Originally posted by: MagsDhingra
Hey frst of ol ur story is really gud
i lyked this part vry much
aftr long tym i read a long update which i lved vry mch
asad boiling woth anger was awesome nd d way he was talkng with was olso gud
only one sugeestion plz add some swt and innocent romantic moments between thm nd also find a grl for imran
last but nt d least plz update nxt prt olso vry vry long...thnku
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