AsYa (TS): His Beautiful Dancer *UPDATED* LAST PART pg.28

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grad2011

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Posted: 12 years ago

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awesome plzz do update soon!!

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mrs. varun dhawan but you can call me fari. :)

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Posted: 12 years ago

#162

Grrr. . .I'm late again! 😡 😆

I love how Zoya is affected by Asad now! 😳

And, I always like a possessive Asad. 😉

Poor Zoe, Mark got injured and she can't perform.

WAIT. . .what if Asad danced with her?! That would be AH-MAZING!

Sorry, got into my fangirl mode again. 😆

Continue soon! 😛

-Fari 😳 ❤️

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Nim

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Posted: 12 years ago

#163

absolutely beautiful. sorry just not feeling well to write a long comment. the part was superb, looking forward to Asad's interrogations on her red puffy eyes.

cont soon.

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RAJ

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Posted: 12 years ago

#164

Very nice update. Waiting for next part.Update soon.

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rajnid68

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Posted: 12 years ago

#165

his smile warmed her heart. .smile was beautiful..

I want you...you are mine...

will not let her sleep in peace. .

asad will not take No for an answer.

mark sick...

zoya was looking forward to the fundraiser. .

now what..

asad to patner her..on the floor

awesome update. .

thanxs for the pm

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Asya0910

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Posted: 12 years ago

#166

cool! read it all in a go!!! great story!

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Posted: 12 years ago

#167

WOWWW

That is one hell of a sexy Mr. Asad Ahmed Khan. 😳Uff I can't imagine him the whole time in the office scene. My oh my...

"Feisty. Good to know." And then he turned away walking up to a black BMW and driving away. (Don't know, but this one line did it for me. Just felt something else)☺️

I don't knwo how Zoya does it, but it was for me I would not be able to resist him 😳

I am really looking forward to the last part.

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-Candz-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#168

Glad y'all liked it! Next update coming up . . . been busy!

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Tanvi

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Open your eyes baby *sighs dreamily*

^ That line was so aww-worthy 😳

And then when he said 'I get what I want and what I want is you darling' OMG that was hot!

And Mark is married? 😆 Awesome!

Your writing is lovely, Candy! I love all your stories, they make me super happy! 😃

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