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Monica

@mochhug

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+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#51

Part of me wishes they'd talked about her Abbu. But I still love the way you ended this. Not completely resolved, but no longer a sham marriage filled with hate. Beautifully written <3

Now I'm off to continue reading your FF (Already in 60's chapters 😛)

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KeyaHira2

@KeyaHira2

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Posted: 9 years ago

#52

Im like wondering what to say

But I know that Im cursing Asad in my head

Honestly i don't like this SS

Please go back to happy AsYa

Prem Kahani Hai Mushkil

👍🏼

At least Zoya died happily

Right?

I love you and your stories but this was too much for me

Edited by KeyaHira2 - 9 years ago

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Klondy

@Klondy

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Posted: 9 years ago

#53

Originally posted by: KeyaHira2
Im like wondering what to say
But I know that Im cursing Asad in my head
Honestly i don't like this SS
Please go back to happy AsYa
Prem Kahani Hai Mushkil
👍🏼
At least Zoya died happily
Right?
I love you and your stories but this was too much for me

I know. That's why I took so long to put this here. I couldn't write it but then I had to. But dude, she didn't die. Where did you get that!

And yes, I need to get back to PKHM. But this was intruding,

Edited by Klondy - 9 years ago

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anopama

@anopama

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Posted: 9 years ago

#54

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Omg what can I say

If I can find u an worship u I will

The stories u write just touches the right spot

This one god it pull at the heartstrings

It hurt like hell

Was pissed at Asad I didn't justify what he did in no way

Even when she refused to go with him I don't blame her

But the suffering she intake from him her abbu pain

Everything and she just kept smiling

Glad she had lashed out at him and didn't be silent when he said tht talaq

Men think they r so powerful

It hurt to read this

Thank god I have ur other story in the other tab so I can go back tot it and be in my happy bubble

Mya Asya bubble

My addiction to PKHM God need to help me

I have read it so much and reading it again bact to chap 90

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sj_qh_kabhi

@sj_qh_kabhi

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#55

I loved this one soo much..:)
it was a different intense and a beautiful ss
I loved the ending..awesome and beautiful
It was such an awesome moment that zoya had found solace only in asad's arms
great job..:)
Keep writing. .:)

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Klondy

@Klondy

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+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#56

Originally posted by: cutie15
Oh god this is so painful
But so awesome to read
Loving it
You are a great writer
And your stories are so gripping

Thanks cutie15 for this and the previous comment. Oh god, you don't know how hard I tried not to write this story. But I'm glad it's out there now. I hope it stops haunting me now!

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Mayur Chan

@MayurChan

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#57

I just want to know will their be any happy parts in this story...???

This is completely diff from what you have given us in your FF..

Still well written Parts...but sincerely I can't read anything as this when I am hooked and habituated to your vision of ASYA..😳

Continue soon..

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Klondy

@Klondy

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Posted: 9 years ago

#58

Originally posted by: mochhug
Ahh you can't stop there!!! It all fits!!! Why didn't the damn CVs do this!!!! UGH!!

You know what, mochhug, I think the CVs intended to do this from the start - remember the synopsis of QH which they then took down? It said that she'd get divorced from Ayaan and then he'd beg Asad to marry her blah blah blah.

But then they messed up big time with the phone nikaah and the fans went wild. So I think they had to walk back that storyline. But that's just my gut feel.

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mummyoftwo

@mummyoftwo

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#59

Thank u for the last part!
As always awsome writting! I'm a bit happier after reading the last part, but this story didn't sit well with me. It took me to a very dark and heavy place. But as always in in awe of ur writting skills and how u bring the story alive.

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Asif

@asifiqbalsh

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Posted: 9 years ago

#60

Nice story
Different from ur other stories & I liked it.
Asad hurt her & when he realised what he did, he was ashamed on himself. Finally everything sorted out between them. Thanks for pm