The wishlist...A Two Shot - Updt Part 3 in BLUE - Page 4

Just read both the parts and it was beautiful...i loved how asad got over his fears and consoled zoya on the terrace and mallika e dimples was so sweet...and the best part was asad's reaction to gaffur being zoya's father...i hope this happens in the serial too...i hope asad doesn't blame zoya and accepts her and her decision...beautifully written😊

Oh My Gosh! Mona dahling this was beautiful. You're a terrific writer girl. What a wonderful story! ❤️ 👍🏼

This was just so amazing...

Originally posted by: AsadkiDeewani

Really wonderful addition. I also thought it would go along similar lines but obviously you wove the thought into a beautiful story with your words and imagination

Thanks! :)

Originally posted by: immigreat54

brilliant writing. Is it the end? or u will continue?

I hope u do

I had wanted to stop at this, but I want to atleast add one more chapter on Zoya's turmoil. Not sure how to portray it yet.

Originally posted by: KambakthIshq

I wish Asad calls her Mallika-E-Dimples...awwwieee

I think this is exactly how Asad would react after knowing Gaffur's truth. Old Asad would have lost his temper but our new not emotionally challenged Asad would have to go through this heart break.

You have exceptionally captured Asad's dilema dearie

Simply beautiful Mona darling

Thanks! Even I wish he calls her that. Wouldn't it be cute. Like yesterday when he said, Mere Salman Khan... it was like so freaking super katil adorable.

Originally posted by: anushreemishra

Just read both the parts and it was beautiful...i loved how asad got over his fears and consoled zoya on the terrace and mallika e dimples was so sweet...and the best part was asad's reaction to gaffur being zoya's father...i hope this happens in the serial too...i hope asad doesn't blame zoya and accepts her and her decision...beautifully written

Thanks anushree. 🤗

Originally posted by: rajnid68

mesmerising update...

asad thoughts written aloud...

so now we await for zoyas turmoil..

in choosing between the two men in her life.

thanxs for the pm

Yes, you inspired me to write about Zoya's turmoil. Will do it this weekend, may be.