SS : I Married A Gangster. Note Page 42. :) - Page 10

Originally posted by: Sand_Princess

Do you know I love Mob stories. I write mob stories... I breathe mob stories.

I don't think I'll be able to write much with the amount of excitement I feel right now. I'm so happy that you are writing a MOB STORY! 😆 Zoya seems too afraid of her husband. I may be wrong, but was their marriage an arranged one? From what I read they have been together for a few months and mob bosses usually don't jump into relationships they know very little about... and he was 'in touch' with Tanveer before Zoya arrived... which was a few months ago. Honestly, Asad doesn't seem like the cheating type. He's ruthless, but greedy when it comes to his wife.

He's still in the honeymoon phase of their marriage while Zoya is overcoming it and seeing past the appearances. He HAS killed a lot of people, destroyed families... tortured them, but is he one to hurt her for her own good? Can he be so hopeless? I'm sure he has his reasons, but it just seems odd that he can turn on his own wife and go for the 'other woman' he shooed away.

Mind boggling. Let's hope for the best.

To tell you a secret... I have a similar scene written for a mob story of mine... I was shocked to read it. And I thought, WHOA, great minds think alike? 😃

Originally posted by: LuvUAsYa1

oh wow ths ws a good 1!
So asad is a gangster 4 d world bt love zoya! Wow!
I wonder wt happend tht he ws hurting zoya(refrng to prolouge)
looking 4ward to it!
Plz PM me if possible

Originally posted by: _Aaniya_

To hell with how you wanted it to turn out !!!
The chapter was ammaaazziiinnggg !!!! You get that ?
So I dont give a penny about your note below. :P

This is really one of the best thing I've read from you. Awesome portray of emotions ! And OMG ! So many of them in one update.

Your Asad is sooo full of... I dont know what !! Anger..? Love ? Possessiveness ? Passion ? Or what else do I call it ! :|

I just love the way you showed every emotion. The disgust when he spoke to Tanveer. The multiple range of emotions when he's around Zoya. I'm just speechless.

I just want to know more. Whats up with him actually. Why did he end up tying her ? Though he keeps telling it's for her, but there's really something fishy. :/

All in all, Awesome story. Awesome concept. Innovative and Intriguing.

Now its your responsibility to update regularly. Itna toh kar hi sakti ho ? See, I even came to read your story with such a long comment ! ;) Lol.

Love ya i*** ! :P :*

Originally posted by: AlwaysAsYa

I've been stalking your writing since before I joined the forum😆

Amazing update! I absolutely love theses kinds of stories! You have loads of talent 👏

Please continue soon 😳

Originally posted by: LyssaPie

At least he's not cheating on Zoya and is faithful and he did listen to her and went to the party

But uh oh now she's in trouble?

Originally posted by: ASYAFOREVER95

Does zoya noe asad is gangster?? And plzzz update sooon!!! IM ALREADY LOVING IT and also plz pm me with updates

Thnxx

Originally posted by: shivi17

Somebody gonna get a hurt real bad :( poor Zoya, the way the first part ended i am dam sure Asad is going to yell/ most likely hurt her..

Originally posted by: -HoneyBunch-

Oh ho..Zoya will surely have to deal with Asad's anger now!! I find this gangster Asad really interesting..He has so many shades to his character...He loves Zoya but at the same time also has her tamed!!

Great update!!