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Posted: 12 years ago
As if I'm already not crying enough from the show right now, you're breaking my heart even more with your update. Wonderfully and beautifully written. I had tears in my eyes. Drama and emotion filled update.
I'm happy you did not have a confrontation between Asad and Rashid here, because this is not how I wanted their first meeting to be like. Thank you for that!
You know when I saw Rashid was going to the beach and the beach scene before Dilshaad came, I really thought he was going to kill himself. Like drown himself in the water and was like noo!
Dilshaad and Rashid part was so so so amazing. Cried like a baby. I wish the show gave them more screen space (it had somewhat in the beginning). Their hearts are connected where both were at the beach at the same time. It reminded me of the time Rashid stepped foot in the house and Dilshaad knew upstairs (one of my favorites). Please don't kill him off...please please please. While I have a feeling someone will die in your story, please not yet. I want to see Zoya-Ghafoor reunion, and Asad-Najma-Rashid reunion. Every line Dilshaad said, I was like spot on you tell him girl. When she told him not to blame kismat (reminded me of Ghafoors words with Ayaan to not blame muqaddar for his actions) for his decisions and especially when she was like "iska matlab aap abhi bhi utne hi kamzor hai jitne 22 saal pehle the". I pity him and feel sorry for him.
Btw I just want to say one thing, which I have not mentioned yet, but I love how well you portray Islam in your story. You're research on it, and wanting to get everything right is so admirable. You're doing a damn better job than Gul, and I give you props for that. Seriously. I've noticed this since the beginning of the story and have a lot a lot of respect for you.

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Posted: 12 years ago

nau sau choohe khaa ke, billi Hajj ko chali.. ye hai Rashid ka haal..

just bcoz he is feeling guilty abt killing his own son doesn't mean all his past deeds would be washed off.. hope his beemaari would be jaan-levaa.. have no sympathy for this coward!!

interesting that Zoya didn't misinterpret Rashid's proposal.. she should have.. coz Ayaan se nikaah karne ka matlab toh ye banta hai ke he will divorce Humaira first and then marry Zoya.. so its interesting that how Zoya figured out that Rashid is talking abt her being Ayaan's second wife along with Humaira.. and Zoya's reaction was so thandaa.. aisi situation mein when someone proposes you to commit a major sin, koi itne tameez se thodi na baat karta hai.. she should have started off with Excuse me, Aapka dimaagh satthyaa toh nahin gaya..

wow.. u wrote the word Musalmaan!👍🏼 loved what u wrote in italics.. but don't worry Rashid.. ur first family is no less.. unka emaan bhi itna naik nahin.. they also need some big lectures on inter-cast marriage..😆

P.S. the way Asad interferes in Ayaan's personal matters, why he doesn't have this fear that if he kept on irritating him Ayaan would fire him..


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for Rashid-Dilshaad..


guzar gaya jo zamana usay bhula hi do
jo naqsh ban nahi sakta usay mitta hi do

khulay ga tark-e-ta'aluk ke baad baab-e-fana
ye aik aakhri parda bhi ab utha hi do

ruki ruki si hawa hai thaka thaka hai chand
wafa ke dasht main hairaan khaday hein raahi do

guzar raha hai jo lamha usay amar kar lain
main apnay khoon se likhta hoon tum gawahi do

kisi tarah se taghaful ka baab-e-shak tou khulay
nahi main pyaar ke qaabil tou kuch saza hi do

main kainaat ko gham se nijaat de doon ga
meri grift mai ik din agar tabaahi do
Edited by Annu.. - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
i lovee it plz continue soon and pm me
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Prizi

O god dilshad told him :o

really proud of zoya

btw what is mazhab?

mazhab means religion😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
hey di
awesome update...
felt bad for Rashid...
waiting for the next update...
do continue soon...
take care and thanks for the pm...
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Posted: 12 years ago
OMG such a fabulous update di...just loved it!!!
continue super soon!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wooowww!! I've missed quite a lot in the few days i haven't been on IF!! I found a bit of time and knew that i just had to read the updates for this ff (even though, there are many other ff's and ss's waiting to be read). This is great and just keeps getting more and more interesting and dramatic!! I'm so sorry, i haven't been reading and replying to your updates recently, i've been so busy with college and other work, i just have not had the time!! But please keep pm'ing me whenever you update and i promise whenever i get time i will read and reply!! Thank you!! x
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: anushreemishra

