#2||AsYa FF: Cupid Strikes (Chp 8 to Chp 12)

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: MjhtFan_Mahima


@ Mina Di
You are the reason I started this story. You have been there with me right from my first story. From a friend you have become my elder sister. I so love you.
And ofcourse you became a Sizzlerz today (5th AUG)


First of ALL.. CONGO FOR NEW THREAD! 🥳

Thank you baby sis! 🤗 I love you more! ❤️

You're the reason for My Stories and I'm the reason for yours! 😳

We have known each other for many years now and we shall be like this forever love!

SIZZLERS!!! 🥳

P.S.: I still damn hate the color!
Edited by -Mrinalini- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Fighting for the bed! 😆 Ain't that cute! 😳

OMG!! SMF ki Zoya Farooqui is scared of Cockroaches???

This man is not leaving any chance to tease her! Does he? 😉

The Best dialogues:

The mere thought of a cockroach on the bed made Zoya shiver with fear. She then grabbed Asad's arms swiftly and said "We can share the bed."

Asad raised his eyebrows and asked "You are more scared of a cockroach than any man sleeping next to you."

"You are not just any man" Zoya replied and forcefully made Asad sit on the bed.

Asad after settling down on the bed made direct eye contact with Zoya and asked "So you trust me?"

Zoya did not answer the question but her eyes spoke everything.

Asad, who wanted Zoya to admit it, got up from the bed and said "In that case I'll sleep on the floor."

"I am in the same room with you. I think that is an answer in itself"replied back Zoya and the proceeded to lie on the bed and turned her face to the side opposite to Zoya.

Asad probing further asked "Is that a yes?"

Zoya pretended to sleep and did not reply.

Asad sighed and sat down on the bed. He knew that Zoya was still awake and decided to prank her. He exclaimed "Oh my god. Cockroach on the bed."

Zoya hearing this swiftly got up and jumped on Asad's lap. She quivered with fear and asked "Where?"

Asad smirked at the success of his plan and said "Right here."

Zoya looked at Asad to see if he was pointing anywhere but she still couldn't see any cockroach. "I don't see it" spoke Zoya and her face was turning pale.

Asad chuckled at this and said "In my lap."

Zoya now understood that she had been played at. She was first upset and then went mad with rage. She started hitting Asad on the chest with her fists.

Asad immediately grabbed Zoya's hands and twisted them behind her back.

As a result they came closer to each other. They could clearly hear their own heart thumping in their chests. Then an eye contact was made and they both were lost in the moment. Zoya moved closer to Asad and their lips were now inches apart. This closeness was driving Asad crazy. He moved more close to Zoya and now just a little gap was left between their lips. Before they could close this distance, the wind outside made a loud swishing sound making Asad and Zoya aware of the position they were in.

Zoya quickly got up from Asad's lap and went to lie down on her side. She turned her face away from Asad so that he could not see her crimson red face.

Asad followed suit and lied on his side with his back towards Zoya.


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I read this ^^^ part again and again!!!

Oh shit!!!! Zoya almost died???? 😲

Asad saved her.. HURRAY!!!! And he is taking care of her!

Finally.. Ayaan knows about Zoya's feelings towards Asad! 😳 I'm lovin' it! ❤️

Oye Hoyye!!!! Asad Zoya ka haal behaal ho gaya ek doosre ke bina!!! 😳

He spoke aloud to no one in particular "Wish I could hear that voice every morning when I wake up."

She spoke to herself in a whisper "Wish I could see that face every morning when I wake up."

Wah! Kya baat hai! 👏 I'm eagerly waiting for the next chapter!

Ab I want KISS.. Pretty Please! *batting my eyelashes*

Love the whole update!

Love you heaps my baby sista! 🤗 ❤️


Continue soon! 😳

*hi five*

And now... listening to "Mitwaaa... Ishq pe zor Nahi!"
Edited by -Mrinalini- - 12 years ago
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R
im back...
*sobbing*
itnaaa pyaaarrr 😭 😭 😭
frnz 4eva... 😭😭😭😭 khushi ke aansu...
I LOVE U... ❤️ 🤗
AWWWIEEE wiinny poo hug... ☺️ 🤗
I LOVED IT... LOVED IT... LOVED...
thaaanx a ton yaaar... 🤗 🤗
CONGRATULATIONS 4 UR NEW THREAD... 😳 🤗
LETSSS PAARTYYY WOOOHHH 🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳
THS 1NS 4 U ... 😃
1nc again congo shhongo...
coming to d update...
man... I caaant tell u how glad I ws reading d update...
haaaye mela mangalpur...
awww u described it sooo beautifully...
I ws completely awestruck...
u did a marvelous job man... 👏👏👏👏
thr asad ws shouting zoya in pain ... n here I ws screaming in glee... 🤣
aww poor guy ktna maara... bt haaaye it ws damn filmy...
aahaaan ayaaan found it out... 😆
goood job... 👍🏼
I srsly hv no words to say how much I loved d update...
who kehte hain jab bolna chahiye tab bolti banda otherwise ol time bak bak... 😆
r8 now im a clear example... 🤣
well u gave me my mangalpur n I love u 4 tht... muuuah...
thaaanx 1nc again...
I LOVED IT...
Edited by LuvUAsYa1 - 12 years ago
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OMG! I just loved this update! It was so well written! Great, fantastic, brilliant job Mahima! 👏 👍🏼

The cockroach scene was too cute, the fight OMG, the cliff WHAT! , and the ending was just...!

Loved it! ❤️
Edited by Asya_Maaneet - 12 years ago
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Zabardast update!! 👏
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AGHHH!!!! THE LAST TWO PARAGRAPHS WERE TOOO ADORABLE!! NOW YOU SERIOUSLY HAVE TO UPDATE SOON! Oh my gosh! Oh my gosh! He teased her at the beginning with the cockroach and then Aiyaan says "cupid has struck you really hard!! Please please please! Please update soon! I can't wait to read more. Scratch that, I NEED TO READ MORE!!
Please update soon!



Edited by AWriterAtHeart - 12 years ago
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wow..congo 4 nw thread...dis chapter got me bak to mangalpur..thnks 4 such a long chapter
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the cliff part was really scary...
but the rest was so beautiful..
so finally zoya has admitted.. wah..wah..👏
and congrats for the 2nd thread..
update soon...

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