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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: webuser7



Before I sign off, here's a portion of my conversation with my daughter on Friday morning. I was brushing her hair while we watched the BTS (D - Daughter, m - moi)

D: Why did Zoya get married to Ayaan? They (Asad and Ayaan) don't even look the same. How did she get confused?
M: umm, it was an accident (sure Asad would have said: umm, woh actually...)
D: sigh, how's that possible?
M tries to change the topic
D: is there a Farhan in the show too?
M: yes, but its different and he is an adult.
D: Is the story (Faasle) about the past when this big boy was a small boy?
M: no, no, no. They are 2 different stories. It's not real but instead just stories.
M scratching her head and wondering if the hospital has an extended return policy for babies! Just kidding! 😃Off apple picking tomorrow!



Eee your daughter is soo cute 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
As usual superb update dear... AsYa moments were really very cute... N waiting for ur nxt update...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: me2you

Arre toh kya hua...first seat na hi sahi, first row second seat toh mil gaya! 😃


Laptop: check. India Forums: check. Faasle update: check. Full focus and attention: check
Tea: check. Music: check (Bheegi Bheegi Raaton Mein). Sangeeta Di mode and mood: check.

ok, you succeeded...u brought a smile on my face with that😃

Lets hit it!

Good to see the fierceness in Dilshaad when that stupid driver did not want to take Rashid to the hospital. They might have been away from each other for the past 22 years, but she is still the same woman in love with this man.

In times of emergencies, one forgets all the bitterness

Zoya's house
Shayad hum dono ki hi nazron ne dhokha khaa liya (You got that right my friend...)

"hope you are not thinking of a Victoria ride at midnight?" (He got scared here 😆 We would not mind such a ride, if that means it will end the way it had ended the first time) 😳

"What? Ambidextrous? (I had the same expression and reaction)

"Aap ke haath se khaane ka kuch aur hi mazaa tha Mr. Khan." (Koi shak...lucky you Zoya. Kaash he could also feed me like that) 😳

Khud tho pagal ho hi, mujhey bhi pagal kar deti ho (Aur aap humein pagal kar dete ho)

Hospital emergency room
"please Dilshaad. Mujhey chhod kar mat jao. I need you." (He is still the same man who is in love with this woman)

Hospital scene
Aaj raat unke kisi family member ko inke saath hospital mein rehna chaahiye (You are the only family he wants right now, Dilshaad...)

Agar galti ki bhi thi tho Allah zaroor aapko usey theek karne ka maukaa deta. Allah apne sab bando ko maaf kar deta hai (Fantastic...very well said) 👏

"please Dilshaad. Mujhey chhod kar mat jao. I need you." (Ahw..very emotional. Poor Rashid, my heart went out to him)

Zoya's studio
I know I am a bit selfish but I need you (Acha, toh Zoya madam was pretending. Very cute and sweet excuse)

"liar! Ek baar keh ke tho dekha hota, of course I would have stayed behind for you (Wow, did not see this one coming!

I just loved their scene. It was cute, sweet, adorable 😳Just when I thought that Zoya had outsmarted Mr. Khan very cleverly, he strikes back with is own smooth attitude. Very smart!
No one can win from him. I am in love this Asad Ahmed Khan

This AAK is my ideal AAK image. Hope to see him like this on the show one day😆

Acha, so Maya is indeed cooperating with the enemies. Imran yaha bhi hai 😡 Why have I this fear that Imran has somehow joined hands with Ayaan...??? I still have my doubts about Ayaan's character. Yes, he loves his family and would never harm them but pata nahin kyun. I have the feeling he can go to quite an extent in order to get rid of certain people in his life.

wait and see😉

Was it just a coincidence that Zoya had tricked him into staying back? Or Allah's wish?
(It was Allah's wish, Zoya toh sirf ek zariya thi...) 😊

Hospital scene
Mrs. Dilshaad Khan. Relationship: Wife (Dj vu! History repeats itself)

yeah I almost decided to eliminate the signature scene as it was getting repetitive but left it to add to the full circle here😆 The signatures have helped reduce faasle in all these relationships here

Next morning
"just give me a command your highness. Your command is my order." (Now that is Mr. Khan for you) Hayee...

"Jahan usey hona chaahiye tha. Bahut pehle. Jisey hum sab ne kai din ignore kiya."

Hospital scene
"Jahan unhein hona chaahiye tha. Bahut pehle. Jo tum logon ne kitne saal ignore kiya."

