ASYA OS...BLOOD HAS IT'S OWN COLOR... EXTENSION OF 21st AUGUST

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OS- BLOOD HAS IT'S OWN COLOR... EXTENSION OF 21st AUGUST' EPISODE- OS

MY FIRST EVER WRITTEN OS... how track may move on following drama @ Haseena b's place,, nikhat-imran-najma triangle & Asad-Ayaan clash,,

SCENE 1:

Asad drove back to his home silently. The happiness and excitement which rode them, while going to Haseena B's house had vanished, Zoya who was making pranks on Najma while going to Imran's place was now silent, her sight was just targeted on the cold face of Asad, who was looking straight ahead, not giving even a single look to any of them. She was worried about him, she was so worried about her Mr. Khan...
Dilshad's mind was surrounded by all the harsh statements which Shireen made today. Rashid! a silent statue again fulfilled her all expectations! he had never spoken for her, then now how he could??
Najma was feeling guilty n happy at the same time; she didn't knew which feeling was dominant. His honorable brother n mother had to again listen the shitty thoughts of Shireen,..


SCENE 2:

As Asad parked the car in porch, he went straight inside without saying even a single word. He ended up in his room, banging door behind him with the utter force as much as he could do... Zoya watched em going...Now she had to expect something very worst again, from Asad, as she tried to convince Asad for Najma-Imran relation. Dilshad took Najma into the room empty-mindedly.

Asad threw his coat on the sofa-by window. Sat on the floor beside his bed,, throwing his head in his hands in the state of utter disappointment. He couldn't finger what he was feeling right now,, Disappointment?? Dejection?? Rejection?? Sense of Neglection?? Or what??? Asad Ahmed Khan was again in the mood of tearing up the world apart!!

Today he wanted to go to Janab Rashid Khan,,, holding him by his collars, n asking him to answer his every question,, the questions which were somewhere buried in his mind from his childhood, why he left them?? Made her mom live a miserable life,.. he didn't ever did something for his kids or wife, couldn't he make his second wife shut her mouth?? who said each filthy word about his Ammi Jaan in front of everybody... although he was there for his sister Najma, then couldn't Rashid act as father of all of the daughters, rather than disowning asad n najma by being silent??

But there was another name,, whose dejection n coldness affected him most,, it was no other then his sweet little brother Ayaan,, who had grown to a man... who ignores feeling of all... No, no,, not feelings of all,, it was just feelings for his step-siblings!!!

How Ayaan could even think like that about Asad,, this was what Asad was incapable of digesting,... he never gave a second thought to his relationship with his siblings gifted by Rashid Ahmed khan!! he always took them as he took najma.. he never differentiated... discrimination prominent in ayaan's words was jostling him to the core,...

how ayaan could even say that Asad never cared about Nikhet n Nuzhet...
Take it as the time when Nikhet's wedding was under the stance of Haseenas b.. when asad spent his millions to fulfill the demands of gifts.. or giving haseena a luxurious apartment..so that she could stitch up her mouth, not hindering in the happiness of Nikhet n Imran.


SCENE 3:

Zoya was worried of seeing Mr. Khan getting into the shell again... It was 2 in the night when she was scrambling in her bedroom,, here n there with worry of watching a cold Asad again!!
who would just yell on her for convincing him for najma n imran,,, how she would face him,, when she has gotten use to of watching a sweet n loving would be husband in Asad...how she would tour dark side of his face again.. who would just ignore her like nothing.

She finally strengthened up herself to go to his room,,,... to clear every ambiguity he was carrying in his mind,, she made her way to his room where Anguish Asad was waiting fah her...she thought


SCENE 4:

She knocked at the door of asad's room...slightly,,.. No reply... again knock,, door was locked from inside,

She made her way to his room through window, expecting Asad yelling on her loudly, but she smashed to smithereens,, after watching asad in a state she had never seen before,,.. it was not her Akroo Ahmed Khan!!! he was a shattered asad ahmed khan,, who had thrown his head into his lap crying like a toddler,,, he was splintered.. immensely splintered!!!

And the view stabbed like a pointed knife in Zoya's heart...she didn't wanted him to get weak... he realized presence of some one in the room, due to sound produced, when zoya was about to make the table lamp fall on the floor while letting off from the sofa...

Asad: (watching zoya across screen of tears) You???

Zoya: Mr. Khan (Sitting beside asad)

Asad: why the luck remains same to same with me all the time??

Zoya: Mr. Khan!! Don't you get worried,,, everything will set better by the time

Asad: Zoya!! How dare he?? How dare he could say like this?? How could he even think like this?? (holding zoya's hands to release the pain he was carrying in his heart)

Zoya: Mr.Khan??? Who?? Imran or

Asad: Ayaan mae little brother... he disowned his bhaijaan today... My God is witness, that I haven't ever discriminated between them n us,... I loved nikhet as much as I do najma,... I care for both U know na (holding zoya by her shoulders)

Zoya: Mr.Khan! I know this well!!!!