Yaay itni jaldi doosra update🥳

Waise i had a feeling ki kal ke episode ke baad you will update...divert your mind to something constructive right😉

yes, I would love to write part 38 now but this valid/invalid nikaah thesis that i have been writing is creating a problem😆
Honestly your update is a big relief di...i was very disheartened yesterday,i even cried and i felt i was about to throw up and upar se yahan pe around 24 hours se power has been out😡so yes m so glad you updated...
I think your updates have started to become my breakfast companions😳
now coming to the update...it was very emotional i had a lump in my throat😭but i prefer crying over something like this that has been so beautifully expressed and which makes sense rather than something that is pure BS(sorry i m still frustrated and its hot here😆)
Of course, he deserved it. Mr. Rashid Ahmed Khan deserved every bit of ill health and unhappiness in his life, Asad rationalized to himself.
Its said you hate a person only if you care for that person or if that person means something to you and and no matter what rashid did asad still craves for his father...his heart pains to see him like this but he is reassuring himself that Rashid deserved all this...very beautifully written di...i love how you showed asad's dilemma here the little boy in him still craves for his father and feels bad for him but the person who has been betrayed rationalizes why Rashid deserved all this so that he doesn't get swayed in his emotions...brilliant👏

whenever we have a heart to heart connection with someone, our heart responds first but then our mind takes over...such is the case with Asad. let's see what happens in next chapter...does asad forgive rashid or becomes more vicious
I am glad to notice that his smile when asad heard Rashid acknowleding zoya's importance in farhan's life
Asad must have been so confused first rashid says something that softens him,then something that hardens then again something...poor thing must be so confused
"Jaanta hoon tum Asad ko kitna chaahti thi lekin beti aise kab tak zindagi akele akele kaatogi? Iss liye hum soch rahe the ki kya tumhein Ayaan se nikaah karne mein koi aitraaz hoga?"I felt really angry with rashid here but i mellowed down when i read further
"Nahin uncle. Aap mujh se aisi cheez maang rahe hain jiski ijaazat na tho mera dil kabhie dega aur na mera mazhab. Humeira meri behen hai."This was one dialogue that was tweeked right?
I am glad that asad got to know that though zoya had been raised in US she knew her religion and culture very well...i could imagine the proud look on his face
"Main-main bahut bura insaan hoon Zoya. Maine in 22 saalon mein apna imaan hi nahin, apna zameer aur apna mazhab sab kuch kho diya hai. I am not fit to be a Muslim. Ek musalmaan ho kar tum se haraam karne ko keh raha tha? Kya ho gaya hai mujhey? Allah se itna door ho gaya hoon ki apno se hi itna badha gunaah karne ko keh raha hoon? Main tho dozakh ke laayak bhi nahin hoon."
Beautiful lines di...i felt bad for Rashid here...he fell down even more in his eyes today and probably to an extent from where it will be very hard to recover...nice touch...i loved how you added these lines to address the issue that was raise earlier...i must say even though you had to make changes in the story you managed to give us update very fast...waise what is 'dozakh'?😕 Yes, I am glad it worked out. Dozakh means hell. Razia uses this all the time in QH..that's where I learnt this word😃
I am happy zoya finally knew what she really meant to shireen...
I am glad zoya brought up that Rashid still loves dilsahd,najma nd asad more than anyone...
Zoya couldn't believe what she had just heard. Asad shut his eyes and leaned his head back. His father had finally confessed to his crime but instead of getting angry with him, why did he pity his old man?
I am happy that Rashid finally confessed everything but i feel bad for zoya for these 5 years she has considered rashid to be her true well wisher and today all her beliefs were questioned and asad pitied him...well i think he did see that how sorry rashid was for his deeds..i am glad he listened to everything with such a open mind...
I loved how on one side you showed zoya repenting and questioning all her times spent with rashid and on the other asad remembering all his beautiful memories associated with his father...

