AsYa/KaBhi SS:Never Letting Go [06/04/2014 #KaBhi-VM &Note pg37] - Page 12

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Oh my I honestly have no words to explain the beauty of your writing. it's simply PERFECT. I am so sad that I hadn't read the part 2 till now, but now I have & i'm glad that I got to read it. thanx a tin for the pm..
this whole story had cast a spell around me, taken me to AsYa land. Gosh, how romantic & heart touching gestures by Zoe. she seriously proved her undying & intensifying love for Asad. it's was so wonderful to see both of them making plans to make the day beautiful for the other.
the part where Zoe asks Asad to forget about the past & look forward to their future & then her circles around Asad mentioning about all the close encounters they've had were my favorites.
Now this last part where you've ended the update is really intriguing, what was Zoe trying to say, obviously something romantic, Asad is getting tensed for no reason.
Cont soon sweets.
Love.
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Posted: 12 years ago
This was so beautifully written 👏
Loved it 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome..

zoya is so cute...😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice story. Plz continue soon
pm me if possible...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Ambreen83


Thank you for your appreciation Shruti and thank you for the link to your VMs.

They are amazing, you are so talented 👏.

x


Thank you😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
AWESOME story! <333
Please update soon!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: kritz4ever

what is that envelop abt ?

n happy for the update after very long time


Apologies for the delay in updating, I was away for a while.
Thank you for your appreciation and as for the envelope - you'll have to wait for the next part 😉


Ambreen

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: MjhtFan_Mahima

ok

this was a bit scary

the last part

but totally loved everything else

teasing and all


Than you for your beautiful words and I wanted to leave a lot of uncertainties as far as the plot goes because then it would be a sickeningly far too sweet a story of lovers, a bit of mystery and thrill just to keep you all on edge 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Asya-Rm

Ohho! Stupid Zoya fir bhag gayi! 😆
Givin unnecessary worries to poor Asad 😕


Cont soon 😃


Zoya is the world class champion at running away lol 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Rarepearl

Oh my I honestly have no words to explain the beauty of your writing. it's simply PERFECT. I am so sad that I hadn't read the part 2 till now, but now I have & i'm glad that I got to read it. thanx a tin for the pm..

this whole story had cast a spell around me, taken me to AsYa land. Gosh, how romantic & heart touching gestures by Zoe. she seriously proved her undying & intensifying love for Asad. it's was so wonderful to see both of them making plans to make the day beautiful for the other.
the part where Zoe asks Asad to forget about the past & look forward to their future & then her circles around Asad mentioning about all the close encounters they've had were my favorites.
Now this last part where you've ended the update is really intriguing, what was Zoe trying to say, obviously something romantic, Asad is getting tensed for no reason.
Cont soon sweets.
Love.


I am happy that you took the time out to read parts 2 & 3 and thank you, truly - for your kind and soul moving words. My pleasure that you feel spellbound by the plot, that is the response I hope to evoke. P.s. I sent a link of my blog to my mother and she simply laughed down the phone at me for a good 5 minutes, well she means well hopefully lol.

Thank you,

Fatima aka Ambreen

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