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Rekha

@rekharv

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#81

wow awesome update. such a breath of fresh air compared to actually watching QH. Gul needs to take advice & ideas from forum writers, they are lot more talented than her CVs 😊

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Amy

@angelgirl_a

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#82

Omg u can't just stop there!!! Amazing!!!

Omg he knew all along who she was that's why he wanted to 'punish' her hiself??

And thats why he didnt kill her instantly!!

Monster??? Zoya created??? Making me very curious!!

Update soon

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sweetnandu

@sweetnandu

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#83

Omg that was so awesome...
Pls pls update soon

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CrazyBilli

@CrazyBilli

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#84

Omg...So that alpha is Asad!!! And they already know each other!!!

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Gulaabo

@Gulaabo

Inactive

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#85

finally an update...this was amazing!!! alpha's identity is finally revealed...but he has a past with zoya...i really want to read the next part sooner this time!!!
continue soon

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Nim

@Rarepearl

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#86

Oh Goodness, this was extremely enthralling & Superb. I knew that Alpha was Asad but didn't think of them to be lovers at once. what happened between the two that Asad turned into this monster?

The whole story is really intriguing. i'm gkad Zoe got rid of that pathetic Farhaan, he only saw her as a possession which was to be displayed to the world.

The act to catch Ali's attention by Rajni & Zoe was great but obviously not fool proof, the only reason, Asad. Gosh, obviously he knew she was lying because he knew her real identity. now I can't stop laughing at Zoe, how innocent of her to say to check her ration card for her identity. I mean seriously Asad was right at laughing out loud dat moment. I felt panicked when he ordered her to undress. I knew he was testing her but still I was scared, but now his talks now make sense to me. did he take her away to punish her or himself? so that song reminds her of Asad & wish granted too soon, of seeing him once before dying.

I didn't know what to expect when he tore her dress apart to take off her weapons & then kissed her to silence her. Didn't Zoe remember his voice?

Asad has suffered a lot due to Zoe or what, I mean why would he say, he was waiting for this day to be killed by her, the monster she created. Was Asad already a bad guy when she fell in love with him or what? okay, now you're supposed to update this asap, pretty please!

Love.

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jeenia123

@jeenia123

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#87

OMG...It was beautiful...i had a kind of feeling she must be knowing Alpha... just loved it...Please update soon...

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Maha

@maha2012

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#88

awesome😃

cant wait to read the next part😉

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Milli bakshi

@MILII_BAKSHI

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#89

teddy puttar...cha gaye yaarapp...maza aa gaya padhke..woa..what a astory...never read before..m so proud of you...

Zoya loved asad...

Monster???? Scar????
Ye kya jhamela hai bhai?

Kya trick hai boss...teddy mujhe bhi sikhna hai pin se lock kholna..i haave a habbit of forgetting key at home...lol

teddy ! Omg...kya script hai ...thoko tali

i sware i dint slept...kasam se
i readd it withso muchcuriosity

its gonna be a sad ending..i know...cry cry..

Love u teddy puttar

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snehasya

@snehasya

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#90

this is something unimaginable why did she left him and whats the thing with her that made him so cruel and I was wishing she would fall for him but here they were in love by his statement its clear the right still belongs to you to kill me so he knew from first when she came there o my god loved it please update soon cant wait for the story to unfold