesting ...plsss continue 😃

thank u ..

well that will be based on u people response to my concept...😃

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i will see the response and tell u people that i will continue this one or not

and for pm's pls kindly add me...

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sounds interesting!! do cont nd PM me if possible
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Posted: 11 years ago
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hey tis is interesting...
do continue soon n do pm me...
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Originally posted by: Missvishtoofani

sounds interesting!! do cont nd PM me if possible

thank u ...

and yup will pm u if i contnue...😃

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Originally posted by: jazsidhu

hey tis is interesting...

do continue soon n do pm me...

thank u ,,,

will pm u if i continue...

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