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Posted: 9 years ago

#81

Originally posted by: Klondy

noesha, I love you! Thank you for saying that Asad would never do this. Yes, yes, yes. And I think I'm finally able to understand that too. This story has haunted me since that time the show introduced this track. And I'm certain that the original story meant to do this - at least that's how I interpreted their first synopsis which they later took down.

But to hear you say that he would never be so cruel makes me feel just perfect. You're right. He wouldn't. At least not the Asad of my imagination. I think that's also why I resisted so long to get this story out - how could I bear to do this to Asad?

So yes, may be this was a way to get back to my FF. I'm feeling stuck there and needed an outlet to vent my dark Asya visions. But no, neither of them could do this to each other; they'd die first. I grappled with this demon briefly in the climax of the FF. I made both of them suffer for it. But they wouldn't let me do it to them. Not for too long at least. And they made me write that make up chapter! I swear.

Then they also forced me to revisit Mangalpur!

hahaha! Yeah! how could you do that to our sweet Asad lol. He would have been angry at her..no doubt..and he would have punished her. But I think he would do that by staying away from her. He would have punished himself in the process too..by keeping her at a distance. Their love would have brought them back together. Please do not get me wrong..I am not trying to improve your story, because I will never be able to do that. Your story is perfect as it is. I just always overanalize things I love and its just how I picture Asad. :)

You are right, I also always thought Zoya would be the one who would come between the brothers. I personally feel so dissappointed with how the writers executed the whole show. It could and should have been a far better story. I love how you say Asad and Zoya didnt let you do this to them or the made you write that. I also rewrite the scenes in my mind.

Regarding this track I always had this idea in my mind that. What if Asad and Zoya secretly had gotten married before he dragged her to Ayaans house (because they both had to keep up prefences for Nikhats sake). I believe that would have been less hurtfull to watch. Zoya couldve really helped Nikhat (by getting rid of Haseena) and how hot would Asad and Zoya's secretly meeting be lol! Sorry im mad hhahah

I personally disliked this whole track with Zoya 'accidently' getting married to Ayaan(Im sure im not the only one haha). The marriage wasnt even valid.. but I hoped it would lead to Zoya finding out about her father. That also didnt happen.. and then Asad got replaced and I lost interest.

Hope to see an update of your FF soon!