One More Day Without You! Asya Three Shot - Page 8

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Posted: 11 years ago
#71
Thanxallooot to all of you fah liking the banner,,,😃😃

it was my first try,,,
hope so, it wud get better with time n better knowledge of softwares,,,
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Posted: 11 years ago
#72

Originally posted by: mysticlover

The banner was really good...
I loved how you showed Asad n Zoya's engagement in color n their faces in black n white on either sides...
Good work!! :)


Yup,,,...this is how their life has gotten after zoyaan track,,, devoid of love, devoid of emotions n devoid of colors,,, 😕😭🥱

n thnx
Edited by Maliaa - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#73

Originally posted by: MILII_BAKSHI

i know its beautiful..sholly net is slow.. i will comment thru cell..ok

till than u can consider it res...
waise maine tareef pehle he kar di..haan



thanxalooot milli fah reading, viewing n commenting,,, 😊
am a regular reader of ur ff NIGHTMARE,, n i love the concept...

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Posted: 11 years ago
#74

Originally posted by: TANVI_SEXY

waiting for the update...



Soon,, soon...
just in the way!! had an important test today,, done with that so now i have to just gv a final touch to the update
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Posted: 11 years ago
#75

Originally posted by: Maheerah

A really good try...but i think a banner with the picture of awesome foursome would go well with the current track of your story...picture of AsYa and AyRa...just a suggestion



Yup,, thanx fah suggestion,,.. 😊
this ss wud be more about ASYA,, so didnt included AYRA in the banner 😲
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Posted: 11 years ago
#76

Originally posted by: Asya_KaJen

amazing banner

plz update soon lol
cant wait


Soon,, soon...
update is in the way!! had an important test today,, done with that so now i have to just gv a final touch to the update
😊😃


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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: geet7057

update
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update sooon...


Soon,, soon...
just in the way!! had an important test today,, done with that so now i have to just gv a final touch to the update
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Posted: 11 years ago
#78
So finally the wait is over,,

i want to update chapter 2 on page no. 20,,,
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Chapter 2:

Someone was waiting for "HER"

Zoya's Prov

At times, destiny plays nastiest games, and you are the one who has to suffer yet keeping calm.

In some corner of my mind, I believed that nothing happened, that Nikah is invalid. But, a wave of guilt was ruling dominant part of my mind, believing that I did the mistake. Okay! What if the nikah was done, still I don't admit ayaan something more than a friend. Mr. Khan would believe me, I know!! Because we both loved and trusted each other! Blindly!!. My very first priority was to get back to Khan's mansion and stop Najma's nikah. But, when I got back Nikah was done and everyone was congratulating each other.

Mr. khan was so worried for me. He asked me the reason for my absence, but there I was standing speechless due to two consecutive thresholds. He asked again and again. But I couldn't make it, as both things would broke him down. And then Ayaan's arrival in Mr. khan's room through window and then Black...Whole Black...Dark...and even Darker!! My own sound was ringing in my mind

Darkness becomes less scarier if you have a hand to hold on!

I was loosing that hand. i wanted to hold that hand through all the miseries, through all the halts and rifts. I wanted to grab that hand, who was leaving me to sink deep in the ocean of miseries. I had to convince him to stay beside me.

But he got something else on his mind,, Nikhat! His sister, his step-sister. Again he was thinking about his siblings. he again left his comfort and bliss somewhere behind in the race of winning hearts of his siblings.

But, this time I wouldn't let him to prejudice the situation, he would have to stay beside me. For me, for Him, for Us, for Love, for Thirst, for our tomorrow. But again rational side of his mind won, who was just thinking about Nikhat, Nikhat and Nikhat.

He holded my hand. A submissive part of my mind told me, that he is angry... he don't want to imagine you with being in nikah with someone else. So I started yelling again, about my mistake.

Mr. Khan please forgive me! sobs I am so sorry Mr. khan, sobs Mr. khan! everything just happened in unconsciousness, hiccups and sobs Mr. khan! I didn't knew anything! Mr. khan..

"Nikhat is in critical situation"

His shrill words pierced my heart deeply. He don't want me?? He would sacrifice me n my love for his sister? He would leave me?

And then he took me to Siddiqi Mansion, where destiny had to narrate Chapter Black of my life. Destiny had to push me under the tons of water. And there Mr. khan was standing like a marbled statue with expressions of nothing but pain.


Asad's Prov

Ms. Farooqi! Zoya! I thought Zoya has betrayed me, How come one can say QUBOOL HAI to a nikah and then comes back like yelling that I did a mistake, Nikah didn't happened. But! I was the one who betrayed her.

She believed in me, she knew I would amend everything, I am her Mr. khan, who can tackle every problem. She told me many times that she believed in me, even more than herself.

But, after what Ayaan told me, I took her to siddiqi mansion, and narrated most painful moments of our life. I sacrificed her, I sacrificed our love without going through other options,, and left her sobbing there between strangers. She knew none of them. I knew least of them, but still I loosed most precious and beloved component of my life for that house.

Ami told me, that she would bring back my love, my Miss farooqi. But is it possible? No.. she is in Ayaan's Nikah now. But did really Nikah happened? Do they both admit each other as husband and wife? No, they don't. my heart answered me before I could process all of the happenings

Zoya! You cannot imagine that how the guilt, how the rage is killing me deep inside. Every time I call you with a hope that this time your heart may melt down, the dejection which follows, pierce each and every part of my body. The blood draining out of my broken heart is making me to drown in oceans of miseries and guilts. Each passing moment without you makes me to die thousand deaths Zoya,.

