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jeenia123

@jeenia123

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#61

Just make me one thing clear you are not going to finish in three parts na? please i beg.i need more... infcet much more... please update soon. just love dit...

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jazsidhu

@jazsidhu

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#62

hey tis is superb...luv it...amazing...

wow wat a great plan zoya made n she meet alpha edi...

beautifully written...

wonder wat will she do now n who will help her out...

thx fr the pm n do continue soon n do pm me...

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madhvi4gurti

@madhvi4gurti

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#63

OMG wat an update yaar!!!👏

beginning mein thoda sa confused ho gayi thi bt then i got cleared!!!

i was sitting on the edge of my chair while reading!!!😳

u created the suspense too well...gr8 job yaar...awesome descriptions!!!

Ab kya hoga???

how will zoya handle the situation n eventually get out of it??

eager to read the next update!!!👍🏼

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-Astrid-

@-Astrid-

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#64

OMG!!!that was freakin' awsome😊...i always loved dark stories n this is one of the rarest n most intriguing plots i'v come across👏...update soon🤗

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CrazyBilli

@CrazyBilli

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#65

omfg!!!! I can't wait till the next update!! But please don't make Asad someone who will let Zoya leave her clothes for some goddamn proof!!😳

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Linsie

@Linsie

Trailblazer

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#66

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coolphool

@coolphool

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#67

Tedddyyy...zara part 3 update to karna aik minute k liye 😆 ...update soon... 😉

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CutiepieHarshad

@CutiepieHarshad

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#68

interesting start

loved it

plz cont soon

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princessradhika

@princessradhika

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#69

now what???😲😲..why did u stop at such a crucial point?..that's simple cruelty, u know...😡

was that asad?, as in the alpha?😛..such a mysterious person, he may help people who needs it but certainly know how to differentiante between them..well done👏, his personality is just awesome..😎

does he know that zoya is faking the whole thing?, seems like that only and how will zoya come out of the situation?..😕

amazing update,just mindblowing👏👏⭐️..the concept is so different and thrilling.👍🏼.want to read more

pls pls do update soon, thanx for the pm and will wait for the next one eagerly😃

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a.sharma

@a.sharma

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#70

hey teddy... luv ur writing ... at first it was a bit confusing but... now i seem to get a hang of it... also i luvd the character sketches that uve created... zoya's character is jst too practical and bang on sorts... and alpha's character is clever and piercing... masculinity oozes out of the desciption that uve carved out... simply amazing ...update soon and do pm me if its not too much of a hassle... 😃