|AsYa OS| Doc! I Love You!

Page

Next Last

Mrinalini

@minakrish

Viewbie

+ 45

Posted: 12 years ago

THIS IS A "MEMBERS ONLY" POST
The Author of this post have chosen to restrict the content of this Post to members only.

235

Quote

Frequent Posters

Mahima

@Mahima_13

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

Fav dialogues first this time

" I need to meet Dr. Zoya!", said Asad loudly.

I know thoda weird hai but somehow I loved it

Unknown to everyone, the man of the family had things churning in his mind. He had completely lost himself to the doctor who treated his Ammi.

Loved this part ❤️

Nikhat used to visit Zoya once a week in the past month and had grown very close to her. Asad had been thinking of Zoya and used to meet her occasionally at the hospital with random reasons and also checking on his Ammis health.

Asad making excuses to meet Zoya... Awww

Zoya was coming over for lunch with the Khans. Asad heard this and a wide smile played on his lips.

I can imagine that

Im fine Aunty! Aapki tabiyat to bilkul theek honi chahiye! Every alternate day Mr. Khan mujhe aapki khabar dene hospital aa jaate hain!, said Zoya eyeing Asad.

Laag gayi Asad ki... His ammi would be an angel like always

Asad glanced at Zoya then and Nikhat and thought, Nikhat should stop calling Zoya Aapi

Totally loved this one

Doc! I love you!, he confessed.
Zoya smiled and blushed, then replied, My shift gets over at 8.., she winked and got into her car and ignited it.
I hope to see you at 8!, she shouted, threw a flying kiss and drove off to the hospital.

Perfect ending

Nothing could have been better

Edited by MjhtFan_Mahima - 12 years ago

Quote

Looks like you are new here. Register for free, learn and contribute.

Mahima

@Mahima_13

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

I was not anticipating an OS at all so soon

Subah when you whatsapped me the begining

I had totally loved it

And now the complete one

Awesome

👏

I am running out of words to comment on your works now

Cause I think I have said almost everything that is possible

I guess I need to come up with fresh comments as you are comming up with fresh ideas

Huge appalause for you

Luv ya big sister ❤️

Edited by MjhtFan_Mahima - 12 years ago

Quote

Ayra Nuzhat

@-LazyLamhe-

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

res

Unres

Aww! It was a cute one..😊

Let me tell you what I liked!!

Asad miyan?? Love at first sight!!😉

Asad meeting Doc every other day..he was so smitten!! 😳and Zoya telling all of this to Dilshaad and glancing at Asad once in a while..She was also smitten by then😳

Asad thinking that Nikhat should stop calling Zoya Aapi😆😆😆

Dilshad ne mauke par shauka maara aur shaadi ki baat shed hi di...😉

Asad saying he does not mind at all 😉 and then confessing "Doc I Love you"

Zoya blushing and saying she hopes to see him at 8😳😳

p.s- Its always fun to read your stuff..They are cute, adorable and light hearted🤗

Edited by -HoneyBunch- - 12 years ago

Quote

shreya mehra

@shreya11mehra

Stunner

Posted: 12 years ago

Res

JSt wao...love at first sight funda...

KYa bbaat hai..

SERIOUSLY ws waiting since 8 in da evening. ..n jst read it...such a amazing wrk dii..

THnx fr msg..

Edited by shreya11mehra - 12 years ago

Quote

Mahima

@Mahima_13

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

OS not even posted

And already 5 res

😆

Quote

Sohini Dasgupta

@.SoHu.

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

Oh I genuinely loved it😳
Sanjeevani won my heart😃
I loved the way Asad called her doc..😳

Quote

mrs. varun dhawan but you can call me fari. :)

@daydream.

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

Heyhey! It's me! 😉 😆

Aw, that was a sweet one! 😳

Asad was lovestruck when he saw Zoya for the first time, hehehe! 😆

I liked this idea, of Zoya being a doctor and everything. 👍🏼

Awesome! 👏

Love ya, and don't forget to write more OS's for us! 🤗

-Fari 😳 ❤️

Quote

Fuj

@-ElmoFuj-

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

This was actually very cute

Hahaha i enjoyed reading this one alot. Smitten by your way with words, really!

Quote

ALISHA ZEN

@LuvUAsYa

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#10

I AM SOOO SORRYY

I CANNOT GIVE HONEST COMMENT ...

coz 4 that iv to put up xactly d way u wrote n I cant do that its IMPOSSSIBLE!!!👏😆

coz this was written amaaazingly weelll...

sooo different concept... such a lovely precise story..

n d way uv wriiten it ...wooowww

I seriously loved it !!!!

Quote

1 2 3 4 5 ... 9

Theme - Theme 1 : The Bag (Graphicer - WildestDreams) The Weight of Love The rain drummed softly against the glass windows of the airport, a...

Expand ▼

AsYa FF ~ Broken Ties (chapter 5 updated)

[NOCOPY] Hello everyone! Happy to be here. I was searching for an opportunity to be here with all of you as a member after a long time as writer...

Expand ▼

*New chapter updated* Asya FF: Rendezvous with Honor

Asya FF: Rendezvous with Honor Asad Ahmed Khan is the prodigal son. All the tabloids say so. Coming from an affluent family in Bhopal, he's done...

Expand ▼

AsYa OS - Unfolding Yesterday

Writer - ExoticDisaster | Graphicer - Oh_nakhrewaali | Theme - Bag Unfolding Yesterday Zoya coughed, pulling the scarf higher over her nose and...

Expand ▼

AsYa OS - Mixed messages, Matched Hearts.

This is one of the entries I had submitted for Valentine's day contest - A Bag full of love. cover : oh_nakhrewaali | writer : missFiesty_69 |...

Expand ▼

Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".

|AsYa OS| Doc! I Love You!

Related Topics

Explore Topics