AsYa (TS): His Beautiful Dancer *UPDATED* LAST PART pg.28

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Applef

@Applef

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Posted: 12 years ago

#151

hey!!! read all the parts at once...

its really awesome...👏

feel bad for zoya.. she cried all night??😭

hope things get better soon..

update very soon...

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Tanvi

@KulfiBai

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Posted: 12 years ago

#152

'What I want' - I can totally see why Asad's attitude puts Zoe off but damn this arrogant Asad's hot!

Oh no, Mark's sick! And it makes me sound mean but I'm happy, because like most of the others, I also think now Asad and Zoe will do that sexy dance together 😆

Great update, Candy!

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aashiqua

@aashiqua

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Posted: 12 years ago

#153

Awsome update...
Looking forward to know what
happen nxt?????
So update nxt part asap...

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-Candz-

@-Candz-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#154

Originally posted by: KulfiBai
'What I want' - I can totally see why Asad's attitude puts Zoe off but damn this arrogant Asad's hot!

Oh no, Mark's sick! And it makes me sound mean but I'm happy, because like most of the others, I also think now Asad and Zoe will do that sexy dance together 😆

Great update, Candy!

I wish Asad would be more assertive over Zoya. Maybe we'll see that with this new guy sniffing around her 😆

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-Shormi-

@-Shormi-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#155

ok i'm in luv wid dis story & being known 2 da fact dat its gonna b finished in another go doesnt help either😆...bt seriously i found da intensity & arrogance of asad quite sexy😳...obviously now asad will b her partner😉...bring on da hotness dear...i'hv already started imagining their moves *desperate much*🤣...post da last ud sooner dan usual i mean i hope u do dat😛...finally wanna add u write exceptionally well dat it gets pretty easy visualizing da fact of wats going on...kudos👏