AsYa FF: Destiny Comes Calling *CH 20* 11/11/13 Pg 134

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rajnid68

@rajnid68

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#81

my jaan..does he much up his collar..

and first room he goes to..is the bosses..

he knows the eyes are not meant for crying. ..

but still he lands up doing it unknowingly. .

and you got the..meany in him...

looking forward to read more. .

thanxs for the pm.

hope your son is better now..

your story. .bring it on

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Linsie

@Linsie

Trailblazer

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#82

Poor zoya... asad words sharp has a knife... damm

hope Jaan dont get in the way...

waiting for the next update..

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Soumya

@Ceon

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#83

i hate this Asad ! How can a man be so cheap ! Cnt soon

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Starshina

@Starshina

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#84

Its really well pictured and scripted. Love where it is heading. Regarding Asads character, i feel that as a writer you have all the freedom in the world to imagine and emote Asad in any way you find appropriate. Personlly, I didnt find anything inappropriate or contradictory to Asads portayal considering even on the show Asad is shown as a judgemental and complicated man in the beginning.

Loved your story

. Do continue soon.

Starshina.

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GoodGoneWrong

@GoodGoneWrong

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#85

Originally posted by: akaswan
Awesome please continue soon 😊

Thanks. Next update latest by Thursday.

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GoodGoneWrong

@GoodGoneWrong

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#86

Originally posted by: rajnid68
my jaan..does he much up his collar.. he is not on a collar...he is a boutique dog...will post a pic in the next update..
and first room he goes to..is the bosses..Oh yes...maybe destiny is using him...who knows..
he knows the eyes are not meant for crying. ..Ofcourse...they are too precious to him...MashaAllah😉
but still he lands up doing it unknowingly. .Which is exactly like the AAK we know...
and you got the..meany in him...I hope I did not overdo him...
looking forward to read more. .Soon...will start work on it tomorrow...usually takes me a day to decide which scene to use exactly in the next update...one day to type the stuff...and thenproof reading...so thursday most likely
thanxs for the pm.u r welcome

hope your son is better now.. Thanks for asking..he is better today...
your story. .bring it on Thanks for the encouragement.

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GoodGoneWrong

@GoodGoneWrong

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#87

Originally posted by: AsyaManic
i hate this Asad ! How can a man be so cheap ! Cnt soon

Aww...so sorry you are hating him...but there are truly such men who think like this...But trust me AAK is not what we are seeing right now...Hopefully I will be able to bring out some back story for this current Prejudice...

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GoodGoneWrong

@GoodGoneWrong

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#88

Originally posted by: Shubh007
Awsome update... 😊

Thanks Shubh

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GoodGoneWrong

@GoodGoneWrong

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#89

Originally posted by: Starshina
Its really well pictured and scripted. Love where it is heading. Regarding Asads character, i feel that as a writer you have all the freedom in the world to imagine and emote Asad in any way you find appropriate. Personlly, I didnt find anything inappropriate or contradictory to Asads portayal considering even on the show Asad is shown as a judgemental and complicated man in the beginning.
Loved your story
. Do continue soon.
Starshina.

Thanks Shina for the detailed comment. Appreciate it. Thanks for allowing me to twist Asad's character a little. In the end, everything will work out. Promise. Thanks for the vote of confidence...it means a lot..Will try to update in a couple days time
Luv

RIvs