Asya TS:Tune jo mujhe di jeene ki saza-Part 3a Page 4 - Page 2

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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conti soon and pm me when u update
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Posted: 12 years ago
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zabardast update!! Razia's lines were really good.. and the precap?? Whats with it? ya ya will know in the next udpate :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: -HoneyBunch-

zabardast update!! Razia's lines were really good.. and the precap?? Whats with it? ya ya will know in the next udpate :)


thankyou so much..:)will update soon.:)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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So here is Part 3a.This update is divided into two parts.Well this part is specially for MisHumptyDumpty aka Ankie because I am writing it just because she asked me to.:)

Recap:Zoya feels dizzy and and fell unconscious to the floor.

Part 3a:

Asad's thoughts were interrupted with the sound of a thud and then he noticed Zoya lying on the floor.He rushed to her and placed her head on his lap and started rubbing her hands which as cold as ice.

Asad:Zoyaaa ..zoya kya hua?Utho please .Kuch to bolo.Get up Zoya.

Razia:ch ch ch.Bechari Zoya itna bada. sadma kaise bardasht karegi?Jis insan se uska nikah hone wala tha vo aur koi ni balki uski ammi ke katil ka beta hai.Kismat bhi kaise ajeeb khel khekti hai na Asad Miyan.

Asad was not even listening to Razia's nonsense.He was just concerned about Zoya right now.when after several attempts zoya didnt wake up he picked her up and headed towards their car.He drove as fast as possible to their home galncing back at zoya every now and then.

Asad's Residence:
Asad reached Khan Villa carrying Zoya in his arms.Dilshad and Najma who were in the living room were shocked to see Zoya like this.

Dilshad:Asad yeh kya hua zoya ko?

Asad:Ammi yeh sab hum bad mein discuss krenge aap plz jaldi se doctor ko bulaiye.

He carried her to her room and laid her on the bed.Soon the dotor arrived.Asad was sitting on the bed holding zoya's hand while the doctor was checking on her.

Asad:Doctor kya hua hai zoya ko?Vo aise thandi kyun padh gayi hain?Vo thik to hai na?

Doctor:Dekhiye Mr.Khan inhe koi bohat bada shock laga hai jise inka brain bear nahi kar paya hai jiski vajah se inki ek nerve mein swelling aa gayi hai.Moreover inka B.P. suddenly kafi high ho gaya hai.Is tarah kk fluctuation inki health k liye thik nahi hai.Aap inka zyada se zyada khyal rakhe aur inhe stress aur tension se dur rakhe.

After listeing to the doctor Asad felt even worse.Zoya had already had a horrible past and now she has to bear all this just because ofthat spineless man who unfortunately is his father.He literally wanted to kill Mr.Rashid Ahmed Khan for what he had done to his Zoya.How can a person stoop so low?How can he possibly be alive with no guilt of killing a woman smiling all the way?How can he look someone in the eyes after commiting such a sin.His thoughts were interupted when Zoya's hold on his hand tightened.He could see her eyebrows frowning and she was mumbling something while her eyes were closed.

Zoya:Ammi..Aag ...Ammi ko bachao..Ammi ko bachao.

Asad panicked seeing her in this condition.She started breathing heavily.

Asad:Zoya zoya kya hua?

Zoya sat up on the bed with a start and shouted for her mother.

Zoya:Ammmi..ammi ko bachao ..Mr.Khan meri ammi...meri ammi jal rahi hain..Unhe bachaiye..Aag aag hai vahan..Koi bachao..Ammi bachao..Mujhe bohat darr lag raha hai.

Asad hugged her tightly.

Asad:Zoya zoya baby calm down.Relax.Dekho koi aag nahi hai.Koi nahi hai Zoya.Sambhalo apne aap ko zoya.

He was continuously rubbing her back to soothe her down.Zoya was shivering badly.He tried his best to calm her down.After sometime he realized that she was not crying anymore and was sleeping.He laid her down on the bed and wiped the tear strains from her face.He covered her from the blanket and kissed her forehead.He promised himself that he wiill keep Zoya away from any pain and admired her sleeping form.

Part 3b will be up surely by tomorrow.
Plz like and comment.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice update but it was so short :(
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Kuch toh hai zaroor dil mera kitna majboor!
Jaan ke bhi tu kyun jaane naa?



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Posted: 12 years ago
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Beautiful update...





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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice
plz pm me for next part
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Posted: 12 years ago
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very nice
plz cont soon and pm me plz

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