Those two last lines...what a beautiful way of storytelling. Excellent 👏👏👏

thanks 4 noticing. Actually both scenes had a similar theme...so that's why I wrote them in tandem


And like always, you do it again Di. You give us another fantastic update. I liked this update very much, because:
- Focus was on four characters: Rashid-Dilshaad and Asad-Zoya
- Focus was on two couples; one purani and one nayi
- Dilshaad and Zoya are very much alike (both are strong woman with an immense amount of love for the one they love)
- The hospital scene where Dilshaad did exactly the same thing what Zoya had done 5 years ago
- Rashid and Zoya doing, feeling and saying the same thing. Both need their respective lovers to be there with them and for them
- There is little hope for the purani couple to get back together

people will get punished based on their sins

Never fear the shadows of your past mistakes. They simply mean there's a new light shining somewhere nearby
(Mr. Rashid Ahmed Khan...that new shining light has come...in the name of Dilshaad Khan...)

aww...good one

Sangeeta Di, this story (your story) needs to come alive. That is the only justice that can be done to this FF. You are a true master of storytelling, dialogues, you know how to make your readers feelings come alive, there is always the right amount of romance, drama, suspense, humor and action in your stories.
Amazing, wonderful, brilliant, fantastic, superb... aur chahiye???

Bas bas Narges...zyaada mat chadao. I am just fulfilling my hobby...aur kuch nahin

Love you Di! 🤗Love ya too


P.S. I have this quite wala nice idea for an OS or TS or whatever you want to call it 😆
But, since you are busy with Faasle and you have already an idea for your next one... I will save this idea in my hard drive wala brains 😉sounds good :) waise u should give it a try too. Aise hi sab shuru karte hain.



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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: anushreemishra

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i read the update...i am sorry i am a little stubborn i couldn't wait till morning😆waise dexter kept me company but now i am going to sleep i will unres in the morning😃

wow, u are a late sleeper


ohk so i knew you were going to update today and since i had to catch with 'dexter'
i thought why not wait for the update too and so i kept refreshing the page so that i could res as soon as you updated but still i was no. 3😭chalo koi ni atleast i made it to the first page
So narges and me have been waiting for so long for this update and you won't believe how much i have missed faasle ab kya karen ap hamesha itna regular rehti hain ki aapne humari aadat bigad di😆
wow amazing update as usual...

it's become a habit for me too...my faasle characters almost live at home with me😆


Asad nd his family has a great knack to handle delicate situations with utmost care,patience and intelligence...i think zoya learned this while she was living at asad's place😃

this is my ideal image for asad...will Gul give us a hero like that one day?

After her separation from Rashid, she had never looked back, never worried about his health, his well being or whether he was even alive but today, when he lay unconscious in her lap, she forgot all the bitterness and all she could see was the man she had once loved more than anyone in the world.

well isn't this the case with all our loved ones...no matter how much they have hurt us when we see them in pain or in a problem we keep all our differences apart and do everything to help them

Dr.Ali comes to dilshad's rescue again😃

So as we guessed Cirrhosis it is

"Rashid, kaash aapne khud khushi ki jagah sahi raasta apnaaya hota. Agar galti ki bhi thi tho Allah zaroor aapko usey theek karne ka maukaa deta. Allah apne sab bando ko maaf kar deta hai lekin jo insaan khud ko hi na maaf karna chaahe, jo apne aap ko sirf sazaa dena chaahe, uski madad koi nahin kar sakta."

Beautiful lines di😃it is said god helps those who helps himself and rashid could never gather up the courage to helf himself

yes, just shows that Dilshaad could have possibly forgiven him if he had fixed his mitakes years ago...

"please Dilshaad. Mujhey chhod kar mat jao. I need you."oh man this brought tears to my eyes...i feel bad for rashid

i was really waiting to see asad zoya conversation after Rashid left and di it was amazing...

Nothing worse than seeing the love of your life crying infront of your eyes is it?and a man crying is a big deal...my poor asad he is hurt so much...I think he is confused na whether to believe rashid or not?I mean there must be so many thoughts going on his min right now anger,betrayel and longing...

Zoya will always be our zoya...she knows how to lighten the mood😆

Ambidextrous?for sometime i thought that zoya was telling the truth...i never thought it will just be her plan to stop asad from leaving so soon😆

"Aap ke haath se khaane ka kuch aur hi mazaa tha Mr. Khan." Wow they never stop teasing each other and having fun no matter how serious the situation is they always manage to make each other smile😳

Asad couldn't help smiling. He placed his arm around her and pulled her closer, "you know Zoya. That's why I am crazy about you. When I am with you, I can't stay sad for too long. Khud tho pagal ho hi, mujhey bhi pagal kar deti ho."

aww this was so cute...i know asad has become a little naughty and now expresses his feeling but it still surprises me to see him say what is on his mind with so much ease

as I said, this is amy ideal Asad...now that he has changed in this ff, I will not regress him back like Gul has done in her story😆

She walked away from her canvas, pulled a blanket from the closet and covered him gently. Then she untied his shoelaces with her left hand and removed his socks and shoes as cautiously as she could, without waking him up.