Asad: Zoya!! U were there na?? when I was trying to call nikhet, to ask about her feelings regarding, imran,,, imran-najma relation..

Zoya: I know Mr.Khan... I already told u that u r the best brother on the planet... Who cares for each sibling regardless of the walls n ridges created by the world in relationships... u play each relation with utter purity n sincerity!!

Asad: then why he isn't getting it Zoya?? How could he say that I can't understand pain of Nikhet, cox heart of my sister is intact...
My sister...your Sister!!! where did that came from??

Zoya: Mr. khan! Ayan was in anger..he would surely recognize his mistake after cooling down his anger

Asad: (Asad had trailed off he wasnt in the room anymore he went on blabbering his all of thoughts) Nikhet isn't my sister.. that's why I always sent gifts for them on each eid... zipped haseena b's mouth with bundles of gifts n a fancy luxorious apartment... called Nikhet to know if she really wants to move on in her life.. or she still loves imran... where did I went wrong?? Where did I got off the track?

Zoya: Mr. Khan. (now getting much more worried about asad's condition)

Asad: I cared for Ayaan from the time when he didn't even walked properly... he lived with us here,,, I always fought for him,, take it as children in the school who annoyed him,, or the goons who got an envy with him,.. or a police inspector who had beaten em to death,,, I always fought for him never let him alone...but what he did?? labelled me as step brother??

Zoya: Mr. khan?? (shaking him by his shoulders) Mr. khan!! Calm down please

Asad: I had never thought that this day would come, when I would feel ashamed for what I did in last 23 years,,,, I would feel myself grounding due to dejection n humiliation... believe me!!! I never expected this day would come ever in my life...

Zoya: Mr. khan (hugging asad to calm him down,,. To bring him back into the world... reality where he was not even a nano-wrong)

Asad giving back a hug to zoya

Asad: but now I have realized that one shouldnt do anything for others we should live for our own STEPS ARE STEPS...

Zoya: Mr. khan don't,,.. u know the scene got so hot... that's why he lost his temper,,. When he would come back into senses he...

Asad: when he would come back to senses.. he would do nothing,, after all he's Janab Rashid Ahmed Khan's son too.. I was always frightened of becoming like him. I was saved,,... but Ayaan has become exactly like him... Arrogant, cold, silent, unrepentable incapable of doing anything but harm!

Zoya: No.. Mr.Khan, he's after all your brother too.. he would grow up sensible like you too!!!

Asad: My? My Brother... No way!!! Am just a step-brother like he said.. Blood has its own color Zoya! He's Rashid ahmed khans son... white blooded like him!! whatever u do for them it wouldn't be enough ever!

Zoya: Mr.khan!!! its not like that

Asad: It is like that Zoya!! If he says.. I don't care about nikhet's heart... okay! I don't... if he says we are their Steps... okay we are!!
n now I don't care about any of them.. I have my own small world.. few people to be worried about.. no load, no over-stacking of mind... No worries!!

Asad again drifted into a hug with zoya.. assuring him that she was a major part of his small world too n zoya's mind was somewhere else in the dark,, where she could see a major rift walling between two brotherS...


Edited by Maliaa - 12 years ago

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Good job👍🏼 Interesting! Are you going to continue this?
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I was disgusted by Shireen today and Rashid too! Really disappointed in Ayyan! He told Asad that HIS sister's heart didn't break... But what about Najma? I never saw Ayyan EVER show any care toward her???

Asad always had a good connection with Nikhat and Nuzat, especially Nikhat (coz she is older). But Ayyan never even talks to Najma? So how dare HE talk about Asad as if HE is the one who is differentiating? Look at yourself first Ayaan! Shireen's bloody son!! Can't stand that women, she is an idiot! Insecure coz she stole someone else's husband. She thinks everyone is like her... A thief! Totally paranoid is what she! Ayyan is just like her!

Sorry for the rant! Great OS by the way!
Edited by MrDarcyfan - 12 years ago
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Wow! Beautifully written!!!👏 Will you please continue it?😭
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wonderful! 👏 Maybe Asad too made a mistake but that doesn't mean he does not care about all his sibilings.
I wish something like this would happen on the show.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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it was amazing
very well written👏
plz continue it, plz request
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Very Nice... Continue If You Can.. :D
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superrbb sSis... luvd it..
plx write it further...
I would love to hav nxt part...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awww! This was so cute. Loved AsYa talk! Really nicely written, please do write more 😃
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❤️...Well... thnx alooot people fah appreciation...❤️

i could have continued buh our real ASAD AHMED KHAN is so so caring,, he can't hurt anyone...
that's y he just went to Ayaan to say sorrry,,, so this OS may be off the track...


Ayaaan is such a bay-sherm bhai... he expects all by giiving nothing...
n ASAD gives all expecting nothing...


People like ASAD AHMED KHAN are less to be born,,, that's y we love em so so much...

I would try to continue it as an SS after a week or two... with aftermaths of Najma's weddding... n much awaitedNikkaah of ASYA...
if you people are interested only then...







Edited by Maliaa - 12 years ago

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