Faasle III parts 31-40 - Page 74

Originally posted by: me2you

Unexpectedly pleasant surprise. I saw your update in the morning, lekin meri kismat toh dekh, I could not read it and comment. Had a few things to do and you know that I have to give you my full undivided attention. Aur woh waqt finally aahi gaya...

The moment I read: drama filled update...I was like; oh no, where are my tissues?! Was it needed? A big YES! Aapne toh mujhe phir se rula diya 😭

Thanks Narges...yes, I always know you will back after reserve😃

Rashid and Zoya scene

- Right from the moment he stepped into her house till he left, right from the spoken words to the emotions and feelings, you managed to bring it our very real. 👏

- The way Rashid was feeling very uncomfortable to talk to Zoya about her nikaah with Ayaan

- Let's not forget Asad (who was hiding behind the couch), even he experienced so many emotions during that one scene: from hatred, to anger, to a 'melt down', to confusion and even perhaps pity.

- The little confusion from Zoya when she did not get what Rashid wanted to say

- Zoya's statement about her mahzab

- Rashid's confession about his attack on Asad

Exceptionally well written Sangeeta Di. The whole scene came alive. A visual treat I must say! 👏

Thanks for liking that scene...yes, I had to change it from my original plan. Hope it worked out this way

He placed his hand inside his pocket and almost pulled his pistol out (Easy...angry young man)

Main tho dozakh ke laayak bhi nahin hoon (Those who really repent their sins and mistakes, pure and right from the heart, Allah surely gives them a second chance)

Allah is more forgiving than human beings, right?

His father had finally confessed to his crime but instead of getting angry with him, why did he pity his old man? (Akher abbu hai tera... Kahin na kahin you will pity him because you are his own flesh and blood. He has come quite a long way to confess about his crimes, toh ek na ek din he will also see that nothing of that was worth it...)

It was an irony that Rashid's visit had left both Asad and Zoya confused (Indeed it was)

Does this means Asad has created a soft spot for his abbu? Will Zoya dislike Rashid now?

Both of them will be right from their own perspective. He (Asad) has hated his abbu for way too many years and all of a sudden he is getting to know the other side of Rashid.

She (Zoya) knew that other side of Rashid, but was being introduced today to that side of Rashid which only Asad knew.

Zoya will definitely have reservations about Rashid. Asad will be caught between duty and his newly found soft corner for his abbu...wait and see what both of them do

Rashid-Dilshaad scene

Apni zindagi ke faisle hum karte hain (True...lekin sometimes kismat forces us to take some unwanted decisions. Read: current QH track)

"Iska matlab aap abhi bhi utne hi kamzor hain jitne 22 saal pehle the." (Ouch Rashid...that must have hurt. Way to go Dilshaad 👍🏼 Yes, you still love him but show him that you are not a kamzor aurat)

I really liked this scene. So nice to see both of them for the first time in the same frame. It is such a beautiful, romantic and very blissful memory to remember all those moments spent together. Woh jaawani ke din... Unfortunately , things turned out very ugly for both of them, but hopefully they will be able to make those memories again, in good and happy times. 😊

It was refreshing to see other characters in the spotlight today than Asad and Zoya. The man of the day was definitely Rashid Ahmed Khan. Loved the way he was the central character. It was very much needed to see his side from the story, to feel what he feels.

Nice you put a Rashid-Dilshaad scene. Unfortunately it was quite emotional, but it had to start someday and I guess meeting like this was meant to be...

Dilshaad, his first love, is the one who told him to get rid of the alcohol. Is she the one who will help him doing that by being his savior? I don't want the 'poor man' to die, because I feel he deserves a second chance. For sure, he will have some medical/health problem because of his alcohol addiction. Is that his redemption? Maybe just a part of it...

Btw, how about Ghafoor and all? We will get to see him in the next parts right?

yes, later I will write a part with Ghafoor and Asad-zoya...not yet

'It's not the mistake that matters; it's how you deal with it, what you learn from it, and how you apply that lesson to your life'

(Zaara ghor farmaiye Rashid saheb...) Good one again! Mistakes are for learning...

Of course...how can you NOT end without a cliffhanger... You know that makes me greedy for the next update right? Please don't get upset if I spam you for updats, kyunki with these cliffhangers you ask for it! 😛 I would have loved to update today but this valid/invalid nikaah has worn me out😕

I thought I could not handle more drama after today's episode, lekin aapne phir se sabaat kar diya that you are maha talented especially with emotional scenes, because this one once again one hell of an emotional ride. 👏

P.S. I can already see a next thread coming up! 😉 ...looks like. All thanks to you guys

Originally posted by: _vineeta_

Sangeeta this has to be your best, I loved every chapter before but this one maybe because of its relevance with current track ot what?, just loved it bit more..

