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Mahima

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Posted: 12 years ago

#751

Another AsYa Story

That too by my elder sis

Party time

BIG HUGS FOR MY ELDER SIS 🤗

I SO LOVE YOU ❤️

you are the best ⭐️

the banner is wow... 👏

and the concept...

best were the first few lines about best friends

it totally described us

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Mahima

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Posted: 12 years ago

#752

Prologue:-

flawless...

awe struck

AsYa were so *drool*

ah just love their friendship bond

prologue and Asad already shirtless

kiss bhi tha

Zoya's flashbacks left me teary eyed...

Dilshad was caring as usual

I am so looking forward to this one

the AsYa backyard scene was so well described that it was playing right before me

perfect work

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Mahima

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Posted: 12 years ago

#753

Chapter 1:-

Mine

Read it and was delighted

Will unres fully tom

Finally unreserving

I was thinking of selecting mu fav dialogues but that is impssible cause that would mean posting the whole chapter

I so loved the Bunty Chintu bond... Never seen a bond so strong

Except ours though ❤️

It was so cute... I mean everything from the morning waking up to the rain night

So AsYa will get engaged soon... Wasn't expecting this

But totally loved it

I can clearly see they love each other

But I guess the romantic tendencies would take some time

Update soon

Teaser please

Luv ya big sister

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Mahima

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Posted: 12 years ago

#754

Teaser for chapter 2:-

Totally engrossing

I am addicted to bunty and chintu now

When I had heard this concept...
I had not anticipated this

It is so amazing

So unique

So different

This teaser is so cute

I loved the bond AsYa share in your story

Perfect

*Mitwa... ishq pe zor nahi*

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Mahima

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Posted: 12 years ago

#755

Chapter 2:-

"Bunty! Change your clothes and come out!", he shouted.

Loved Asad's caring nature

"Why the hell are you behaving like a damn pregnant woman? Ek pregnant lady ke bhi utne mood swings nahi hote honge jitney tere hote hain Bunty! Stop fooling around with me!", barked Asad.

Asad's outburst... Surprising

"Damn you Chintu! It's my BIRTHDAY today! And you forgot!!!!", she shrieked.
"I forgot??? I had planned a surprise this evening and you have been just fooling around shrieking your lungs out at me, not bothered what I would feel! I have had enough of your mood swings Zoya!", he shouted and retreated to his room leaving a shocked Zoya behind.
Zoya plopped on the sofa and has a small mind talk cursing herself, "Allah miya! Ye maine kya kar diya? I shouted at Asad for this? He had planned a surprise! Shit shit shit!!! What did you do Zoya? You know na.. Asad can never forget your birthday! He might forget his own but not yours!"

Aah.. A small fight... Zoya drove Asad crazy

She pushed him onto the bed and sat on top of him.
"I'm sorry! Very sorry! Super sorry!", she said like a little child.
Asad smiled at her innocence and smiled. He said, "Pagal ladki!"
She fell on him and hugged him tight. "I love you!", she sqealed
He wrapped his arms around her, "I love you too baby!", he replied.

So cute this was

Suddenly Zoya felt something poking in her belly, her eyes shot up in shock. She rolled to the other side and fell on the bed. Asad realized what happened and got up immediately.
"What was that?", she asked nervously.
"Exactly what you think!", he replied.

Oyye hoyye... Abhi se yeh haal

"And what's my surprise?", she squealed.
"Wait till the evening! You'll get to know!", he winked as Zoya smiled.

Waiting

Want to know wat was my first reaction when I finished reading this part??

It was that's it

It is so short

This was amazing, superb, fantastic, terrific, awesome, fabulous and the list goes on

Perfect and Flawless update

I love Chintu and Bunty

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Mahima

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Posted: 12 years ago

#756

Teaser for chapter 3:-

Now I get it

You really want to kill me

You are driving me crazy

This is fan-awe-tas-some-tic (i know it makes no sense)

I am so waiting for the update now

Chintu Bunty *in a dream world*

Listening to *Mitwa... Ishq Pe Zor Nahi*

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Mahima

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Posted: 12 years ago

#757

Chapter 3:-

Something is different...

I was sure that the teaser I had read had some different words

So I went back to teaser but it was not wat I had read

I was damn sure that something is fishy

so i compared the editing timings

and yah i had commented before you changed it

don't mind the change though but how come you didn't tell me 😲

and yah 100+ pages.. as if u don't know that Mahima is a regular reader of urs

comming to the update

i totally loved it

awesome work

brilliant it was

pizza cake... oyye hoyeee

fairy lights... drooling

so many kisses... i was counting them but lost track in middle

😆

so kisses for you too

my fav dialogues now

Asad entered the room with a box in hand. He put it aside on the bed and went over to the side table and lit a candle. He held Zoya's hand and guided her to the bed.

"OMG!!!!!!! Chintu... This is the best birthday gift... Pizza instead of cake and fairy lights all over my room! Oh.. I love you so much!", she squealed and threw her arms around his neck. He pulled apart.

She stuffed it into Asad's mouth and then he held her hand and guided the same piece to her mouth. The pizza was completely relished. She threw herself on him and hugged him tight as though he were her most priced possession. Well.. He was.. That's for sure!

"Don't worry Bunty.. I'll take what I want!", shouted Asad as he followed her out.

"Ye sab sirf tumhare birthday ka hi nahi.. Kal engagement ke liye bhi hai!", replied Nikhat with a wink.

Zoya rolled him to come on top of him and replied, "Oh no honey! I'll take what I want!", she winked.

"Hmmm", came her reply still kissing his neck. She gently sneaked her hand under his tshirt.

"Did I tell you not to?", she questioned looking at him and raised her brows.

She gently moved her hand on his shirt and started unbuttoning it. She bent down to his neck and showered kisses there and went down to his chest trailing wet kisses. Asad on the other hand was getting extremely restless coz Zoya had pinned him and over that she was arousing him to such an extent and he was not able to take lead.

He plunged his tongue into her mouth, the kiss becoming even more passionate with every passing moment.. Her nails were digging into his bare back and his hands slid under her tshirt caressing her bare waist.

luv u Mina Di

eagerly waiting for page 120+ (cause 100+ par teaser and 120+ par update) 😉

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Mahima

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Posted: 12 years ago

#758

Teaser for chapter 4:-

GR8... NOW I NEED TO SPAM 50 PAGES 😆

OK... I KNOW I'LL GET HELP

BUT STILL

POOR ME

HB, BD, DTL and LIST GOES ON

IN THE SIGGY BELOW (DRACO IS YOU AND HARRY IS ME)

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Lets talk about the teaser now

Zoya sat in the backyard under the moonlit sky admiring her ring. She felt a kiss on her hair. She smiled, but then hid it.

"Bunty yaar! Tu baat baat pe gussa ho jaati hai! Kya hua ab?", asked Asad.

"Sorry baby! Very sorry! Ab to sagaai ho gayi hai.. Now I can't leave the house without your permission! Haina?", he asked nuzzling in her neck. She giggled at she felt his stubble brush her neck.