Awww that was so cute😃honestly i thought she would lie with him on the couch and we will probably see the two love birds sleeping cuddled together like i imagined and asked you to show but she left😭chalo koi nahi i will get my cuddling later😆

first of all that rocking chair is not that big and secondly, her cast would make it impossible for her to squeeze in with him

So our suspicions were right Maya indeed was a mole working for Imraan...so imraan works for Razia😲well i guess Imraan naam ke log can never be honest 😆

Asad sat on the floor next to her bed and watched her sleep all night. Seeing her safe and sleep without any worries acted as balm for his bruised heart.

Inspired from QH😆nothing gives you peace as much as seeing your loved ones enjoying a peaceful sleep away from all the worldly worries...waise i am glad you included this i loved this scene in QH and it reminded me of that time😳

yes...straight lift off with a twist😆

so zoya ki chori finally pakdi gayi...i can imagine her tounge tied guilty face😆

"Are you stalking me?😆man these guys are hilarious...they never fail to give youa good laugh

So dilshad signs the documents as Rashid's wife...you have a tendency to make people sign as they would want their relationship to be..first it was zoya,then asad and now dilshad😆

yes, i have shown how the signatures have helped reduce the faasle between different couples...kinda like a stitch that ties them together

"Jahan usey hona chaahiye tha. Bahut pehle. Jisey hum sab ne kai din ignore kiya."

"Jahan unhein hona chaahiye tha. Bahut pehle. Jo tum logon ne kitne saal ignore kiya."

wow maa beta dona ek hi line bole...dramatic purposely did it😆

I can't wait to see how asad nd zoya will react when they come to know about asad

You can't imagine how happy i am after reading this update and writing my comment...i am smiling ear to ear...yes to tend to do that to me so thanku for that

ohk so this time i dedicte "Tumko dekha to ye khayal aya" coz i have been missing you so much and the updates and i was relieved and happy to see you back with a faasle update😳

Love you loads di🤗


love that ghazal😃 Love ya too Anushree

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: AAK0007

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Wow wow di u again nailed it. Very nice update. So dilshad admitted rashid in hospital. Rashid is very critical. Dilshad signed the paper as the relationship of wife. Hope in future the dumb creature shirin and selfish creature ayan not insult her. The last dialogue of dilshad has surely double meaning.
Asya r so cute. I miss them. Zoya wants to stop asad thats why she gave what an excuse. Only zoya farooqui can think this kind of idea.
Asad is surely a lion. Not like gul's crying hero. He pounce maya and now true face of imran. I think imran is also joined with razia. Well i need another mangalpur di.
Update next part soon.


Thanks AAK. Yes, this asad lives up to his name😆

another mangalpur???? let me see
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: gossipgirlxoxo

Great ... they are soul mates inhain koi alag nahin kar sakta hai..

Its so easy to dislike Ayaan here.
nice touch ambidextrous wala.
AsYa separation hoga ki nahin aage ?


kyun 5 years of separation wasn't enough kya?😆
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: _vineeta_

Hi Sangeeta great going..

Loved the Rashid and Dilshaad part. She is right, he gave up on them before trying, else faith would have given him hope and courage. They never left each other in hearts were just drifted.
Ayaan, better treat this woman with respect...
Asad Zoya part very sweet, both are at last on same page, kind off, where Rashis is concerned. Lol I loved that Imran is baddie in your story too, he guy creeps me in QH. Maya twist was nicely added..


thanks Vineeta. Yes, I had planned on Imran being the baddie here even before najma got married on the show😆
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: monaco

Mam! Fan ho gaye hum. I like your portrayal of each character because it is true to what QH had showed them as in the first episode. Loved the update!!! Thanks for the pm!!! 👍🏼


Thanks Mona. I didn't realize you have read this ff. Welcome aboard😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: jeenia123

Wow.Great update as usual... i think story is moving towards end soon? its feeling so. and i just hope this will be longest FF till now on IF... having maximum number of threads... just loved all the story...


It will definitely end one day but not yet😃 Thanks for your patience

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