Zoya! Today I again, promise you, that trust you hold in me, I wouldn't let it go down. I would bring you back in my life Zoya! I would bring our happiness back into our lives. We would be together again for eternity.


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Zoya's Prov:

Why Mr. Rashid Ahmed Khan is trying to comfort me? He is trying to make me understand the situation as? As a friend? As Mr. khan's father? As Ayaan's father? As Nikhat's father or what?

Surely he isn't playing role of a friend he is claiming to. If he had understood me well, then he should know, that I cannot imagine of living without, the only love of my life, Mr. Kha... but, look! I am living, I am done with seven long days without him. I have gone through 7 miserable nights where only sound I could listen was of my sobs n hiccups.

Nightmares of burning building have gotten lost some where back in time. Nowadays, I see myself burning, sobbing and splintering in the nightmares. I can see Mr. khan walking away from me, on a road which disappears behind his steps. Sometimes the dreams are horribly vivid with ear-drums tearing silence.

why Mr. Rashid Ahmed Khan is behaving like I am going to stay in siddiqi mansion for ever as Ayaan's wife. Once nikhat's nikah is over, then everything would be back at place. Really? Everything would be back at place? I would be in Mr. khan's home again? I would be in his life again? He would take me in his arms again? Is it possible to turn over the life back to normal? These unanswered questions are driving me nuts? Why there isn't anybody in this whole house who can understand me and can make me understand that how my life who has parted the normal track can be back to the track.

Mr. khan have called me at least 1000 times in last 7 days. I know he must be loosing his temper. But, what he has done to me cannot be amended by these few calls. I don't know if I would be ever capable of forgiving you mr. khan!

Asad's Prov:

Count down has started.

It's Nikhat's engagement today. IT'S NIKHAT'S ENGAGEMENT TODAY!! Ayaan has invited me for the engagement.

I have to be there. Nikhat, Nuzhat and Ayaan all want me to be there. But, don't they know it wouldn't be possible for me to be there??

I would have to face her, I cannot imagine her cold face. The cheerful face which once was a mark of happiness, life and love, would be no more same. How I would go through the hate and dejection she would be carrying for me in her heart? the heart which once knowed nothing but to love me. The heart which started pounding in disjointed rhythms on my single touch. Nothing would be same.

But I have to face her, to tell her that I would resolve everything. I would keep all the puzzle pieces back on their place, once nikhat gets married to farhan. I love her and I wouldn't ever make her cry again once this last storm is over.

This is last storm in our life Zoya! I promise it would be over soon.


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Nikhat's Engagement: Siddiqi Mansion

A small elegant ceremony was arranged at Siddiqi Mansion. Outsiders just belonged to Haseena b's family. One day back, Shireen had gone to Khan's Villa to invite to invite Asad and Dilshaad, not as strangers or outsiders or rivals but as familiars to whom Shireen was owing all of her happiness, but as sacrificers who sacrificed glow of their lives to illuminate dark luck of her daughter Nikhat.

Beauty of extravagant interior was enhanced by the alternative bands of mirror strings and delicate fairy lights. Shimmering white long curtains were running along the royal elaborated window frames.

Rashid, Dadi and Nuzhat were waiting for guests at the entrance. Ayaan moved to the welcome area as soon as he watched asad parking his car in parking lot of SM. Ayaan hugged Asad, while welcoming him with nothing but tears. Rashid also moved further to embrace his son who had donated his heart to save his daughter's life. The cold eyes compelled him to step back.

Dadi was witnessing each and every gesture and emotion apprehensively and in no time she got the point, that there is something which is hidden from her, from family.

Asad got into the hall. His eyes were just searching for one figure, for only one girl. The girl who was center of his all happiness, the girl without whom he was having sleepless nights, the girl without whom he could not imagine having a single breath. Yet, he was breathing, but with a hope, that she would come back to his arms, to his life for their Eternal Love, which was carried by both in their wounded hearts for each other.

I hate waiting, but if waiting means to be with you, I will wait for as long as forever, to be with you

And then after a wait of long 30 minutes, which lasted for centuries for him, HE SAW HER,, he saw her coming down, with her eyes sticked to the stair steps, ignorant of the facts that how someone was waiting for her one glance, how someone was waiting for her one word? that how someone was waiting to look into her face for eternity with insanity? that how someone was waiting to hold her hand and to take her away from this cruel world who always demand sacrifice from the people who love and care? that how someone was waiting to take her away from the sight of people and kiss her to his last breath...





That's it!! 😳😕
I don't know if it's just a crap,, now i would try to move this ss ahead of the daily episode, so that i can add more of mine stuff then gul's 😉😉

i would try to make
My Asad kind of more daring,
zoya kind of more stubborn,
and Asya romance kind of more bold,,,
and never mind Razia kind of more Evil...

Leave your all comments after hitting like,,
and yes all joota, chappals and tomatoes are open heartily welcomed!! 😊😊
Edited by Maliaa - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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yepp i m first to comment
its awesome👏👏

and what asad came at nikhat nikah😃😃

thanks for pm😊😊

and waiting for zoya reaction😛😛

update soon 😛😛

Edited by 11sinal - 11 years ago

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