It was an irony that Rashid's visit had left both Asad and Zoya confused. Rashid had fallen from the pedestal in Zoya's eyes but had managed to create a stir in Asad's heart, elevating him from an absolutely black character to a human being with shades of grey.

Beautiful lines di😳 Yes, Zoya's illusion has taken a hit..does that mean she will comply with Asad in all his plans now???

So destiny brings the two estranged lovers together😊

Ya Khuda jo tuney mere muqaddar mein likha hai, wo maine hamesha qubool kiya hai lekin aaj main chaahta hoon apni is zindagi se aur apne muqaddar se hamesha hamesha ke liye mujhey rihaa kar de. Main thak gaya hoon. Laachaar hoon.

Now i get how much you love vaquar sheikh...i feel so bad for him here...he is so helpless and man i just forgot everything he said to zoya about second marriage all i can see his helpless eyes...you are wonderful di...honestly even the CVs haven't ever made me feel so sorry and bad for him that you made me feel in just these few lines...hats off to you

Vaqar sheikh is one of the finest actors in QH and had a perfect Urdu diction...I would love to see him redeemed in QH also

He broke down and fell on his knees, "I have killed my own son!"

I literally had a gulp in my throat and little water in my eyes when i read this...you are amazing...the whole convo between dilshad nd rashid was very beautiful nd touching and i have no more words to say more

Suddenly, he broke out into an incessant bout of coughing. He coughed to the point of vomiting. Dilshaad was scared. She saw him throwing up dark colored blood. The sand around him turned red within minutes as he continued to throw up.

Is he ill?does he have cirrhosis or something?i feel his condition will help Rashid bring closer to asad nd family which zoya may not like initially

I told u I will keep educating you all in all types of bimaris😆

This is a cliffhanger di i can't wait for the next part...

sorry i am too worn out to think of a song to dedicate but next time pakka NP

Loads nd loads of love🤗 Love ya too...love your attitude too. 😃 You bounce back quickly👏


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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Surya.Ravi

awesome, interesting, intriguing, drama, emotion packed, the episode was simply a roller-coaster ride of different emotions and feelings all put together.. well for starters Rashid's real face is in front of Zoya, I'am happy about that... Zoya now knows why Asad, Dilshad hate Rashid...A man like Rashid really needs to bleed with his guilt because of him many innocent lives were lost... Rashid does not deserve pity of anyone as it was the choices Rashid made which has landed him in the mire of trouble...I do not know to what extent Ayaan is involved in Rashid's word, but if Ayaan is equally a part of Rashid work then I really would have Humeira and Farhan to leave Ayaan and live with Zoya...as being associated with Rashid's other family itself is not safe...with this update the little sympathy I used to have for Rashid is also gone...hmmm.. the connection Dilshad, Rashid have, though Dilshad hates Rashid yet she has a soft-corner for him...but Rashid does not deserves it...ohhh..no.. Dilshad has told Rashid Asad is alive...this might create problems in Asad's investigation...I hope Rashid for now does not get to know AK is Asad...Main chahthi hoon kii jab Rashid, Ayaan, Shirin ko patah chale AK is Asad unke pairon ke neeche kii zameen kisak jaaye...anyway I hope now Zoya stands-up for herself and for her love and chooses a happy life with Asad... looking forward to read Asad, Zoya's view about Rashid and his other family and I'am also eager to read about Ayaan and Shirin's reaction when Rashid tells them Zoya has said 'No' to their proposal... that would really be very interesting...please do update soon... waiting for the next update very eagerly..😊


Thanks Surya. Justice shall definitely prevail by the end of the story..I agree Rashid and Ayaan have def committed sins. Let's see how they will redeem themselves or not???

Wait and see what Asad does in next two parts. Zoya will def cooperate with Asad more than she has
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Posted: 12 years ago
waiting for your update 😳

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