AsYa/KaBhi SS:Never Letting Go [06/04/2014 #KaBhi-VM &Note pg37]

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MissReadingFaye

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: -HoneyBunch-
Loved the flashback sequence..That should have happened in the show..
Also loved all of Zoya's words while she was feeding Asad..It was so heartfelt!!! I was just moved by that sequence..

Loved this update!! You are one amazing writer!!!

Thank you for taking the time to read & comment. 😳

Thank you for your sincere appreciation, your appreciation - for me that was heartfelt. ❤️

Keep smiling. 😃

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Edited by Ambreen83 - 12 years ago

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MissReadingFaye

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Posted: 12 years ago

#82

Originally posted by: Asya_Maaneet
"Zoya made his house a home. She adorned his home with laughter and joy and inundated every corner with her love." What a beautiful line! Can I please tell you that I read it over and over! Very well said! 👍🏼

"Oh-ho Mr Interruption Rok-tok Khan" squealed Zoya, "Sahee waqt ki koi bhi knowledge nahin hai aap ko ... OMG! I loved this 🤣

The whole part was so nice! I really enjoyed it! I can't wait to see what she does! 😃

Thank so much for the PM and great job yaar! 👏

I'm glad you liked it, thank you for appreciating my work. ❤️

And yes I like that nickname too. The idea for Mr Interruption Rok-tok Khan was inspired by my mother. I'm sure everyone has a little tendency to be abrupt every now and then, and especially with particular people, out of love not spite of course ... and I'm kinda like that, abrupt - I tend to rok-tok when my Mother is discussing things with me, politely of course. She calls me Miss Interruption Rok-tok [insert my surname here] ... but ever so cutely.

No worries. I will PM you the next update.

LoVe LoVe,

Fatima . L aka Ambreen

Edited by Ambreen83 - 12 years ago

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MissReadingFaye

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Posted: 12 years ago

#83

Originally posted by: Xarina
I just lurve, lurve, lurve the dialogues. How romantic were they? Thanks for the pm. Nice update.

It's my pleasure - that you loved the update.

A heartfelt thank you for your appreciation.

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Edited by Ambreen83 - 12 years ago

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Black.Jack

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Posted: 12 years ago

#84

oh another beautiful part, wonderfully written...

their banter ...adorable...

flashbacks... too good!

you are doing it nicely!

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MissReadingFaye

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: SaneWhispers
oh another beautiful part, wonderfully written...
their banter ...adorable...
flashbacks... too good!
you are doing it nicely!

Much appreciated and likewise I take pleasure in reading your work, it's awesome 🤗

Thank you 😳

LoVe LoVe

Fatima . L aka Ambreen