I felt it was your slap to Gul with ZoYaan:). Loved how it was approached by Rashid and then his guilt after realization hit him on what he was doing.

Asad seeing real emotions of his dad was brilliant, Zoya her father figure, shattered her again. Rashid, would have loved to hate him but cant by the end when he left house.

Dilshad and Rashid's milan again perfect, dont kill him please.

Originally posted by: Enchantress

I feel sorry for rashid. But, I didn't feel like crying though because it mentioned lives most important facts that you ripe what you sow. One wrong decision of ours can cost our whole damn life. Rashid has done such mistakes in past but the only good thing is that he is sorry for whatever he has done and he has already been punished. He should be given another chance to live a peaceful life where he gets everything he has lost, his family. I guess even after his mistakes somewhere his lady love still loves him. May be because whatever he had done was by mistake and doing many crimes he has also done some good things like giving a life to Shireen and Ayaan. Ayaan not being his son still he has loved him as his own. That shows that he has a good heart.

Not only Rashid even Siddiqui has been sorry for what he did. I guess god forgives you once you start feeling sorry for your mistakes and try to correct them. The only devil is Razia, I just want her to be punished. And, she truly deserves that.

Asad and zoya have come across very big truths is quite difficult for them to except. Where in zoya always had a soft corner for Rashid now knowing the truth what will be her reaction. Will she take him as the same well wisher he was or would she start hating him. Asad all these years have only hated him, now knowing his father excepting his mistakes what will his reaction be. I am quite eager to know what happens further.

Ayaan, he thinks that zoya is his unpaid maid or what. I hate him for excepting to marry her. He is utterly selfish that is it...

A very emotional update.

Continue soon.

Dee

Originally posted by: LaVita-E-Bella

As if I'm already not crying enough from the show right now, you're breaking my heart even more with your update. Wonderfully and beautifully written. I had tears in my eyes. Drama and emotion filled update.

I'm happy you did not have a confrontation between Asad and Rashid here, because this is not how I wanted their first meeting to be like. Thank you for that!

thanks Lavita. Yes, the confrontation shall happen later

You know when I saw Rashid was going to the beach and the beach scene before Dilshaad came, I really thought he was going to kill himself. Like drown himself in the water and was like noo!

Rashid is def a coward and is committing a slow suicide with alcohol...he is defa grey character. While it's easy to hate him. one can also sympathize with his plight...if not condone his actions

Dilshaad and Rashid part was so so so amazing. Cried like a baby. I wish the show gave them more screen space (it had somewhat in the beginning). Their hearts are connected where both were at the beach at the same time. It reminded me of the time Rashid stepped foot in the house and Dilshaad knew upstairs (one of my favorites). Please don't kill him off...please please please. While I have a feeling someone will die in your story, please not yet. I want to see Zoya-Ghafoor reunion, and Asad-Najma-Rashid reunion.

People will def have to pay for their sins...yes, I have a Ghafoor-Asya scene in future and Rashid-family scene...wait and see😉

Every line Dilshaad said, I was like spot on you tell him girl. When she told him not to blame kismat (reminded me of Ghafoors words with Ayaan to not blame muqaddar for his actions) for his decisions and especially when she was like "iska matlab aap abhi bhi utne hi kamzor hai jitne 22 saal pehle the". I pity him and feel sorry for him.

yeah, i am so sick of everyone blaming their muqaddar on QH😆

Btw I just want to say one thing, which I have not mentioned yet, but I love how well you portray Islam in your story. You're research on it, and wanting to get everything right is so admirable. You're doing a damn better job than Gul, and I give you props for that. Seriously. I've noticed this since the beginning of the story and have a lot a lot of respect for you.

I make a lot of bloopers about Islam as I am not as familiar with their rules. I am lucky to have readers like Annu and Narges who keep correcting me time and again😃

Originally posted by: MisHumptyDumpty

When you update i will give a Darruu party :(

Originally posted by: me2you

Today I am in a good mood...therefore, I will ask for an update the civil way, the formal way, the nice way:

Dear Mrs Sangeeta, (Don't know your last name. I could have said Mrs. Khan but I am in no mood to fight with you or your dear husband)

On behalf of your readers, I would like to ask you the following question: Would you please be so kind to give us an update?

Woh kya hai nah, we believe that this FF is one of the best stories we have ever read. Yeh sirf aapke wajeh se hai that we are so greedy for an update. If you did not write such a wonderful story, we would never dare to spam you, to bother you and to scream for an update.

Hopefully the message is clear. If not, please do let us know and we will figure out another way to make sure the message is clear.

Have a good day,

Kind regards,

All the Faasle readers and myself 😊