AsYa/KaBhi SS:Never Letting Go [06/04/2014 #KaBhi-VM &Note pg37]

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Posted: 12 years ago

#62

That was so Awesome!! Loved it ❤️

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Mahima

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Posted: 12 years ago

#63

Loved it

Awesome work

I loved the reasons Zoya gave

It was fantastic

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MissReadingFaye

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: mochhug
RES!

Seriously hun, I'm in awe. This was so beautifully describe. Their emotions, their feelings, their physical changes when the other is around. The flashback is more along the lines of what I wished had happened in the show. The show's scene was beautiful, but yours was amazinggg.

And her words when she's feeding him, MashAllah. I have no words to tell you how much you moved me. I felt like I was Asad, I was that touched.

Their banter was equally adorable.

Seriously, now I'm a little intimidated to write mine LOL. Your's is mind blowingly good. Seriously. 🤗

Please don't be intimated. I don't bite lol.

You are an awesome writer, articulate and you make the characters come to life, for me ❤️ and I mean that from the bottom of my heart.

I wanted to make things a little more embellished & personal hence I poured my heart into it and put parts of my diary from a few years back into part 2, so it was a little personal on that part.

As for writing their banter and dialogues etc for me that was challenging. I found that difficult. 😳

Hence the delay in writing. Thank you for your appreciation.

LoVe LoVe

Fatima . L aka Ambreen

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Edited by Ambreen83 - 12 years ago

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princee

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Posted: 12 years ago

#65

good one..thnks 4 d pm

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MissReadingFaye

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Posted: 12 years ago

#66

I love you all & thank you for taking the time to read this.

As for Gru, on a completely unrelated note, every time I typed 'Chaand' this is what was running through my mind because I'm weird like that. Not that I expect Asad to steal a shrink ray and then steal the moon for his lady love. I just really couldn't stop myself from making a reference to & posting Gru here. 😳

Ps I LoVe yOu ALL

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starsinmyeyes

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Posted: 12 years ago

#67

Ambreen..Thank u so much for the PM...firstly I would like to compliment you on your command over the English language..it's absolutely brilliant..and this story is amazing...👏

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MissReadingFaye

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: starsinmyeyes
Ambreen..Thank u so much for the PM...firstly I would like to compliment you on your command over the English language..it's absolutely brilliant..and this story is amazing...👏

You're making me crimson red on the other side of the screen, thank you ❤️.

I think you are far more creative and talented than I am, I've seen some of your work, and your VM's. They are awe-inspiring. 👏