FF: Through The Monsoon #2 - Link to #3 on pg 1 - Page 34

Originally posted by: dixeij

Ooh, I loved this FF. Read it in 1 go. Am eagerly awaiting update.

You write very well. The scene of their games and eventual drugged passion was superb!

Originally posted by: me2you

You and your cliffhangers!!!

Come on yaar, Mr. Khan just kiss her. Its not that difficult, all you have to do is to bring your face a bit closer so your lips touches her lips aur baaki things aap ne aap par ho jati hain 😆

Hahaha, this has to be the worst advice given about kissing somebody 🤣 anyways, please don't make us wait any longer.

I should be furious. Another freaking cliffy. But alas, how can I? When you update so often and write so beautifully?

Originally posted by: goingreen

Haha damn! I'm not trying to punish you guys hahaha. Sigh I need to change my plans haha, everyone is unhappy ):

nahi nahi nahi pls don't chnage your plans...however you wanted to write please write it so. i absolutely love your writing yaar
not unhappy at all-- as a reader we love even this tadap

Originally posted by: goingreen

Haha I don't know... I had a whole track planned in my head about Zoya getting Asad to kiss her, but like everyone seems a little unhappy with the slowness of it. So I'm like trying to see if I can change it and still make it flow with my storyline. But I don't know, feel a little reluctant to do that haha. Let me think about it (:

As if i know the kiss wont happen so soon
Asya are back to their bickering once again,Zoya's mind was only thinking abt the kiss n jst look at the way she's staring at Asad's lips which makes him notice n he's thinking abt the same also...so now who's gonna initiate the kiss????
Superb Update

Originally posted by: mochhug

I should be furious. Another freaking cliffy. But alas, how can I? When you update so often and write so beautifully?

Zoya's ego and stubborness almost mirrors that of Asad's. Love it. OMG the last few lines had me inching closer and closer to the screen, and the you ENDED IT.

Please please please please update soon

You don't like it? Hmm, I remember you mentioning that earlier. But hey! You've made it this far. Once you have a degree, it's up to you what you wanna work in 😊

Originally posted by: rutu83

nahi nahi nahi pls don't chnage your plans...however you wanted to write please write it so. i absolutely love your writing yaar
not unhappy at all-- as a reader we love even this tadap

Originally posted by: -Aswini-

don change yur plan..:( but yo write so well so i don mind watever change yo make :P but pls update it soon 😆

Originally posted by: mariam1368

As if i know the kiss wont happen so soon
Asya are back to their bickering once again,Zoya's mind was only thinking abt the kiss n jst look at the way she's staring at Asad's lips which makes him notice n he's thinking abt the same also...so now who's gonna initiate the kiss????
Superb Update