'the other part of me' an asya fiction part 14 11/11 updated - Page 14

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Posted: 11 years ago
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guys i'll try to update regularly from now on
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CHAPTER 13:-AN EPIC TO REMEMBER

Once ayan left asad sat on his couch and all he could think was how to propose zoya

Asad pov:-
"how to propose Ms farooqui , and wait a second why should I propose her ? she was proposing me in front of mirror now why should I do it first , let her do it, if I do then she'll dominate me or she'll get another chance to taunt me throughout our life and I should create such a situation that Ms farooqui will propose me"

Asad smiled at his own thoughts and drifted into sleep

Next morning:-
Asad room:-
"I should meet Ms farooqui alone but how? maybe I'll send ammii and najma somewhere so that I can meet her alone "said asad to himself

Dinning table:-

Everyone were seated in their usal places but tanveer and zoya were in their room and asad turned towards his ammii "ahem!! Ammii you were planning to go to badi masjid ?" asad asked dilshad "I went yesterday asad" replied dilshad

"ammii apko market jana hey na?" asked asad dilshad replied "asad!!"

Asad turned towards najma "najma what time you are going to college?" najma replied "bhaijaan!!! Semester holidays remember?"
"do you want to go out any where?" asked najma
"ha!! Bhaijaan me and zoya are going out today I need some clothes" replied najma and asad was shocked "kya!! You and zoya ? take ammii and go" replied asad without even thinking for a second
asad just realized what he said and with embarrassment he concentrated on his breakfast

Dilshad started showing sign language to najma saying that asad wanted to be alone with zoya

"bhaijaan!! I forgot ammii medicine got over and doctor called her for routine checkup we both will go and zoya will be staying here only"said najma with huge smile but asad was smiling behind news paper

Najma called her bhaijaan "did you listen to me that zoya will be all alone in home today"
"ha so what let her stay why are you saying me this?" asad asked najma but najma couldn't control anymore and she wanted to play with her bhaijaan

"teek hai!! Bhaijaan we will take zoya ..."before najma could complete her words asad said "nooo, I mean clients are coming so someone has to stay" replied asad with horrified expression

"ok,let zoya go and I'll stay back what do you say bhaijaan?"replied najma with smirk on her face

"I mean zoya knows which file and about the client so.."replied asad with sad expression
"then fine bhaijaan" said najma and went to her room to get her bag

Asad, dilshad and najma forgot that tanveer was in home

After few minutes:-
asad was sitting in front of his laptop in the hall was waiting for zoya he became restless as every minute passed by and zoya came out of her room and was searching for her najma and phoophi

"Mr khan where is phoophi and najma?"asked zoya
"they went out" said asad staring into his laptop
"without telling me" said zoya scratching her head

"Ms farooqui if you get up so late what will they do?everyone is not so jobless or have time to wait for you like I'm waiting..."asad just realized what he said with little bit of embarrassment concentrated back on his laptop

"allah miyan!! What's wrong with you? I had some important work last night so slept late and wait a second, you are waiting for me?" zoya asked asad frowning

"I'm mean...wo...actually I'm waiting for clients and I ve important office work and wanted coffee" replied asad even though he wanted to tell her something but couldn't

"coffee? Why don't you ask directly Mr khan?teek hai I'll get it" said zoya and was about to go to kitchen

"jammy!! Coffee" said tanveer with black mug in her hand

"thank you!! Tanu" replied asad with smile to tanveer

Zoya pov:-
"phir se shuru hoga tanu -jammy ka natak I hate her, she gave coffee to Mr khan my Mr khan how dare she is and what the hell is she thinking about herself and asad how dare he smiling and taking coffee from her"

Zoya sat on sofa staring at asad and tanveer with her eyes filled with anger

Asad pov:-

"oh god!! I forgot about tanu I should have sent her away and by the way I think Ms faroooqui is jealous lets play with her and yes let me take help of tanu to get confession from zoya" asad was smiling at his own thoughts and how angry zoya was at him because of tanu and decided to play with her

"tanu there is something on your face" said asad looking at zoya

"kaha?jammy" tanveer replied trying to rub her face

asad went near tanu and rubbed her cheeks and said "now its fine" and towards zoya ..zoya was fuming and it was like her seat was on fire

"their was nothing"said zoya staring at asad

"pardon me!! Whats nothing?" asad asked innocently even though he understood what she was telling

"on her face..." said zoya but before zoya could complete her sentence tanu interrupted

"zoya!! If jammy is telling something then it is true..isn't it jammy?" tanu asked asad turning toward him

Asad bent his head telling "ha!!"

Asad pov:-

"what the hell I'm doing? I'm using my best friend to make Ms farooqui jealous , no ways I shouldn't use my friend"thought asad
"tannu can you get me water please!!"asked asad

Tanveer got up from her place and went to wards kitchen

"jealous Ms farooqui?" asked asad

"jealous my foot!!" Said zoya

Asad was smiling at zoya behavior and he decided to get confession from her

Zoya phone beeped twice and saw it was message from ayan aka rabart...even though zoya met ayan just few days they had become very close and she found her true friend in ayan after najma...they have been in touch and ayan knows zoya loves some emotionally challenged and zoya knows that he is in love with girl called humeira and ayan never knew the name of person zoya loved since she called him with different names

(phone chatting I'll be showing you the conversation exactly the way zoya sees
from' is zoya receiving message from rabart and to' is zoya sending message to ayan

MESSAGE CHATTING:-
from:-raabart
hey! Whats up mona?howss your day?

To:-rabart
hey!! but my day is bad really bad
L
so whats up with you?

From:-oh!! What happened to my mona darling?
and I just fought with humeira
L

To:-oh!! This akudu and her friend are all playing friend-friend drama
what happened that you are fighting with humeira?

From:- I was flirting with another girl and humeira saw it and she is angry with me and crying
in her room
L I don't know what to do?
do I sense some jealousy their?:p

To:-oh!! Just go and ask her sorry and tell her what place she hold in your heart and she will
forgive you
jealousy my foot!! Ok some jealousy
from:-mona darling your amazing and I know I can trust you so asked you
jealousy , wow my mona darling gets jealousy too:P

To:-oh please!! I don't know what I'll do with this b**ch

From:-even you make him jealous mona darling

To:-idea! Why don't you call me and I'll talk to you and make him jealous

From:- not bad, sure should I call you now?

To:-yes

Tring tring tring

Zoya phone start ringing and asad, tanveer look at zoya who is smiling well atleast trying to smile wide

Next part:- will this jealousy play work and

what will tanveer do?

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Posted: 11 years ago
Jealous my foot mr.khan 🤣🤣🤪
I loved it..
Plz continue soon dear👏
very well written..
Awesome Roses
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome
I smell some jealousy there😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
loved it. update soon. thnx for pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
Till asad does not realise that it is ayaan...
awesome update.
Thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Nice part
plz pm me for next part
continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
Nice update. Waiting for next part. Update soon
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Great udapte i loved it 😊

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